Beng Tie, Why Is There Something Wrong with My Ya Die?

Zhuang Zhou's Dream "Butterfly" I feel that the author's writing style is quite good, and there is nothing poisonous about it. There are basically no repeated words in the whole process, and the listening experience is excellent. Moreover, the subject matter is very attractive, and I still want to eat it after eating it. If there are no problems later, I think it is possible to get a score of 8.5 Or above.

I feel that this is a well-written novel about a yandere fantasy. Ah, I don't know why, but I feel quite comfortable looking at this yandere Yadie. It feels similar to Black Tower. They all traveled back in time to when the heroine was a child and then developed a yandere. The protagonist of this article should have embarked on the path of pure beauty. It is even said that he is part pure beauty star god. Then the author also said that there will be a story similar to My Girlfriend from 1000 Years Ago. I'm still looking forward to the time-travel novel. Okay, let's publish this much first.

Have I completely become a yandere? It's interesting, please update soon, I like to read it

There shouldn't be a knife, right? ? ? I really look forward to how Xia Die became a yandere? So far, the writing is pretty good. The writing style is very good. If there are no major problems, the upper limit will probably be around 9.5 Points. I want to know why our lovely butterfly baby turned black

It's a very good second-generation novel. It describes Xia Die's emotions towards the protagonist in great detail. It doesn't just make you fall in love with it right from the beginning. The plot is well done and it looks quite comfortable. The settings added by the author himself are also very good, without any system stuff. However, it is a new book after all, and there are a few chapters. I am full of expectations for the subsequent plot. Although there are some minor flaws, I personally think this novel is very good. Why are there so few people? What about the 36,000 people? Come on [crying]

This book is well written in my opinion. It was great to get along with Xia Die before the transmigration. It was the first time for me to experience the transmigration plot. It was great to put aside the slight discomfort (except for the cousin who made me confused). But the girl in the middle and Polykes was quite uncomfortable to watch, making me feel as uncomfortable as NTR. The description also made me feel that the protagonist at that time treated the butterfly like a plaything. This was against the pure beauty, so I dropped one star. But the subsequent plot seems pretty good, and the future is promising. Maybe after the rescue, it will be considered a five-star movie for me. Is it okay later?

The writing is smooth and well written｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡ There is also the author who has superb cfm technology (•̀⌄•́)

If you want to scold me, go to the bottom of this comment and scold me [cry][cry][cry]

Xia Die is very cute and the plot is great [Like]

Pigeon, pigeon, I have written a book review, can you give us women's clothing? I know the other authors are all good at cross-dressing! If it doesn't work, just update it. [Laughs crookedly]

You can consider it finished when you reach Chapter 129. If you still want to read further, be prepared to watch the plot after Arc Heaven and Hell.

It looks good initially [like] Author, please stop, if you continue like this, you will end up in a dark room! [Sinister smile]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking A masterpiece! Nice!

Beautiful, detailed description

Pigeon said evaluation of wearing women's clothing

Hao watched it too Hao watched it [laughs]

Yandere butterflies are rare

I don't really like the subject of reverse wear, but overall it's good, but because I don't like it I can only run away, bye [love]

Very thoughtful, it would be better to update ten chapters a day [Chigua]

Haokan is quite haokan, but I felt that it was a bit weird to dress backwards and be yandere, so I ran away😰

The book is very good. I hope the author can continue to do better and not be a bad book.

A very high-quality Yadie fanfic. Let me tell you about it. It was the first time I met the male protagonist of the Bentie fanfic of Chunmei Lingshi.

I hope there is no eternal farewell

Good looking, good luck to the author

Help the author write a book review [laughing]

Good looking, no doubt

Dove's new book, good-looking, love to read [love] [love] [love]

Looks good, looks good, feels good

It looks good, it looks good.

It's beautiful, I'd love to read more.