Farm Game: The Myriad Worlds

I looked at it carefully and there is really something there! In particular, the setting of "the game of cultivating immortals is a cage for breeding strange monsters" is amazing. It makes people want to know the truth behind it from the beginning - the man in black robe causing global mutation, the mysterious mark on Wang Fei's arm, these suspense are buried particularly well, and they are much more interesting than those routine stories where monsters are defeated and upgraded at the beginning. Moreover, the life-like scenes you wrote are particularly poignant. When Wang Fei comes home, his mother picks him up on a small electric donkey, his father cooks braised pork, and he and He Shang compete for small steamed buns and argue with each other. As soon as these details come out, the character comes to life instantly. He is not a cold tool for cultivating immortals. It feels like there is such a person beside him. Later, he wants to "break fate and save his family." I feel a little bit immersed in it. Another little surprise is Wang Fei's talent design. "Deprivation" fixes the loss of 1/3 of blood and space teleportation. It is powerful and has a sense of control. In the chapter of killing the level 6 BOSS in Chapter 5, from being chased to counter-killing, it was quite enjoyable to watch. I can feel that you are paying great attention to the plot tension. It might be smoother with a little adjustment: For example, in the early stage of returning home, the plot of packing your luggage and watching short dramas can be a little more streamlined. Entering the game server earlier and the main storyline of talent awakening can make the rhythm more focused; there are also skill panels and talent rules, such as "Deprivation is based on the upper limit of blood volume to calculate damage", but It is more natural to let Wang Fei and He Shang talk about it through dialogue when trying out talents than to directly post text instructions. In addition, Wang Fei's talents are a bit too powerful now. Small restrictions can be quietly added later (such as a long cooldown of teleportation and a weakened effect on high-level monsters), so that there will be no pressure to fight monsters in the later period, and there will be less tension. What you are most looking forward to is the main line of "the heavens resist the strange demons". If there are some small foreshadowings in the early stage of the game (such as NPC saying strange words, BOSS props with some strange demon patterns), it will definitely be more explosive when the curtain is unveiled later! In general, this story has both a big anti-conventional setting and small details that support the story. It can be seen that you calmed down and wrote Wang Fei's story, which is completely different from the first time you wrote it! Keep up this pace, it will definitely get better and better in the future. I am waiting to see how Wang Fei exposes the Ascension scam and leads everyone to defeat the strange monsters. Come on!

Like a cup of tea that needs to be savored carefully, it is dull at first but becomes more mellow in the aftertaste. The narrative rhythm is steady, the foreshadowing and the explosion are intertwined, and the relaxation is moderate. Multiple narrative lines go hand in hand, and are ultimately perfectly intertwined, showing a grand story pattern. It was a hearty reading feast with a relaxed and relaxed pace that made me unable to put down the book.

This is the first time I read an article on this subject. From the introduction, I can tell that the story is very exciting. The language of the article is humorous, and the life scenes in the chapters are very realistic and full of life, such as the scenes of a family having fun and their thoughts on the New Year. My feelings about life are very comprehensive. Of course, it can also be seen that the author has a rich imagination and the plot arrangements are just right. The descriptions of every aspect of the game are very immersive and worth a read. (I have never read this type of article before, so that's all I can comment on for now)

The author's writing skills are also quite online. The plot is as compact as interlocking gears, from farm management to traveling to the heavens. The rhythm is refreshing and not procrastinating; the details are described in detail, whether it is the numerical value of the game interface or the customs and customs of different worlds. , Can make readers instantly immerse themselves in it; the character creation is even more vivid and three-dimensional. For example, Wang Fei mentioned in the review, who is sinister, has a high IQ and has a bit of "gou" character, is vividly portrayed in the game of the heavens, and every layout is amazing.

The setting of "Farm Game: All Worlds" is superb! Game invasion collides with fantasy cultivation, and the element of soul penetration adds color. The protagonist brings the will of the people to fight against the rule of darkness, and the plot is compact and exciting. The slow-paced narrative does not drag on, and although the update time is a little short, it has unlimited potential. It is an imaginative masterpiece that should not be missed!

It's very interesting. This novel starts with the setting of "the game of cultivating immortals is a cage for breeding strange monsters". The man in black robe causes global mutation, and the mysterious mark on the protagonist Wang Fei's arm is full of suspense, far beyond the traditional monster-fighting and upgrading routines. The life-like details are a highlight. His mother rides an electric donkey to pick him up from the station, his father cooks braised pork, and he fights with his friends over grabbing xiaolongbao. This makes Wang Fei get rid of the label of "a tool for cultivating immortals" and is very realistic. Looking forward to the follow-up of the main plot of "the heavens resist strange demons", I believe that the subsequent mystery will be even more shocking. The whole thing is full of sincerity and worth updating!

The most amazing thing about this book is that the game of cultivating immortals is the core setting of the alien monster breeding cage. The opening chapter throws out suspense such as the man in black robe causing global mutation, the mysterious mark on the arm of the protagonist Wang Fei, etc. It is like a big net that firmly grasped my curiosity. The pattern and creativity are far beyond ordinary online game articles. Not only that, the author also pays great attention to details. Life-like scenes such as Wang Fei's mother riding a small electric donkey to pick him up when he came home, and grabbing steamed dumplings with his friend He Shang made the character instantly come alive and full of fireworks. It was these down-to-earth descriptions that gave me a strong sense of involvement in Wang Fei's mission to break fate and save his family. The talent deprivation and space teleportation of the protagonist are designed to be strong and operational, especially the plot of Chapter 5, in which the boss is overstepped and killed. The tension from the embarrassed escape to the desperate counterattack is very refreshing, which shows that the author has very good control over the rhythm of the plot. Of course, if we strive for excellence, I think some of the daily plots in the early stages of the novel can be more streamlined, allowing players to enter the main line of game server opening and talent awakening more quickly; if the explanation of skill rules can be displayed naturally through character dialogue, it will be smoother than directly listing panel text. In addition, Wang Fei's talent currently seems to be too powerful. Perhaps some restrictions such as a long cooling time or diminishing effect on high-level monsters can be added to ensure the challenge and tension in the later stages of the story. What I'm most looking forward to is the unfolding of the main plot of the heavens' resistance against strange demons. If some foreshadowing can be quietly buried in the early game content - such as a meaningful line from the NPC, or the weird lines on the items dropped by the BOSS - then when the truth is revealed later, the shock will be even stronger. All in all, this is a work with a grand setting and full of details, with both anti-conventional ideas and sincere emotions. You can feel that the author is carefully imagining Wang Fei's story, and it doesn't look like a novice's work at all! I will continue to follow the updates and can't wait to know how Wang Fei will expose the ascension scam and lead everyone to fight against the strange demons. Come on, author, I am very optimistic about the follow-up development! The writing is sophisticated, the concept is exquisite, and the sense of substitution is strong. Highly recommended.

The author sets the scene based on the concept of the game. This setting is very unique. In addition, the plot is compact and exciting. The author's writing style is very good, and the description of many details is very delicate. It is worth reading. I highly recommend it!!!

This is an interesting novel that combines multiple themes. The setting is quite interesting. The author obviously has a good understanding of the numerical balance of the game, so that the combat power will not collapse! The character creation is also very good, the roles are clear, the protagonist is likable, the writing is smooth, and the plot is fascinating. It is worth reading! Five-star praise!

This book is amazing! Once I opened it, I couldn't stop, as if I was hooked. The people in it write very realistically, and the writing style is pretty good for a novice. Sometimes there are some clips that make my heart feel warm and a little emotional, and this feeling lingers for several days. Seriously, I haven't come across such a delightful novel in a long time! However, the details of the plot still need to be slowly polished. Come on! It's so cool, especially in the later soul-piercing stage, Wang Fei is so evil! High IQ! Gou. The characterizations are very vivid, the plot is amazing, and it's a beautiful piece! Highly recommended!!!!