
Junior Brother Linghu, Stand Farther Away. Senior Brother Will Show No Mercy Under the Sword.
令狐师弟站远些,师兄剑下不容情
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- Completed
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- 1.3M Words
- Genre
- Martial Arts
- Subgenre
- Male-Channel Fanfiction
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 2mo ago
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- Fanqie
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Are There Any Fine Books? the Kind That Gets More and More Obvious the More You Look at It.
This Book Shocked Half of Tomato Douyin. It's Very Cool...
The book "Super God of War Order" is very interesting
Asking For•henglian•golden Bell Cover•iron Cloth Shirt•vajra Indestructible Category
Asking for•Henglian•Golden Bell Cover•Iron Cloth Shirt•Vajra Indestructible Category
Break the Information Cocoon and Hand over All the Good Books in Your Bookshelves to Me!
Don't look at the ratings! Don't look at the ratings! Don't look at the ratings! Say important things three times! ! ! A high score does not necessarily mean a good book, and a good book does not necessarily mean a high score. Publish all the books you think are good, preferably those with more than one million words or more than one million words completed.
Comprehensive Martial Arts, the Martial Arts Are Paiyun Palm, Tianshuang Fist, and Fengshen Kick.
The Book Is of High Quality and Tastes Good. It Is Also Necessary to Suppress the Works of God.
The Martial Arts Novel Is Engaging and Engaging.
For Jin Yong's Martial Arts, It Is Best to Be an Orphan or a Spoiled Child from a Martial Arts Sect.
A time-traveling Jin Yong martial arts story with no female protagonist or a single female protagonist.
The Protagonist Starts to Evolve from a Small Animal (Without a Heroine)
Is any of the main characters a small animal? Then it evolved into a very powerful animal, but without a heroine? Note: Modern Blue Star, evolved from spiritual energy recovery
Traveling Through Time with the Breathing Method (Demon Slayer: Kimetsu No Yaiba), or the Skill Is the Breathing Method
Don't travel to the world of Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, the plot is still uninteresting.
Self-Created Training System, High Quality, No Harem.
I want to read books like "Becoming a God: Starting from Building the Endless Abyss".
Comprehensive Martial Arts, Storyteller, the Protagonist Acquires Martial Arts Abilities from All over the World
**Inn, if you don't enter the world, the world will be in chaos
🍅Are There Any Good Mixed Martial Arts or Martial Arts Fans? Jin Yong, Gu Long
Articles on Entrepreneurial Finance Internet Investment and Entrepreneurship Around 2000
Reborn entrepreneurial investment article, IQ must be online! Don't let the main plot be about falling in love!
The Protagonist Has a Charismatic Personality, Has Brains, and Doesn't Want to Be a Crazy Protagonist.
Are There No Long Weapons in the Martial Arts World, Such as Halberds and Spears?
The Protagonist Is a Salty Fish in the World of Martial Arts and Mixed Martial Arts
Sign-in system, fishing system, salted fish system, life system, you can sign in with high gestures, treasures, modern daily necessities, and portable space. The harem is huge. It can make up for many regrets. It is the kind of CP that can be completely dismantled. Recruit girls decisively. Do not confiscate hundreds of chapters.
Looking for High-Quality Urban Cultivation Writing
Think about a story in which the protagonist cultivates in a modern city in a low profile and gradually reveals his strength. Similar to the style of "Cultivation Chat Group", with a bit of comedy in daily life and a relaxed pace. The protagonist's IQ is online.
Urban Cultivation, Is There Any Gao Wushuangwen?
I want to see content similar to "It's really not my abstraction, it's the system that gives me too much". I would like to see something like this, with a system, academy cultivation, and multiple female protagonists





















































































The plot is unhurried, the logic is clear, and it has its own opinions and ideas, which are very accurate. It will not follow the trend of Bai Yuebuqun or follow the trend of Baiyanlang like those on the Internet who have no language. I feel like it hasn't looked as good since Peach Blossom Valley.
For a true hero, no words, no setting, no moves, no style are all false. The true meaning of martial arts novels has always been the unyielding chivalrous bone that touches the deepest part of Chinese romance!
The structure is novel and the two world texts are embedded in the golden book. The story is very innovative. The characters have distinct personalities. Leader Yue, Ning Nvxia, Pig's Feet, Monitor, and Teacher Li are all vivid and fleshed out. Nowadays, most online articles are based on facial expressions of character settings, and the plot is cool. When the tiger's body is shaken or the system is signed in, the domineering side leaks out, but it misses one thing. The novel is centered on shaping the character of the characters. The author's writing style is sophisticated and smooth, and must be recommended.
It's really good. It's a martial arts novel about a boy from another world who travels across the earth. It's the same modern era, but it's a collision between different cultural backgrounds. The golden finger is not that big. The disadvantage is that campus life is not very real now. The author may not have studied engineering graduate school. Engineering professors generally don't even know the classmates in their classes, so how can they pay attention to who is the first in the major...
Nice! More inclined to the growth stream of double penetration The protagonist is not dead, and does not know the plot (the setting does not appear in Jin Yong's novels), but he has the technological bonus brought by double-travelling, his practice speed is fast, and the protagonist's own understanding and learning ability are also extremely strong. The plot is about 15 years before the start of "Swordsman". At present, it is the route of rescuing Lao Yue and rescuing Lin Pingzhi, who slaps Dongfang Bubai/Zuo Lengchan/Shaolin Wudang hypocrite in the face. There are no poisonous points so far, but the cool points include but are not limited to: Double-traveling has internal skills to kill everyone in modern times, improved internal skills have made rapid progress in ancient times, the protagonist is extremely capable of learning swordsmanship, internal skills and medicine, and can restore the "Six Meridians Divine Sword" through the fragments (there may even be "Beiming Divine Skills" in the future), decisively kill and abuse the Six Immortals of Peach Valley, etc.
This book is very good, mainly because the three views are very correct, the author's thoughts are not shallow, and his writing style is not naive. For other books, the recommendation reviews are mostly polite, complimentary, and exaggerated, but this book is really recommended. The low rating is really a problem with the rating system.
This is called "three correct views". The understanding of nature, the understanding of society, and the understanding of self are complete and profound. It is very proficient in gold studies and even traditional culture, and the plot is smooth. It can be regarded as a top-notch entertainment novel. The shortcoming is that the waves are a little flat, there is no heroic spirit of being proud of the world, and maybe it has not fully unfolded. Very much looking forward to it! Thank you author.
It's a good time-travel martial arts novel. I caught up on the latest in one night. Generally speaking, the writing quality is a bit poor compared to the popular "Sword Out of Hengshan", but the analysis of martial arts skills and the description of the world are still very interesting and worth looking forward to. I hope the author will continue to work hard and update it.
The male protagonist has a very good personality, and does not have the sleazy and obscene feeling of most male protagonists. The plot revolves around the original plot line of Xiaoao, and the addition of the male protagonist completely changes the direction of the original plot. It is a fanfic that I love to read. Some fanfics are completely divorced from the original plot and characters as they are written, and it seems like an original.
A rare good book by a fan. I started reading online articles in the early 2000s and am an advanced reader. A high-quality read of Mr. Jin's novel. This book has no mindless divisions between nature and nurture, no simple upgrades to defeat monsters, and no vulgar pretentious promotion of girls. The author has done some research on Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism, and his writing style is quite good in the current environment. The character's personality is greatly extended based on Xiaoao. It's a good novel
After reading the current update, I feel that the text is very smooth, the plot is relatively light and flowing, and it is indeed very different from ordinary martial arts. At present, I feel that there is not much poisonous point, but it is a bit lacking. The above are all personal opinions
The writing is good. Why are there so few people reading it? It's too bland and not enjoyable enough. The author will give it a few more months to write and just start a new book. Don't create fan fiction and just edit it yourself. The writing is good. Believe in yourself and you can do it.
The five-star rating is mainly due to the silky smooth transitions. It can be seen that it is a master of hand rubbing and the AI is rarely used. Time travel, one soul and two bodies, switch bodies while sleeping, bring your own body repair device, and use the resources of the two worlds to complement each other. Create a big data construction method, the effect is similar to the Dugu Nine Swords. The Dugu Nine Swords requires understanding, while the big data swordsmanship does not require understanding and is suitable for the inheritance of the sect. The brothers in Huashan have a harmonious relationship. As the eldest brother, he is a disciple himself. He has upright views and a broad mind. He is a family member of the Five Sacred Mountains. He is decisive in killing, he likes to teach others, and he also likes to help others look good. The disguised vest Nan Shao Mo uses to do dirty work. Later, a little story of Tianlong was interspersed.
The subject matter is novel and the writing is fluent, especially the collision of martial arts and mathematical data. The thinking is clever and the author has good control. However, switching back and forth can easily cause a certain amount of confusion, but everything is good.
It's very interesting to watch, and the martial arts flavor is very strong, just like when I watched Jin Yong. It's interesting to cross the two worlds and learn from each other's strengths. The discussion of the mathematical model and computer algorithm to optimize the efficiency of the operation is also very exciting. The main theme is scientific martial arts training, haha. The images of the masters in both worlds are well created, respectable and cute. Good looking, good looking, good looking. Wow, the martial arts style is great. It brings back the feeling I had when watching Jin Yong. At the same time, the modern part is also awesome. The male protagonist leads a team to conduct scientific research on human meridians of traditional Chinese medicine, sells curative health care products to achieve financial freedom, is also a hidden martial arts master in the city, and has a caring and beautiful talented class monitor as his girlfriend. They are all mentioned in one stroke, but I have already seen how exciting this kind of life is. Some people say that the proportion of modern chapters is too small, but this is called a detailed summary. This is a martial arts book rather than a book about internal martial arts masters in the city, and there are also voice-over comments about the collision of ideas from the two worlds, which are all super interesting haha.
The author's writing seems a bit familiar, a bit like Xiaoao Zhihuashan from the starting point many years ago. It's just that the writing style is a bit similar, but the plot and other things are different. The writing is very good.
She has a very upright outlook on life and is very affectionate with her modern girlfriend. There is nothing wrong with staring at the female character. The protagonist is very open-minded and capable. The author has deep thinking, writes seriously, reasonably and not abruptly, and the plots have climaxes one after another.
There is a lot of hardcore knowledge in it. About Taoist Chinese Medicine. Yeah, but I have to say the writing is really good. The story is also well told. There is no assembly line plot, and the time span is relatively stable, but if he writes it like this, I don't think it will last long. Maybe more than 300 chapters, maybe 400 chapters and it will be finished.
This is one of the most interesting novels among Swordsman fans. In it, you can travel to Tianlong through the real plane. There is no immortality, only hard work. In a dimension without Jin Yong, the protagonist does not know the plot but becomes the best in the world through hard work.
Don't be fooled by the score, it shouldn't be only 8 points. It is one of the few novels in Tomato that is readable. There are no common sense errors or stupid descriptions. After reading the novel for more than 20 years, this is pretty good. As long as the author doesn't write too much, it can be considered a masterpiece.
This is a good book, and it's not a copy of the original plot. The characters are also good, and Huashan School is very warm.
I read it so fast that I still want to read it after it is over. The author must not stop updating it! !
My favorite Huashan sect, my favorite Yue Buqun, my favorite Linghu Chong, my favorite brothers and sisters, thank you to the author, it was fate that allowed us to meet, I hope the author can continue to persevere and never update
Stick to Chapter 175, there will be a surprise! At first, it seemed a bit awkward that there was no collection of Jin Yong's works in the world setting, but the author was able to justify it! Never expected it, amazing👍🏻
This novel is so well written, I think it might as well be made into a TV series. How about calling it "The Swordsman" [laughing evilly]
It's a bit slow, no poisonous points, no simple and crude improvement and adventure. The protagonist grows up step by step. It's very detailed. It's a good book.
It's really beautiful, a fusion of rationality and sensibility.
Overall, it's good. It has a strong sense of martial arts, exciting fights, and the plot is not very procrastinating. However, the world of Swordsman feels a bit small. I don't know how it will be completed in the future. Although there is a plot of time-travelling from both sides, I feel that the modern plot is a bit tasteless. I look forward to the follow-up.
Seeing that I can now give it 10 points, it can be said to be the best novel written by Tomato fans. It has no flaws and the logic is very smooth. It's just that the ancient and modern setting is a bit confusing [face covering]. I hope the author will continue to maintain After reading it, I will give it a total of 9.5 Points. As expected of Tomato Swordsman, the most interesting fan in the Jianghu genre [laughing]
This novel is one of the best mixed martial arts novels I have read on the Internet. The writing and plot are good. Except for the two novels about Tianlong, which are a bit disconnected, the others are very good. The quality of this novel is not inferior at the starting point. Unfortunately, the updates are unstable, maybe because the income is too low. It is really a pity. I hope that the quality can be maintained and I will send you a small gift to express my appreciation. The perfect hero character in my mind is Hongmao. He has superb martial arts skills, can punish and eliminate evil, has compassion for the weak, is affectionate and righteous without being pedantic. I have been reading books for 16-7 years. I have read at least 400+ novels and have read more There are countless of them, and there are very few protagonists who are portrayed as rainbow cats. I saw the shadow of rainbow cats in the protagonist of this novel. Although the plot has a few flaws, it does not affect the viewing. The author can continue to create and finish it.