High Martial: I Became Her Shattered Self, and Got Stronger by Allocating Points

It's very interesting to read, and it combines the excitement of male videos with the delicate emotional lines of female videos. The author has a good outlook on life, and the supporting characters are all intelligent. However, I hope that the heroine will not be assimilated in the later stages of writing. He is neither Li Wei nor Jiang Xue. He is the Li Wei who grew up in an orphanage but worked hard to live. He could sacrifice himself for his younger brother and live to die to save others in dangerous situations. He should shine brightly, instead of becoming Mrs. Gu or the spoiled wife. He should be wonderful as both a man and a woman. So, no matter what, don't let the heroine become a love brain

In conclusion, the shortcomings do not hide the good points, and I look forward to better things in the future. The inside of the mirror is too long. I haven't finished reading it, so I don't know what its significance is to the main plot. Anyway, the copy time is almost as long as the previous main plot, which is boring. It's even better to just cut off this big part of the plot and use a fast-paced fantasy to draw out this Bodhisattva. The previous ones are very good, except for "Who Else" and "I Forgot Something Similar". Perhaps the author likes this kind of thing, which is similar to Brother Tiger's Competence with Me. I don't like it, and then he keeps emphasizing that "I" have a strong sense of separation between men and women. It is normal for 30 years > 18 years after the fusion of memories, and the fusion time is not long, but I keep emphasizing that it is not unnatural. The writing is very fluent, the plot connection is natural, and it feels good when I am happy. There are many interesting jokes, the fights are decisive and not angry, the protagonist is clear, the supporting characters have a good outlook on life, the characters are well-written, and the emphasis is on positive energy, rather than highlighting the dark side of society, because it cannot be changed if it is highlighted. I like the spirit of emphasizing positive energy like Hengqu's four sentences, and the emotional aspects of the characters are created very well👍🏻, especially through some small details to catch the readers' hearts. For example, when it rains, you protect your brother from the rain, and when you leave, you are reluctant to look back at your brother every step of the way. I like these very much. Compared with the previous two reviews, the summary is that the flaws do not hide the advantages. Give four stars

Looks good! ! ! Anyway, it's a cool novel. I really like it. I like it very much. The female (male) protagonist also has a non-procrastinating character! ! It's not the Holy Mother. She does it when it's time to do it. Although the things mentioned about her brother may make people think that she is a Holy Mother, but I don't think so. Taking over someone else's body has to do something, otherwise the protagonist's outlook will not make us like it. And the things she has to pay for her brother are also the way for her to improve her strength! So I think there is nothing wrong with this [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] Finally, I hope to pay more attention to my health. Although I really want to read new chapters, my health is the most important! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's wonderful, I like it very much. The male and female protagonists have upright views and have family and country ethics. I like it. By the way, I read some comments saying that the male protagonist may not be as strong as the female protagonist and is not worthy of her. In what age is this, why is there still this feudal idea that men must be stronger than women? ? It's just a male channel's novel that men are better than women, but a female channel actually thinks the same way, alas, I'm speechless.

⭐Five-star marriage text. The pace is fast, the ups and downs are similar to invincible writing, and the writing style tends to be lively and humorous. The author is highly efficient when writing about the entanglements between various forces, and is not sloppy. He can quickly return to the perspective of the protagonist. The overall look and feel is very comfortable. The characters of "male and female protagonists" are all for the purpose of "changing marriage". (The flaw at the beginning is that there is no theme first, which leads to subsequent negative reviews from some non-audience groups) ⭐Goldfinger (core of plot design): Goldfinger needs to rely on killing monsters to gain points, combined with the theme of "changing marriage", the plot design idea is roughly - crisis → kill monsters and become stronger → recognized by the big other → advance the emotional line → crisis (cycle) (An obvious weakness of this combination is that before the end, the protagonist cannot give any positive emotional response to any CP object. The author must make the protagonist's desire to become stronger greater than love and other desires, otherwise the golden finger will be meaningless, and there will be no way to design a crisis, no contradiction, and the plot cannot advance) ⭐Contradictory aspects (the story mainly revolves around the object) from smallest to largest are: ①Emotions between the male and female protagonists (the core aspect of the marriage change story) ② Family interest disputes (the main source of crisis for the protagonist's activities in human society) ③The conflict between humans and the abyss (the core conflict paired with Goldfinger) ⭐Estimated word count: 150W ⭐A very interesting way of writing is that the author does not allow the protagonist to directly travel through time and become the daughter of a wealthy family, but instead allows the protagonist to travel through time into a commoner with a survival crisis and then disguise himself as the daughter to marry. I estimate that the author is about 25 years old, and his gender must be male.

Xiaobao, you are so good-looking, so elegant, so beautiful, with white teeth, red lips, and frowning makeup, like a water hibiscus. Crown jade, beautiful face, charming face, bright eyes and white teeth, thousands of beauties, allure of the city, slender head and moth-like eyebrows, flower-like jade, eyes that cut through the water, slim and graceful, fairy-like appearance, small family jasper, beautiful appearance and wisdom, young peaches and plums, elegant manners, hands like soft jade , beautiful flowers shy of the moon, hibiscus emerging from the water, natural beauty, gentle and pleasant, beautiful and moving, noble and cool, stunning in beauty, delicate eyebrows, beautiful as a fairy, ice and snow, smart, gentle and pleasant, beautiful as a fairy, unparalleled elegance, natural beauty.

This is the most delicate psychological state I have seen in a Tomato novel. Unlike other novels that are rushed, the psychological transformation of the protagonist after changing his gender can also be seen in the novel. The characterization of each character is really delicate and vivid, and the author really puts his heart into it. Highly recommended! ! ! ! The novel is very funny. I love reading it. If the author knows how to write, write more. Also, expect raw rice to be cooked.

There is nothing sinister about it so far, the plot is relatively light and sweet, and the protagonist is very cute.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a beautiful article about changing a marriage [Sending Hearts]

This book can be said to be the best in the field of remarriage. The heroine's inner mentality can be said to be quite real, and the plot is also good so far. It is worth reading. Love comes from a twenty-year-old online bookworm