Red Mansions: Traveling Through Jia Rui, You Will Become Stronger When Your Wishes Come True

A very good book, but the ending is a bit sloppy.

A rare book!

Just be fine

Very interesting, a rare book about Red Mansions

The logical thinking ability is really good, and it is interconnected. It can be regarded as a modern person who has traveled through time. He is advanced in ancient times and has a deep knowledge of ancient history. The author is so 👍.

There is nothing wrong with the book. The struggle, resistance and acceptance, and some parts of Bede are well written. This aspect should be your advantage and can be strengthened. I think it's because the system was messy and noisy in the early stage and there were no explosive points, so the current results are mediocre. The real interaction with the heroine should be around 20 chapters. Tomato is more interested in reading novels. For example, let's say you were killed by Wang Xifeng because of your original master. In the first five chapters, you wrote about false evidence about Wang Xifeng's rumors, which would affect the relationship between Jia Lian and Wang Xifeng. You used this to slowly blackmail Ping'er. A fierce woman like Ping'er was forced to give in little by little for her master. It was so exciting and explosive. Do the readers just expect that Wang Xifeng will be far behind after all the servants are taken in? Then why not keep the readers, and then slowly lay the groundwork or write these main dishes. Of course it's just my personal opinion. I think you can finish this book by finishing Li Wan and Lin Daiyu and prepare for a new book. The income is low and there is no creative passion.

It's a pity, because there is no traffic and the author hastily ended it. The book is still very interesting and deserves five stars.

Dog-licking system tasks

The good Red Mansions Tongwen should be the best masterpiece in recent years, comparable to "Spring in Red Mansions" and "Red Mansions" and other good books with a score of 9 or above. The description of the novel is very detailed, the plot concept is more in line with the attributes of the characters, and the emotional portrayal is also very deep and delicate. At a glance, you can tell that it is not the writing of an AI writer. The text is also humorous and will not make people feel boring. The only bad thing is that you can't make 10,000 a day, and the updates are constant, right?

Finished reading! It looks much better than imagined, right?

This article is quite good. I have read several articles on Crossing the Red Chamber, all of which focus on the officialdom. This article focuses on picking up girls from beginning to end, and it is humorous. The male protagonist is frank and frank, and every girl he picks up has logic.

Super beautiful, a very rare book. The author has profound writing skills and the description of the characters is very good. I highly recommend it.

Details are handled well

It's quite good, the thinking is clear, and it's a rare book.

It's very interesting. Come on, author, it's easier to accept girls!

The book is okay, you can read it!

I read it with curiosity in mind, it's pretty good

I have finished reading it. It is very exciting but also a bit regretful. There are many more plots to follow. All of Se Se's plots have been ruthlessly wiped out. I suggest Tomato open an adult module so that good works will not be dismembered like this.

This book Dream of Red Mansions is full of knowledge and interest. The author has a strong background and writing skills in Dream of Red Mansions. I hope he can persevere to the end. Other benevolent people see benevolence and wise people see wisdom. Isn't it nice to watch it for free? The author doesn't need to pay attention to scolding the cook after eating. The book is originally written for appreciative readers. Come on!

A very interesting work, the writing is smooth and humorous, and the lines are classic and fashionable.

The angle is very good, I like it very much Read one more chapter Fattening? I can't stand it if it doesn't exist. The author is also very helpful and updates quickly. Give me a little suggestion With so many gold hairpins, the upper limit of force is also quite high. It's impossible to take care of everyone There are some dark spots behind my hands that I have never changed. Force your wish to change Come on! Always support

At what age are you still licking?

A very nice red building. Come on.

Come on, author, when I saw you saying the data was poor, I was so frightened that I immediately came over and gave you a five-star review.

Very, very suitable for the taste of old Red Mansions readers.

It's really okay, but you don't want to accept all women. Some people can just be used as machines to earn rewards. Also, I've seen more than 100 photos of Sister Lin, why hasn't she appeared yet?

Definitely a masterpiece of Red Mansions. Le Duoduo, for meat-eating friends, this book is also available. It is not a Qingshui novel. As long as you can skip the previous dialogue with the system, it should be read by more people.

The writing is very serious, not perfunctory, and the exam part is very in-depth.

Very interesting, very comfortable to watch, nothing toxic at all

Very good book. Full of content. . . . The plot is also very good. Unfortunately, due to lack of traffic, it ended quickly, otherwise I could have written a lot of content. Sister Lin can't marry a big-faced boy to the author, which is good.