The Holy Swordsman at the Beginning: Cut from the Ground to the Small Garden!

It's a pity. I'm tired of watching Demon Slayer. If you're willing to watch it, it's okay. There's not much problem with the plot. It's a great read.

Five stars It's quite a traditional manga series, and it feels like you're dreaming back to ten years ago. It's a pity that the first copy is Demon Slayer. If it were Apocalypse, it would be even more nostalgic.

Personally, I think it's much better than many other Tomato novels. I suggest you write more old novels. Heroes of the Fallen Knight is pretty good. It's an absolute double-edged sword. There are many other old novels that are quite good and you can write them all. Come on [I've learned]

It's a very good fanfic, but the fact that the protagonist is an indigenous person doesn't give people a strong sense of empathy.

Give the author 5 stars. I haven't seen a good article in a long time [Like] Come on [Like] [Salute] Come on! ! Personally I feel pretty good [eating melon]

Where's the holy sword? Ah! I've looked at more than 20 pictures, but I haven't seen them yet!

One less star is for fear of your pride

Four stars. There's nothing bad about it, but I've seen too many of this type. It's a pity that it can't be mentioned as five stars.

It's very interesting. By the way, I have some suggestions. I hope the author can read them: 1. Supporting characters can have CP, but do not open a harem (except for the background board like Demon Slayer) 2. The relationship between the protagonist and Stella is going a bit wrong. There is nothing wrong with Stella. The main reason is that the protagonist only regards Stella as a teammate in the first place, and then hugs her directly. It feels a bit like the male protagonist does not reject Stella just because he likes it. I hope that the male protagonist's "like" for Stella can be optimized in the future. 3. It feels bad to leave the failed dungeon world in the middle. I hope that the next dungeon world can directly tell the story and then come back. Control the length of each dungeon world to about 30 chapters 4. The world flow ratio between the dungeon world and the dungeon world is 120:1. Although this setting allows the protagonist to develop himself quickly, it will also cause a problem: if the protagonist stays in the dungeon world for a year, the characters in other dungeon worlds may have been sent. So I hope the author will make a patch later so that the world time stops after leaving the dungeon world.

It's quite possible. You can also write about other worlds. But now that there are girls, should we consider Suqing's side? Do you also need to write down the fgO mentioned in the introduction? It's best to add pictures when you write something wrong. It's mainly because I haven't seen them and don't know what they look like.

The ending of "Spreading Flowers" is very well written. The feeling of the plot reminds me of the novels I read before, Luo Qing's all-round fantasy + the feeling of the miraculous summoner. The strength is certain [smile]

The writing is very good and the writing style is also very good, especially this one. The plot of the other world as the beginning is also very well written. Then I just want to pay attention to it. Is there no heroine, single heroine, or multiple heroines? Who is the heroine?

I hope to receive more female protagonists soon. Come on!

The setting is very interesting. The protagonist's template is an old sword in FGO, and the gift system is used to improve the strength. However, because the protagonist traveled from the moon world to the earth with a certain foundation, he started to improve from LV1 based on this foundation, and went to ghosts and monsters to increase his strength. Therefore, many people do not understand and think that the author is a breathing method. Although the main system is a gift, he has to learn the breathing method. (Personal opinion) According to the setting in FGO, King Arthur, who has the heart of the dragon, can continuously produce magic power with every breath. The appearance of the magic call can be said to be very suitable for the improvement of the protagonist in all aspects in the early stage. The two complement each other and I think it can reasonably increase the strength of the protagonist and let the protagonist participate in the plot. And according to the setting of the gift, to increase the magic power, you must know magic, but not everyone has magic. The magic call can make people continuously increase their magic power 24 hours a day. Even the race of dwarves with low magic talent can continuously improve it. The current Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba's benchmark is Sword Art Online, the previous comprehensive manga novel. The former comprehensive manga novice world is most likely SAO. Except for the improvement of the sword, the previous comprehensive manga novel is Sword Art Online. The previous comprehensive manga novice world is most likely SAO. In addition to improving sword skills, it is forging weapons in the game to bring back reality. Demon Slayer is a very good novice world in all aspects, and if you look at the fandom, it must depend on how the author modifies the plot and the demon modification setting within a reasonable range, right? [Thinking] The following plot is not bad. Everything about the protagonist begins to be explained. The only thing that made me think about it for a long time is that I always thought that the sister the protagonist was talking about was the director (because the protagonist's surname is Animusfia), but later I found out that he was talking about Matthew (the author explained that because the protagonist is an android, the whole family does not recognize him. Matthew is a junior who has the same experience and is regarded by Cardiff as his real sister) It's a bit difficult to evaluate the heroine. I always thought it was Riveria, but the first person to confirm their relationship was Stella.

The male protagonist is too lonely. There is no female protagonist and no girls close to him. Alas, what a pity.

Classic ghost killing, classic breathing method [laughing awkwardly], it's okay if you ignore it

I've finished reading it, and it's pretty good as a refreshing article. The writing, logic, and plot of the novel are all good. It's just that in the middle and late stages of writing, it started to get a little messy, and it felt like it was written in a jumpy manner (a bit deleted). There is only one small suggestion. You can add a little background introduction to each world, which will make the reading smoother. Overall, there are no great highlights or major problems, but it is good to finish it smoothly.

It's not like Tomato, but it feels a bit like (seven o'clock). It's well written (*≧∪≦)👍🏻. I'd like to ask whether it's a single heroine or multiple heroines [Thinking]

It's pretty good, but it feels like a cool novel, and not too toxic. By the way, I'd like to inform you that this is not that closely related to Xingyue. There should be an FGO chapter in the back. It's still good to read as a traveler traveling through the world.

I guess the cw cat routine came from there, otherwise not many people would have written the book "Failure", but the plot design is quite good, food and grass Well, it's not appropriate to start a new chapter like Suqing. It's just a comedy episode. The combat power is too low, and the fighting has turned into comedy and the sense of fragmentation is too strong. Bone King, Five-leaf Clover, Monster No. 8, Monster Hunter, and one punch are all more reliable than Suqing. Being able to fight is also suitable for improving combat power.

Great, no need to say more

Is the protagonist a time traveler? Why can't I tell at all?

A whiff of all-round fantasy

This is the first time I see an author writing about landing. It must be 5 stars.

A fairly traditional novel about the palace style of the Queen of Heaven, you can also read [Chigua]

Not bad, no big poison

Two of my favorite themes merged together, one by one, an old sword Arthur, if there were ten stars, I would give it ten stars without hesitation.

I just like fate-type novels. I hope the author can write more [adoration][adoration][adoration]

The plot before the God-killing chapter can be given 5 stars.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking