Witch*******

I think it's pretty good, and the subject matter is quite distinctive. It's just that I can't see any connection between the protagonist's personal abilities and the witch in the title of the book. Although the talent, death, etc. Are related, the combat is completely different from some witch stories I've read. Thank you for watching a warrior fighting, which is different from the witch I personally think of. I hope some potions, magic, familiars, etc. Can be added. As mentioned before, I don't know if the witch will appear later. But this may be the first time for the author to write a book, and so far I feel that it is pretty good in other aspects. Secondly, I feel that the author is not good at writing lilies, probably because he has no experience, so he should just write a single. This way, the whole text will not be ruined by adding emotional lines, and if the friendship lines are well written, they are actually no worse than the emotional lines. Finally, I really hope that the protagonist's weapon can be a "scythe" (PS: I feel that the Death Witch is more suitable for the scythe, and uses the scythe and the white mist to harvest death). I really hope that the author can consider this suggestion of a weapon. The above are all personal subjective opinions, if you don't like it, don't criticize [send heartfelt]

The look and feel is quite good, the writing style is relatively fresh and natural, and there are not many gorgeous words. However, the portrayal of some characters is a bit flat, as if they are good for good or bad for bad, but the overall feeling is still very good. In addition, Chaoyu is cute, so go for the author.

It's good, but I still think it's better to be single. I think Qingmeng is a bit abrupt. Her relationship with the protagonist suddenly got better. I won't go into details about why, and I always feel that the protagonist is like the daughter who was deceived by Huang Mao [face covering]

It's quite interesting, the main character is suitable for being single.

If you are in a CP group, just have a clear dream [laughing]

It's obvious that it's a newcomer's work, so I'll give it 5 stars because I'm an old fan [laughs]

After reading it, it is very good. The current world view is very common, but it is surprisingly detailed. Each realm is also described in detail, and many details make people feel real. The heroine is introverted and internally constrained but works very, very hard. There is no unreasonable cheating. It is all due to the heroine's diligence. She is currently on the white side. But the second volume is not as comfortable to read as the first volume, but it's okay. The author should keep up the good work.

After watching it, I originally looked at the 7.0 Rating to get a taste of it. The main problem is that the turning point and the ending are quite stiff, and every time I write about that man, it's so sweet, but later on, the number of dialogues that appear is reduced. Give 5 stars for encouragement

It's very interesting to me. I particularly like the character of the protagonist. It would be better if it was single.

It's okay, but the Death Witch attributes are lacking.

Transformation, cool writing (these two should be the main highlights) I am a newbie writer, and my writing style is not very good, but I saw the author's passion and I was impressed by it.

The previous rhythm looks very comfortable, I look forward to the follow-up [Like]

Give me a review. It's well written. I haven't written much about the relationship between the two heroines in detail, but it has a natural feeling. The book is not full, not very delicious, and has no taste, but when I read it, I surprisingly felt a light calmness, like plain white rice porridge, which is not delicious, but it is very nourishing to the stomach. By the way, the protagonist's current strength is progressing faster and faster. I suggest you find a way to strengthen Jiang, so that at least the two female protagonists don't get too far apart.

When I read it, it felt like literary nonsense, the kind of sad copywriting written in junior high school because of illness.

The story is quite well written. I hope the love line is single and the posts between friends are acceptable. I hope there won't be any weird developments. My dear author, please work hard and support [laughing]

What do you think it takes to drag a person from heaven to hell? [Work in progress] [Work in progress] [Work in progress]

This book reminded me of Lin Luliu's Qingqing. It's been a long time since I've seen a book with two female protagonists, urban martial arts. Although I don't know if it's single or not, I still give it a good review.

I forgot to write a book review. It's okay for a newcomer. The plot is well connected, but it's just too bland. Five stars to encourage you.

Nice\(//∇//)\ I feel like I can write something sweet now There's blood flowing out from behind, and I'm going to stab him hard This is fun

Do you need a reason to look good?

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

This is the protagonist I have ever seen who has the most reason to be bullied on campus [laughing]

So pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty

Very nice. Please give the author some gifts.

Come on, keep this rhythm now, it looks very comfortable

Very nice and well paced

The material selection is good and the writing is good, but it's a pity that it's not a loli.

The rhythm is really comfortable, the outlook on life is normal, the plot is normal, and the IQ is online. It's really hard to find in Tomato

I feel that the writing is quite good, but some things are not described particularly well. After all, this is the first time I have written it. It is already pretty good.

For me, this book is really like a little bit of fresh water in tomatoes. It would be better if you don't cut it off.