The Difficult Life of a Time Traveler

The writing is very good. There are no high-frequency turning words in good writing. Whenever "because so although but after all but for example if that's the case" appears at the beginning of a paragraph or in a short series of short sentences, it is a complete waste of time to give up decisively.

It seems to be about time travel, but it is actually about a different world called the Ming Dynasty where there are mysterious and ghostly creatures. The focus of the story is not on the protagonist. He is just a thread that connects people and events. The novel shows an extremely real and bizarre Ming Dynasty.

Very interesting, a bit like the style of Qidian, spreading out the world view bit by bit

The tempo was too slow, so the score was too low. It takes more than 100 chapters to get to the point where it feels good. It took more than 60 chapters to get the rhythm. But it has strong stamina, and now that I have read more than 270 chapters, the novel has gradually entered a good state.

Reading this book is more difficult than reading. I just don't know when the protagonist will be able to stand up. As the person said, the author's writing skills are so good, which makes people look forward to how he will take off in the later period.

1. The subject matter is good, and it is easy to attract the audience. In the context of supernatural resurrection, I meet the emperor who wants to become an immortal the most. If the protagonist has more content to show his sage in front of others or improve his character, it will be very interesting. Unfortunately, the author's writing skills are not enough. He wants to write a group portrait scene but cannot express the feeling. Instead, it is a bit foggy, which consumes patience. 2. The background design of the characters is great, but the growth of the protagonist cannot be seen. After more than 1 million words, the character arc of the protagonist cannot be seen. The growth of abilities depends on golden fingers, and it is difficult to see the content that the protagonist actively wants to practice and become stronger. In the early and mid-term, the protagonist relies on Dihua and other people's ideas. 3. There is no problem if you want to use a group drama to promote the protagonist in the plot, but the writing is a bit green. I recommend the author to refer to "Mortal Que" for this point, that is, you cannot let everyone feel that the plot is advancing but the protagonist has not grown up or the protagonist is too weak. To advance the plot, you must use characters with flesh and blood, characteristics and characteristics that people like, rather than characters with flat facial makeup. 4. A considerable number of people will read this book for the Taoist content, but the Taoist content is there but not much. The protagonist makes people feel that he is ignorant and only pretends to be powerful. Apart from the magic weapon brought through time travel, what else is left? After so long, the magic weapon finally knows the effect with a golden finger, but what about the improvement of the protagonist himself. But overall the novel is still very good. The flaws do not hide the good points. I give it five stars to support it. The author insists on writing and will become a great master in the future. Come on.

I can't help but feel like reading this book. Although the descriptions in many places are not consistent enough and the explanations are not clear and vague, the author's writing style is very delicate and good. It is still a good book, especially if you don't know the direction behind it, and you won't feel like reading a routine novel, and you have strong expectations for the plot behind it. I hope there will be more, keep up the good work

You are right, but there is a small problem: ——Who asked you? I mean, who—asked you? I took a closer look, staring at the void of information. Between us, in this long river of dialogue, 0 people asked you. I opened my address book, I flipped through questionnaires, I checked historical records, I took to the streets, went deep into the fields, knocked on every door, and asked everyone: "Did you ask him?" Their answers were all the same, including silence, shaking their heads, confusion, and even confusion. No one asked you. I invited everyone who asked you to come here, arranged a grand welcome ceremony, laid out a red carpet, hung banners, and set up lights, but the number of people present was 0. The venue was empty, with plenty of chairs but no one sitting on them. The host had already left the table, the camera was spinning alone in the air, and the sound of wind and grass coming out of the microphone was. I don't understand, I'm confused, I'm puzzled. I seemed to be caught in a philosophical whirlpool: Who is it? Who asked you? I started my journey. I crossed the desert, endured heat and thirst; I climbed mountains, endured thin air and loneliness; I dive into the deep sea, looking for even a trace of being asked in the darkness of the sea; I entered the largest database and used logic and code to try to retrieve the clues of "Who asked you?" I came to space, walked into NASA's most powerful observatory, started the world's largest telescope, and adjusted the focus to the maximum - to see the end of the Milky Way, the boundary of the universe, observe the death of supernovae, and witness the origin of life. I have personally experienced the rise and fall of civilizations, I have witnessed the birth and silence of languages, and I have walked into one library after another, just looking for even one byte of evidence that can tell me: "This person asked you." I stepped into the wilderness of the empty valley, and it was so quiet that I could only hear the sound of the wind blowing through the grass. I entered deep space, surrounded by boundless darkness and silence. Only the questions in my heart echoed: "Who, who asked you?" I traveled repeatedly through 14 million parallel universes. Some worlds are technologically advanced to the point that time can be traced back, some worlds have highly unified thoughts, and some worlds have humans evolved into pure consciousness. I asked them: "Has anyone in your world - asked him?" They denied it one by one. I searched, I reflected, I pursued, I struggled, but in the end the answer was still blank: - No one asked you. But you are in this place of no questions, talking to yourself with witty words, as if thousands of creatures in the world are waiting for your answer. Unfortunately, they didn't. We don't. No one. So I asked again, as if this was the only meaning of my existence: Who is it? Who asked you?

It's the same type as Lanke Qiyuan, and the writing style is also quite sophisticated. It depends on whether the logical structure behind it can be stable. If the writing is stable, it can be comparable to that one.

I secretly gave myself a five-star rating. Please pretend you didn't see it!

It's already 80 photos, and the protagonist hasn't gotten to grips with it yet. The pace is set.

It's been written well so far, don't be affected by the comments, just keep writing as you are now, no problem.

Very good😄, a bit funny, just like the 72 Shame, but this one focuses on surprises, and this one has the yearning for joy and freedom, as well as some extraordinary creatures, which adds some interest in continuing reading. As long as it's not a bad ending and a brainless fun, or it's Jiajing Goblin in Time Travel, all in all, the author's writing is very good. Come on, come on.

The writing is delicate, but now the wild boar cannot eat the fine chaff. I used to read it ten lines at a time, but now it's a little uncomfortable to read it sentence by sentence, but in the end I still recommend it. I can't understand [laughing awkwardly][laughing awkwardly]

The author must finish it, don't be a eunuch, please [blowing kiss]

No ability to tell the truth at all

It's really good. It's a relatively novel book. Please update it quickly.

It's very interesting. Although the pace is a bit slow, the writing is smooth and enjoyable to read. It's impossible for a newbie.

So far, it's quite interesting. The main character cosplays as a Taoist priest, and the spiritual energy is revived, and the demons and ghosts also come out. The protagonist's ability to draw Taoist spells is also revealed step by step. It may not have the halo of a protagonist that is common in online novels, and is relatively passive, only moving forward when pushed, but this perspective also makes people feel more suspenseful and immersed. I am not afraid of being chased by the villain and facing off against the protagonist, but I am afraid that it will be embarrassing to not be able to use the Taoist method when I need it now...

The introduction mentions the revival of spiritual energy. The few battle scenes are related to death revenge, and the world view is weird.

After reading Chapter 100, I feel that the protagonist is a high-dimensional creature, similar to the ancient god Cthulhu. It looks like a humanoid, but the surroundings are distorted.

The protagonist is really frustrated, running around everywhere. But the writing is so good that I can still read it.

It's quite interesting, I hope you don't lose track of it halfway.

It's a very novel book, Group Portrait. The perspective starts from the protagonist and slowly opens up the world.

Well-written and witty language Not bad, not bad Although it's an invincible post, I've already traveled through time and space, so there's no point in coming empty-handed. Give me some life-saving gadgets.

Not bad so far, above average for tomatoes.

Okay, okay, it's been a long time since I've seen a book like this that makes people read. I almost missed it.

It's been a long time since I've seen a book like this that makes people want to read it when they're free [face covering] [face covering]

The writing is sophisticated, the big world is constructed into a fantasy adventure, and every character is full😄 Suitable for ten chapters updated daily

The plot is very good, the writing is very good, it is not just a verbal novel, everyone's IQ and EQ are online. The disadvantage is that the updates are too slow and not enough to read. It's very engaging, the writing is solid, the characters are fleshed out, and the supporting characters' emotional and IQ scores are all online.