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After reading Chapter 30, to be honest, the current writing is like an outline, and there are too many plots to make up for it. Let's not talk about the story of the master and senior sister. Is the progress of the two female supporting characters too fast and without any level? It feels like I fell in love with the male protagonist out of nowhere, and the male protagonist is very loving and will not reject anyone who comes [face covering]

It's very interesting and good, but the one written by Lu Ning is really unlikable and annoying. She doesn't deserve to be by the protagonist's side. She is arrogant in everything she does, and even dominates the senior sister to sleep with her. As a result, the progress of the male protagonist and senior sister is overtaken by Liu Fei'er. Everything else is okay.

The broken halberd holds the wine of the First Emperor, and the sword points to the ecliptic without any edge. Lu Deshuang, an old piece of shocking history, wrote a song about the deceased in Bu Mo and northern Hebei Province. [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

It's great to be the emperor's uncle and see that there's no problem at all! However, the plot is really fast, like a synopsis, there is too much for readers to imagine😏😏😏

After browsing for a long time, I finally found a buried book [smile] but why are there so few readers? [Praise]

A really experienced driver drives, so I'm a little afraid to give high scores, for fear that one day it will be gone [sneaky laugh]

Broken Halberd and Wine Poem [laughs]

We need to strengthen the description of "details" [laughing evilly]

After reading a few chapters, I knew it was a masterpiece

It's not my brother's writing that's good. [Sending my heart] It's been a long time since I've eaten fine rice bran.

It's so wonderful that Tomato has such a wonderful book [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] It's still good to watch, 100 updates a day is almost enough, I'll give you more descriptions of the scenes, there are fewer people watching it now, I'm an old fan [Admiration]

Everything goes without saying, good, very good, very good! ! ! [Stare][Stare][Stare]

What an awesome work, it can "driving" better than a sports car [shy][shy][shy] Such a "good book, I was afraid of being reviewed, so I downgraded it to three stars." I suspect that the author is the reincarnation of Liu Bei [shy][shy][shy]

The girl collected it very quickly

Has the author seen Jiangshan Yunluo?

I give five stars not because I want to give five stars, but because the limit of the platform is only five stars. Come on, author, promise me not to give up halfway [blowing kiss]

Looks good, but not popular

Master has almost become a gold miner, but now I have met a new teacher, I really have you [smile]

Wonderful, very good, very good

Great, no need to say more

Okay, okay, succubus hero [Adoration]

What is the answer to that group number? I like this book very much and recommended it to my friends.

I don't dare to give high marks because I'm afraid I won't see it later [laughing evilly]

In fact, there is no need to write so elegantly. If you write more popularly, more people will read it. We are all ordinary people.

I really have to give you a high score. Don't let Shenhe find out.

Such a beautiful book, it could be more popular

I really feel wronged by you for coming to Tomato to write about Liu Beiwen. Although the rating is a bit low, I hope you stick with it

The author will list the heroines currently appearing, and I will go to the forum to recommend books to you [laughing]

The relationship between the male and female protagonists is a bit fast, but it feels so good if I can't hold him back.

I've been raising it for a while, why are the titles at the end with ❤️? The author is very [shy]