Paranormal Action Team? but Why Are You so Weak?

I've read less than 30 chapters, so I can only say it's okay, but after all, I'm a novice writer, and I'm quite optimistic about you. The main reason is that the plot development process is a bit long-winded, and the character transformation of the protagonist feels too rigid. I may feel a little uncomfortable reading it, but you are the first supernatural fan I have read. The plot feels quite novel and gives me a good feeling. Yes, I am not a very knowledgeable person. I hope you can improve your writing more and make the plot more vivid and interesting because of your writing. I will always follow you (I typed a lot of words in a long way, and I hope the author can add more words in the next chapters, come on) [Cool][Cool][Cool]

I originally played Deadly Incorporated, and then I learned about Supernatural. I was a bit turned off at first, but then I decided to play it in order to treat my PTSD in Carmona, and after that, it was really fun. After touching gold today, I suddenly thought about whether there is a supernatural book. However, I fell in love with this book at first sight, and then took some time to read it. Overall, it is good, and the setting is okay, not to mention the author is a sophomore in junior high school. Therefore, it is a fan novel worth recommending. You can read it and highly recommend it. The main plot is also acceptable. The following is the hair tip: @ shrimpCan you let me play with the protagonist? Please, my name is simply Erjiu (it's okay if you don't agree), and I will always support you [laughing] unless there is no warning or eunuch (even then my bookshelf has a cemetery dedicated to the books of Duan Geng, waiting for their "resurrection"). If so, I will trick Ao Jingjiao into providing you with a full set of "services" [laughing], come on, little author [laughing] Touch the gold hard, the framework of the main line is there, all I owe is Dongfeng Express [laughter]

Beautiful, love watching. The children said that after reading this novel, they hit Shen Xing and kicked Shen Pan.

A very nice new supernatural book. You are one of the few authors who basically insists on updating. I hope you won't stop updating.

The author writes very well [like][like][like]

Yes, I'm looking forward to the plot of Xiao Huang and Alice [sending my heart]

Very nice quality book

It's good-looking (๑•.•๑), So don't expect too much, just have it. I hope the author won't stop updating. If you run out of inspiration, you can open a small group and let's discuss something together (I want to submit a character). I really have a lot of ideas in my mind (›´ω`‹)

Okay, okay, I think it looks pretty good

It's pretty good. To be honest, I'm quite surprised that there is such a small track as Supernatural.

It's really good. Just don't let Xiao Su's father die [laugh][like] Meow~

Well written, keep it up!

The author writes very well. Come on.

It's pretty, it's a fine product

It's beautiful, the teacher wrote it well [sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's beautiful, good luck to the author!

Very pretty, I like it very much! It's a very good book

Looks good, I like this

Still worth seeing

Give me five stars first and then talk about it

Looking for supernatural books

As long as I like it, I don't care about you.

It looks great. Is there a female protagonist? Want a heroine

Suddenly I realized that after reading it for so long, I gave a review but didn't send a text [laughs]

Not bad, good looking, very promising

I'm really looking forward to the interaction between the protagonist and Zero, Xiao Huang, Vivian and Alice.

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Very good book, 2000 hours certification

It looks good, I hope the author will continue to work hard

The characters are vividly described, the plot is interesting, and they have their own ideas. Summary: very, very beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡