Ghost Hand Shackles: I Will Forge Swords and Become a God

It feels like everything is arranged and unnatural. There are only a dozen people in a mining area, and all of them are smart enough to run with you. They have all traveled through time, and the protagonist has male protagonists. There is no explanation at all. Not to mention running away while the chaos is around, and running in one direction with a lot of people. After three months of searching, the enemy will invade as soon as you resist, and you will not run for two seconds. Next, you told me that there was no process even after dark, and that you didn't have a stable curse before falling off the cliff, so you didn't die. Then you happened to be saved by a blacksmith who happened to know how to use talismans. And his apprentice had already reached level 13. How could it happen? It couldn't be done without the stability of Terra Stone, right?

I can see it, but I don't know if the author didn't check it carefully. Some places always feel disconnected, as if there have been too many deletions and there is no coordination between the front and back, resulting in a sense of dissonance.

A slightly more advanced AI text (at least there will be no mistakes in numerical calculations, and there will be no inconsistent plots) However, the description of emotions and logic is zero (really, there is none at all). It is very rigid to follow the target. It is extremely uncomfortable to read and is almost anti-human.

All abilities are attributed to the work of forging weapons in the previous life, the understanding of terrain bunkers, and the perception of the surrounding environment, which have nothing to do with blacksmithing. It is better to say that the improvement brought by the confrontation with the Curse of Kazan, or simply pushed to the system.

After reading 30 chapters, some parts like the AI ​​repeated a lot of unnecessary words, both crises and opportunities were bland, there was no memorable climax, the plot was step-by-step, and there were no emergencies. Summary: This is a suspected AI-assisted novel with a bland plot, which is just average on Tomato 🙂. Keep it up

I like writing about making enemies run away successfully, and I received seven-star praise.

The madness of Red Dog is poorly described, the calmness of the blind man is well described, the skills of the crane are also well described, and the darkness and evil of Devil May Cry have not yet been reflected after watching some of them.