Bow to Civilization? We Are Civilization

It's quite interesting, hahaha. The first two chapters of the article clearly mocked the "tag monster", which may have some meaning. Let's make this comment a lightning protection post. It's a diverse world, and there are scenes of alien races. Judging from the full text, the point that the author wants to express is that one's deeds do not matter one's heart, well, one's deeds do not matter one's race. The shortcoming is that the author's writing is not strong enough, and the entry point of the plot is not very good, resulting in some fragmentation. Generally speaking, the logic is reasonable, at least according to the logic in the article. It is recommended that the author explain the story of the alien race, give her a more reasonable way to appear, and tell readers the fundamental reason why she came to the protagonist's world, which may be easier for everyone to accept. In addition, the guarantee method set by the author is "In the age of gods, swearing to gods will definitely come true." This setting is very good, but it is written too little and is skipped, so that everyone is not impressed. In fact, you can spend more pen and ink on this place to clearly describe the content of the oaths of both parties. It is best to include some scenes of gods witnessing the scene to make your setting more convincing. Therefore, it is important to omit appropriately in writing.

It's quite good-looking. The main character has an upright outlook, neither a virgin nor a vulgar one. There are very few descriptions of the girl's appearance, and more emphasis is placed on abilities. There aren't many official scenes, but the characters who appear are normal, and there's no moral kidnapping. Why didn't we mark the number of female protagonists from the beginning?

The author refuted my last criticism. I thought about it carefully and found that what the author said makes sense. It is true that I was not careful and ignored many details. So I deleted the comment and started criticizing it again this time. I just don't understand why the country didn't find out there was something wrong with Qian Shanmu's identity. The prop that can bring the alien race back is said to provide a complete identity and life trajectory for the alien race, and the author explained in a comment that he has not tampered with anyone's memory. Then the problem comes, a person has a complete life trajectory, but it does not exist in anyone's memory. She will be in her graduation photos, she will have scores on every test, but neither her teachers nor her classmates will recognize her. She completed a lot of work and was never late for work, but neither her boss nor her colleagues recognized her. She even appears in many people's chat lists, but no one remembers chatting with her. Also, when the state investigates a person, the most basic thing is to go up to three generations, right? My cousin needs to get a police certificate from my grandparents to be a soldier, let alone join the national special department. But where did this Qianshanmu come from? She didn't even have parents. It would be even more interesting to say that she was born as an orphan. If an orphan wants to gain a foothold in society, he needs to make greater efforts and participate in more social activities, but no one remembers that he has come into contact with such a person. Furthermore, joining other civilizations will erase all traces of this civilization, but the author said that he has not tampered with anyone's memory, so just erase it casually. Everyone who knows her still remembers her anyway, so what does it matter if the traces are erased or not.

As expected, I still like to read this kind of group portrait novel, and the protagonist and supporting characters are very sane, so people with misanthropy can safely eat it. The entire logic is online. The disadvantage is that it is too rational

I hope it doesn't end in a hurry like the old book. Also, can you ask if it has a single heroine or no heroine?

To live or to die, that is the question. "Where did I come from, where did I die, why did I appear in this world, what does my appearance mean to this world, did the world choose me, or did I choose the world, is there an inevitable connection between me and the universe, does the universe have an end, does time have a length, where does the past time disappear, and where does the future time stop..."

Provincial flow: Trial of Gods, the tasks meet the respective needs of the lone wolf and the team, so the protagonist has both personal rhythm and team progress. At present, I have seen Chapter 55, and the 10-member protagonist group should be basically confirmed (the top team brought together by the father of the country). Each member of the team has a highly recognizable personality and ability, and has a full image. They are not just followers who call 666, which also reflects the group image. It looks pretty good so far, and I look forward to future episodes.

Yes, it is indeed possible. There are no bad points or loopholes. The only problem is whether the group drama is too group. Sometimes I don't even realize who is the protagonist...

I followed the author from Yanhuang Yuanzheng. Yanhuang Yuanzheng was particularly interesting to me. Now that I have started a new book, I naturally have to read it. The result is still very interesting to me. My only wish is to finish it without ending. Use love to generate electricity and I will definitely arrange it when I remember it [sending heart]

The protagonist has a pretty good personality and is in line with normal human views. I like the whispers of gods very much, just like the natural landscape. Everyone sees different scenes. Some people see the power of the landscape, while others see the reasons that induce the appearance of the landscape. Everyone is different. I just feel like the protagonist's team upgraded a little too quickly [face covering]

No CP (the tag of multiple female protagonists should be a platform issue, the full text has no CP, no ambiguity and is purely career-minded) Group portrait (actually not particularly vivid, but passable, there are many characters, simple description is not bad) The relationship between the characters is very harmonious. Everyone is calm and friendly. Maybe the proud man of heaven will not be so brainless. The characters I saw after filtering have become such friendly and calm people. Faith in God really exceeded my expectations and it was very enjoyable to watch. In fact, the author has been constantly emphasizing the help of the team in the early stage to the protagonist, so that the feedback resources later will be less... In short, I personally feel good. Except for the emphasis too many times, I am not altruistic, nor extremely self-interested. Feedback within a reasonable range is good for my reading experience, and because of the guidance of public opinion and other aspects, the reading experience is also very pleasant, overall it is very good. Some of the ideas and concepts are quite interesting. The content of the gods whispering oracles is really amazing, and the setting is also quite grand and reasonable.

In terms of plot, I feel that the rational design is too strong. Although the logic is smooth, it is a bit too smooth. But I think other than this, everything else is pretty good, especially the whispers of the gods and the three-dimensional thinking among the protagonists. I like it very much. It is a well-founded patriotic collectivism article. It won't be like some brainless apocalyptic novels that say everything is for the country and then either the whole country or the diode will selflessly dedicate themselves to the god to stop the killing god or transform into a villain and be completely suppressed. It will be a two-way journey with conflicts and run-ins. The perspective is mainly on the protagonist group. International events are basically not described much, and domestic events are also sparse. In short, if you want to watch something more upright, a little patriotic, and a little social thinking, you can give it a try.

Come on, author! The current look and feel is very good, and the subject matter is also very good. I hope it will become popular [sending hearts]

First, confirm the content. Group portraits have always been the main theme of this kind of direct confrontation between civilizations, and the author's writing is also very vivid. After following the Yanhuang Expedition, when I first saw the gods, I thought of another book about the settings of the gods. Especially when the trial settlement does not have more than 10 days to recover all investments, it feels no different from the evil gods. Now that I have read the latest chapter, I have the same idea on this point. Or is it more reasonable to replace all investments with whales and all things will grow, and give back to the world? Secondly, urge the author to update. I originally wanted to put it on the bookshelf first and read it again soon after it was finished, which would be more enjoyable. However, the introduction really attracted me and I couldn't keep it any longer, so I opened the article and had to stop until I saw Ji Gengjian. Again, I look forward to restarting the expansion of the last two chapters of Yanhuang Expedition. By the way, are you really not going to revise the other book? In fact, it could have been three to four hundred words. Don't you really feel it's a pity that so many words have been cut?

Come on, super pretty

I sip my own bones and blood to feed all sentient beings until all the roots learn to write the meaning of life with growth rings. I use veins to record all living beings until all the branches and leaves learn to understand the true meaning of life in the years.

Very well written, keep it up

You can endure the night by doing your best, and you can glimpse the dawn by doing your best.

The greatness of life lies not in evolution, but in survival [making faces]

The faults do not hide the advantages, and it is much better than most of the people on the site who have no logic at all. Give 5 stars for support

Super beautiful, huge world view, looking forward to the follow-up! ! ! !

It's beautiful, and the contradictions are very realistic.

Unity is strength!

Author, you must work hard,

There is no shortage of them, they are quite beautiful.

Why is the score still so low? [What] If it's not five stars, it really won't be counted in the rating, right?

The author of Yanhuang Expedition. All books are good. The only drawback is that updates are too slow.

It looks great, but I feel like there are a lot of tasks that I can't quite understand.

The writing is quite in-depth. To be honest, it is more suitable for authors who write books to learn ideas and develop new books.

It's very beautiful. The author must keep it up.