[Multiple heroines] + [One Piece Rocks Overlord Color Start] + [Reincarnation Eye] + [Tatsumaki Fubuki Sisters]
In the inhumane research institute, the time traveler Lin Ye, who was a test subject, originally wanted to give up on this life, but the new neighbor gave him a little more desire for life. Looking at the cute little loli with green hair and curly hair who was imprisoned, she was abandoned by her family and regarded herself as her only support...
The arrival of the system, the blessing of the full-level Rocks Overlord color... Lin Yesheng wanted to protect her and take her out of this terrible research institute...
Reader comments
If the author wants to attract readers, he must change (at least) the first five chapters. Most people are discouraged here, and it is indeed easy for people to lose the desire to read. The subsequent plot and character descriptions are pretty good, and I hope it will get better and better as the quality and quantity are maintained.
Come on! The author is great! The writing is good, come on for the follow-up plot [I learned it]
Rebirth does not give golden fingers, God does not take paper with his bowels
Traveling through time is an invincible road, but the system is even more terrifying
Bald Superman, the protagonist's serious punch.
The cute and arrogant Tatsumaki, the coquettish and cute Fubuki (only for the protagonist) have a good plot, you can refer to the (reset version) to write, there are still many plots to write.
When should we speed up the plot so that the protagonist has to eat?
There are not many One Punch Man novels, but they are quite well written. I hope the author will update them ten times a day.
To be honest, this one is much better than the ones in the same series. At least the combat power has not collapsed, and you are not invincible from the beginning. It is well written and quite good.
It looks good, it's pretty good. Keep up the good work, author! [Like][Like][Like]
Very nice. Please give me more scenes with Tatsumaki.
Very well written
To be honest, I really don't feel that this book is as bad as other low-scoring books. I really think it's pretty good. It's one of the better-looking among the One Punch fandoms.
It looks uncomfortable from the front, but it gets better from the back. The author can do it [Like]
It's so beautiful, why doesn't anyone see it? Come on, the author greatly supports you in urging you to update every day.
You can write more about the interactions between the male protagonists and the female protagonists. Author, why didn't you write the first part? ! ! I think it's pretty
This book is really nice
Very nice, really nice
Well, something is not going well
Do a good job and come back
It deserves praise, believe me
Pretty good. I hope I can accept Sykes.
When will it be updated? It's been a long time [angry] [angry] [angry]
It sounds so good. When will it be updated? Author, I see that other people's comments are all from July.
It's a pretty good book. Except for the slight breakdown in combat power at the end, it has almost no shortcomings. It's worth reading.
Reading the comments, a lot of people complained about it. I think the plot is okay. Maybe I like this type more. I don't dare to comment too much for fear of being criticized [Chigua]
It's quite good-looking, and it fulfills my dream of watching the Bald Devil.
Very good, very good-looking, very good-looking
Very good, the work is very creative and combines a lot of animation capabilities
If the author wants to attract readers, he must change (at least) the first five chapters. Most people are discouraged here, and it is indeed easy for people to lose the desire to read. The subsequent plot and character descriptions are pretty good, and I hope it will get better and better as the quality and quantity are maintained.
Come on! The author is great! The writing is good, come on for the follow-up plot [I learned it] Rebirth does not give golden fingers, God does not take paper with his bowels Traveling through time is an invincible road, but the system is even more terrifying Bald Superman, the protagonist's serious punch. The cute and arrogant Tatsumaki, the coquettish and cute Fubuki (only for the protagonist) have a good plot, you can refer to the (reset version) to write, there are still many plots to write.
When should we speed up the plot so that the protagonist has to eat?
There are not many One Punch Man novels, but they are quite well written. I hope the author will update them ten times a day.
To be honest, this one is much better than the ones in the same series. At least the combat power has not collapsed, and you are not invincible from the beginning. It is well written and quite good.
It looks good, it's pretty good. Keep up the good work, author! [Like][Like][Like]
Very nice. Please give me more scenes with Tatsumaki.
Very well written To be honest, I really don't feel that this book is as bad as other low-scoring books. I really think it's pretty good. It's one of the better-looking among the One Punch fandoms.
It looks uncomfortable from the front, but it gets better from the back. The author can do it [Like]
It's so beautiful, why doesn't anyone see it? Come on, the author greatly supports you in urging you to update every day. You can write more about the interactions between the male protagonists and the female protagonists. Author, why didn't you write the first part? ! ! I think it's pretty
This book is really nice
Very nice, really nice
Well, something is not going well
Do a good job and come back
It deserves praise, believe me
Pretty good. I hope I can accept Sykes.
When will it be updated? It's been a long time [angry] [angry] [angry]
It sounds so good. When will it be updated? Author, I see that other people's comments are all from July.
It's a pretty good book. Except for the slight breakdown in combat power at the end, it has almost no shortcomings. It's worth reading.
Reading the comments, a lot of people complained about it. I think the plot is okay. Maybe I like this type more. I don't dare to comment too much for fear of being criticized [Chigua]
It's quite good-looking, and it fulfills my dream of watching the Bald Devil.
Very good, very good-looking, very good-looking
Very good, the work is very creative and combines a lot of animation capabilities
It's a pretty good fanfic
Very nice! Big cheers for the author! ! !
Not bad, pay more attention to details
Looks good, come on, come on
Come on, your writing is okay
I'm a native dog and I like to watch
I think it's okay, it looks pretty