Travel Through the World of Immortals and Become an Emperor for Eternity First

I read Chapter 217 from Chapter 1 in one day. It was very enjoyable. It is a masterpiece with a low score. I feel that the rhythm is very good. There is no procrastination or sloppy feeling. Soon, the protagonist does everything with brains and purpose. In order to return to the top, he will The most rational understanding is to seek the greatest benefit, and the writing is also very good. There is no sense of the brainless protagonist randomly taking opportunities or losing opportunities. My self-perception score is 8.5 To 9.3. So far, there are no poisonous points or poor logic. Evaluation: It should be fantasy + multiple female protagonists + decisive killing + brainy + low score masterpiece + clear logic. (Only my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it) I beg the author to persevere, and all my love will go to the author. [Cry][cry][cry]

The top players are practicing the trumpet again, and it feels like watching the full-time masters back in the day. The protagonist is reborn in the game world with top-notch technology. He knows the plot and strategies for various bosses well, and his strategy is also top-notch. Very excellent work

I'm writing a book review in support of Lao Bai. I've been reading it since it was about a hundred chapters in. Lao Bai's book still uses the usual information gap and the protagonist's high-intelligence routine, which makes it comfortable to read. [Laugh][laugh][laugh] I also read the book reviews. Some readers feel that the protagonist is trying to support himself in the early stage and does not have the strength to pretend. First of all, I think Lao Bai's books are all slow-burning. The road becomes clearer as you go further. It is normal to be difficult in the starting stage. In the later stage, the continuous accumulation of resources will naturally make the journey smooth. Then, in reality, there are many such situations. It is common for companies to go public, company financial reports, and risk control to deceive investors. They use completely non-existent data to deceive investors, and some even cheat. They rely on strong eloquence, market acumen, and psychological quality. Many of them fail, and some of them succeed. Of course, I think it is still very good. Lao Bai's books are difficult to agree on, but I still hope that everyone can give some support to Lao Bai. Even if the books he wrote are not to my liking, they are rigorous in writing and logically reasonable [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]

I just read the beginning of "Ten Thousand Rebirths" and found that the writing is really good. I read the comments in it and said that a new book has been released, so I followed it and read it. I don't know why the score is so low, but the overall flow is good and the logic is clear. It is more exciting than many high-scoring books on Tomato.

There are currently 80 reviews with only one negative review, so why is it only rated 6.8? This book is another new category opened by the author. The author's writing skills are still stable and the writing is really good. I read it from another book of the author. If this kind of writing style does not score 7 on Tomato, then there are no good books to read on Tomato.

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I give you a good review and hope you write it seriously. It's getting better and better.

I have read basically every book by Fang Yebai. The writing is so damn good, the protagonist is really wild and arrogant, and the plot is full of ups and downs. It can be said that these books all have the ability to establish the school. Fang Yebai can be called the peak of tomatoes. It's just that in Fang Yebai's books, all the protagonists are so perfect that they lose some sense of reality and accessibility. In my personal opinion, I think Fang Yebai has already mastered the writing of "Shuang", but if the uncertainty of fate can be added to the article in the future, and the protagonist is still busy in this uncertainty, then I think the level of "Shuang" will be even higher. Just like Zhuge Liang, there are always mistakes in his life. This imperfection will be the finishing touch [like] to such an excellent and refreshing article. @

Lao Bai's first fairy tale novel is very good. Different from the intellectual style of the previous urban novels, this book focuses more on describing innovative settings and fairy tale scenes in fantasy novels. To be honest, I really wanted to read the future settings, but it was cut in half. The writing style has also changed a lot. It is a unique Chinese style of white space. I didn't know you were so cultured, Lao Bai. The overall plot is good. The opening scene of "Skillful Killing of Bandits" is very good. Especially the scenes of chasing down the three little bosses are very beautiful and the writing is excellent. And in my opinion, the writing style of the two plots "Death of Salamander" and "Death of Li Zhaotian" are the highlights of the book. The emotions and pictures are top-notch, so I won't go into details. But one thing is that all the main plots are pushed, which makes the main plot push very quickly, which leads to fast upgrades in a short period of time. Later, fighting monsters in the plot is just like playing. Also because the upgrade was too fast, some early foreshadowings were hastily made, such as the three-year agreement between Li Hu and Bai Yue. This is also Lao Bai's urinary behavior and he won't develop some branch lines for entertainment😒 There is also the hardest hit area of Lao Bai - the emotional drama between men and women, oh my god. This time, interests were mixed into the emotion, and not enough pen and ink was used to carefully portray the male protagonist in the early stage. The identity image was inconsistent with what he was doing, which made the emotional line this time complicated and smelly in the early stage. Because of this, I almost gave up twice. Fortunately, there are not many emotional scenes in the early stage and there are no such serious poisonous points in the later stage. Overall, in my opinion, the few shortcomings are this and the later stage, which is a bit bland. But overall it looks pretty good, with the flavor and excitement of Lao Bai [Love]

I have read several of the author's books. The plot is compact and the protagonist's IQ is online. The writing is also good, but I don't know why it hasn't been popular.

I have always liked reading Lao Bai's books. I don't know what's going on lately. I don't feel anything about any of the novels I read. Some of them are quite interesting, but I just can't stand them. I still like Lao Bai's books. It looks great, why is the rating so low?

I have read every book by Lao Bai. This fantasy book is also very interesting. After reading it, I will have a withdrawal reaction and a trance-like feeling. I don't know if you understand it.

It's so beautiful, it can't be rated so low

It's so beautiful, why is the rating so low?

At first glance, Shuangwen is full of simulators, which are not as good-looking as Lao Bai's ones.

This book scores 6.6? ? ? ! ! ! It's totally inconsistent. I caught up to the end in one go. I'm a nine-year-old bookworm. This book is definitely a rare book on Tomato! The key is that I found out that the author writes five chapters a day, hahaha! I was so addicted to another book that I read two chapters a day, and I read five chapters so much [I'm full]

It's good to read, and more interesting than the previous urban novels. It's just too little to read in one sitting. By the way, I hope you won't drive high and go low [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

I created the world

There are still some things.

Lao Bai's book has been rated high.

Lao Bai's new book, support and support. Lao Bai must not finish his fantasy novel this time! ! !

It's beautiful. It's rare to see such excellent grain and grass. It's so handsome. Wudiwen

It looks good. Laobai's product must be a high-quality product.

Starting from the first book, the author's writing is really not bad, but why is it so lukewarm?

Looks good, supports Lao Bai

Like first and then view, it has become a habit

Very good, there are no big logical problems so far

I hope it is just a purely political marriage, without the reality of husband and wife, and the protagonist is determined to reach the top.

I hope it won't poison me like the first two books [angry][angry] Save money: There is no mess this time, you can eat with confidence [Like]

[Facepalm] I just said that the more I read this book, the more I became interested in it. When I opened the author's homepage, it turned out that I am an old acquaintance. No wonder the more I read this book, the more interesting it became.