Bow to Civilization? We Are Civilization

It's quite interesting, hahaha. The first two chapters of the article clearly mocked the "tag monster", which may have some meaning. Let's make this comment a lightning protection post. It's a diverse world, and there are scenes of alien races. Judging from the full text, the point that the author wants to express is that one's deeds do not matter one's heart, well, one's deeds do not matter one's race. The shortcoming is that the author's writing is not strong enough, and the entry point of the plot is not very good, resulting in some fragmentation. Generally speaking, the logic is reasonable, at least according to the logic in the article. It is recommended that the author explain the story of the alien race, give her a more reasonable way to appear, and tell readers the fundamental reason why she came to the protagonist's world, which may be easier for everyone to accept. In addition, the guarantee method set by the author is "In the age of gods, swearing to gods will definitely come true." This setting is very good, but it is written too little and is skipped, so that everyone is not impressed. In fact, you can spend more pen and ink on this place to clearly describe the content of the oaths of both parties. It is best to include some scenes of gods witnessing the scene to make your setting more convincing. Therefore, it is important to omit appropriately in writing.

It's quite good-looking. The main character has an upright outlook, neither a virgin nor a vulgar one. There are very few descriptions of the girl's appearance, and more emphasis is placed on abilities. There aren't many official scenes, but the characters who appear are normal, and there's no moral kidnapping. Why didn't we mark the number of female protagonists from the beginning?

The author refuted my last criticism. I thought about it carefully and found that what the author said makes sense. It is true that I was not careful and ignored many details. So I deleted the comment and started criticizing it again this time. I just don't understand why the country didn't find out there was something wrong with Qian Shanmu's identity. The prop that can bring the alien race back is said to provide a complete identity and life trajectory for the alien race, and the author explained in a comment that he has not tampered with anyone's memory. Then the problem comes, a person has a complete life trajectory, but it does not exist in anyone's memory. She will be in her graduation photos, she will have scores on every test, but neither her teachers nor her classmates will recognize her. She completed a lot of work and was never late for work, but neither her boss nor her colleagues recognized her. She even appears in many people's chat lists, but no one remembers chatting with her. Also, when the state investigates a person, the most basic thing is to go up to three generations, right? My cousin needs to get a police certificate from my grandparents to be a soldier, let alone join the national special department. But where did this Qianshanmu come from? She didn't even have parents. It would be even more interesting to say that she was born as an orphan. If an orphan wants to gain a foothold in society, he needs to make greater efforts and participate in more social activities, but no one remembers that he has come into contact with such a person. Furthermore, joining other civilizations will erase all traces of this civilization, but the author said that he has not tampered with anyone's memory, so just erase it casually. Everyone who knows her still remembers her anyway, so what does it matter if the traces are erased or not.

As expected, I still like to read this kind of group portrait novel, and the protagonist and supporting characters are very sane, so people with misanthropy can safely eat it. The entire logic is online. The disadvantage is that it is too rational

I hope it doesn't end in a hurry like the old book. Also, can you ask if it has a single heroine or no heroine?

To live or to die, that is the question. "Where did I come from, where did I die, why did I appear in this world, what does my appearance mean to this world, did the world choose me, or did I choose the world, is there an inevitable connection between me and the universe, does the universe have an end, does time have a length, where does the past time disappear, and where does the future time stop..."

Provincial flow: Trial of Gods, the tasks meet the respective needs of the lone wolf and the team, so the protagonist has both personal rhythm and team progress. At present, I have seen Chapter 55, and the 10-member protagonist group should be basically confirmed (the top team brought together by the father of the country). Each member of the team has a highly recognizable personality and ability, and has a full image. They are not just followers who call 666, which also reflects the group image. It looks pretty good so far, and I look forward to future episodes.

Yes, it is indeed possible. There are no bad points or loopholes. The only problem is whether the group drama is too group. Sometimes I don't even realize who is the protagonist...

No CP (the tag of multiple female protagonists should be a platform issue, the full text has no CP, no ambiguity and is purely career-minded) Group portrait (actually not particularly vivid, but passable, there are many characters, simple description is not bad) The relationship between the characters is very harmonious. Everyone is calm and friendly. Maybe the proud man of heaven will not be so brainless. The characters I saw after filtering have become such friendly and calm people. Faith in God really exceeded my expectations and it was very enjoyable to watch. In fact, the author has been constantly emphasizing the help of the team in the early stage to the protagonist, so that the feedback resources later will be less... In short, I personally feel good. Except for the emphasis too many times, I am not altruistic, nor extremely self-interested. Feedback within a reasonable range is good for my reading experience, and because of the guidance of public opinion and other aspects, the reading experience is also very pleasant, overall it is very good. Some of the ideas and concepts are quite interesting. The content of the gods whispering oracles is really amazing, and the setting is also quite grand and reasonable.

I followed the author from Yanhuang Yuanzheng. Yanhuang Yuanzheng was particularly interesting to me. Now that I have started a new book, I naturally have to read it. The result is still very interesting to me. My only wish is to finish it without ending. Use love to generate electricity and I will definitely arrange it when I remember it [sending heart]