Chuan Shu: I'm Timid, What's Wrong with Being a Little Quiet?

This is the only road novel with a CP that I have seen so far. I kind of hope that the male protagonist is Brother Cricket. There may be a little spoiler below, because Brother Cricket is not a killer, he is a ruthless one. Most of the important materials that the heroine needs in the early stage are provided by Brother Cricket. , And then Brother Cricket faces the emotional scene with the heroine in it. From the beginning, he thought the heroine was provoking him, to the hesitation and entanglement in the current chapter, it is a complete emotional change. The cute heroine and the originally lonely killer should not be too easy to match, the killer brother is such a little sunshine! The villain has almost no emotional scenes in the early stage. He teased the heroine when they first met, but the heroine didn't know it was teasing, but was very nervous and scared. Moreover, the heroine currently does not want to participate in the main plot of the original book. I think the villain can be a partner, but the relationship scenes are a bit mediocre. I support Brother Cricket as the male protagonist.

The heroine is growing up, but it may seem slow and uncomfortable. But in fact, the character of the heroine is very realistic for us. After all, who dares to say that a person who has never even killed a chicken can kill gods and Buddhas in a survival game? I think the heroine is just an ordinary girl with a little bit of luck. When it comes to normal performance in a survival game, she will be scared, cry, and want to help others. Even if she knows some of the plot, she will not consider herself to be from a God's perspective. I really like this kind of heroine and this kind of story, please continue writing, author.

The author's writing is good, the writing is very graphic, and the plot is very compact, but I have a small suggestion, that is, the author made the protagonist a little bit more appropriate (maybe because I read more articles about strong women). When I was reading the early stage, the protagonist was wearing a vest, ranked third in the rankings, had water purifier blueprints, air conditioner blueprints, and was the only player selling special ingredients. Although she is afraid of the big villain, she doesn't have to be so polite when communicating with others, right? (It's really like when a college student communicates with others. I feel that the author should still be a student [facepalm]) Especially in the exchange of sanitary napkins with the lucky little koi, and as the protagonist, when looking at the Madonna of the End of the World (little koi), especially because you described it. In the description, I felt that the protagonist recognized the behavior of the little koi, which made me feel that the protagonist is also more like the Madonna, although the Virgin explained the help of the fish in water. As a normal little girl, the protagonist is faced with an apocalyptic game. Of course, it is normal to have such a reaction, and it can even be said to be an excellent performance. But as the protagonist of a world, she has a bit of a supporting role. Ps. This is not a writing guide, just expressing my opinion on this book. I still like this book very much! ! ! I also read what the author had to say, but as a new writer, the author's writing style is really good!

The heroine's character is indeed not that of a particularly smart heroine. But I like it very much because I think it is a growth type. From the first chapter to the latest chapter, I can clearly feel that the heroine is getting stronger. If you like reading cool articles, you can go and read cool articles specifically. This is more realistic. I'm a little curious about the relationship development between the male and female protagonists. The author has probably not thought about how to develop it, haha. It's okay if there aren't many emotional lines, I really like watching the growth of the heroine. I think the heroine's kindness is not a bad thing. As long as it's not too holy, it's fine. The people the heroine helps may be useful in the later stages. Even if disaster strikes, it's good to maintain some good qualities. [Sending Hearts]

It's a very interesting book, and it brought me into the road survival genre. I hope that the follow-up progress will be faster and the pace of the article will be faster. After watching it for so long, I have no feeling for the male protagonist. I don't know if I should buy stocks and put them on the bookshelf first. If I am sure that Brother Cricket will become the male protagonist, I want to kick him.

It's pretty good so far, with a few minor flaws, but nothing major. In the early stages, the heroine was rather stupid, so I told myself that the heroine traded IQ for luck, so it didn't matter if she immediately felt stupid. At the beginning, the heroine was naive, timid, and afraid of the future. Later, the heroine grew up, gradually improved, accumulated strength little by little, and became stronger and stronger. Moreover, the heroine's team is really good and a very loving team. I've been watching Lone Wolf and No CP for a long time, and now I want to see some teams with CP. It's just a pity that it's not finished.

The writing is getting better and better later on, but it was a bit confusing at the beginning. Then I endured it until now, and admit that the voice was a bit loud before. Come on, come on, it will be good if you read more every day, hehehe I really like Brother Cricket and the direct interaction between the heroine and Xia Yan.

The heroine in the early stage is an ordinary person with extremely high luck but some minor flaws. After meeting gourmets by chance and getting along like a fish in water, they began to grow up gradually... Black Cricket and Feng Wuying's Shura Field are also very beautiful. Finally, I hope the author can inexplicably release ten more chapters (.?) Because it is so good that it is a bit unreadable. I thought this article was very interesting, so I read it after reading it for more than half a year. I finished reading it in less than two hours, which is a pity And, thank you to the author for bringing me into the world of road writing. This is the first road novel I have read, and this work fulfills my fantasy of road novels. Five-star praise, I hope the author can continue to make better works after finishing this film [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

It looks good. The heroine is a dark cook, and the dark food she makes has side effects. This setting is quite interesting. Currently they are all about survival, getting stronger, having companionship, and prefer group portraits! I really like the relationship between Black Cricket and Sister Bao, but seeing that the male protagonist is Feng Wuying, Sister Bao has a bit of a facial control, which makes her CP collapse [almost crying]

I have read about 4-5 road survival stories, all of which are non-CP. After reading too many, I suddenly lose interest, but I also like reading road survival stories. I came across this book accidentally because I was attracted by the name. This book by the author is a survival story with cp that I think is relatively easy to read. Although at the beginning you may think that the heroine is not that strong or courageous enough, it still seems real. The article does not tend to be enjoyable from beginning to end. The heroine's growth is also gradual and gradually becomes stronger. The author portrays Black Cricket and Feng Wuying very well. In fact, I think the article would be better and more realistic if the article slowly writes about the relationship between the heroine, Black Cricket and Feng Wuying. But the author writes it like this, and it is very enjoyable to read at a fast pace.

In fact, the score of this article is the most normal score in Tomato in my opinion (I feel that the Tomato score is generally on the high side, and there are indeed more surprises at the beginning. For example, the heroine is really weak in the early stage. If the pace in the early stage is faster, some outlines are not deleted or changed, and the score of living a good life with the male protagonist and two or three people will be higher in my mind. It's really stupid in the early stage, but I'm happy with the fact that everything is hard to buy, so it's okay. There are more than 50 chapters that I really can't stand anymore. In fact, I can't stand it since the male protagonist was confirmed, hahaha

It's just very good. I don't understand why the comment section is so malicious [laughs]. It can be seen that the male villain is Feng Wuying. It's quite obvious. After saving for so long, I finally saved more than 80 chapters. The female protagonist is kind-hearted to her teammates, but she doesn't have the heart of a holy mother who shouldn't be kind to the bad guys. The heroine is one of those growing-up little sun heroines. How could she cut through the mess with a cold-blooded and quick knife as soon as she gets on the road? I have no problem with the author writing about the heroine's growth. I don't understand why the reviewers regard the heroine's growth as a fool's act. It was normal to help each other on the road at the beginning. Later, someone saw that the heroine was easy to bully, and the heroine also took revenge and went back. Occasional losses don't mean anything. This article is very good, five-star recommendation [send heartfelt] I would like to add that Feng Wuying and Black Cricket should be the same person at the beginning. From the introduction and the multiple identities described by the author later (it is similar to creating a new account but the person is still the same.), Later the author differentiated Feng Wuying and Black Cricket into two people. , I don't really get this point. A main character in a novel can have two male protagonists, but the same character is not interesting. What's more, the differentiation is because many readers said that Black Cricket is more beautiful, but didn't the author just want to give Feng Wuying a layer of armor from the beginning? Readers will be satisfied after such differentiation, but readers who understand it from the beginning will feel inconsistent. I can't stand it any longer [grieved]

Although the heroine has a holy heart and is overflowing with sympathy, she is quite interesting to watch, for those who like to read CP articles. (So you really can't take Brother Cricket under your wing? I want both [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]) Please update please update

It's very interesting. At first, I just wanted to find a story with CP, but I was attracted by the growth line of the heroine. The love line is slow to develop, and I haven't even kissed yet, but the ambiguous details in it are pretty good. I obviously hate reading long stories, but I didn't expect to read it for so long. I like the characters of both the male protagonist and the second male lead, I hope they don't end badly [laughing]

I think the writing is very good. I hope the author can keep his original intention and continue to write what he wants to write. You can refer to the suggestions, but I hope the comments will not affect the creative inspiration. It is difficult to agree with everyone. Some people like cool articles, some like sad articles, some like sweet articles, etc. There are various tastes. No article can be comprehensive. , Anyway, in the eyes of me, a bookworm of more than ten years, the author's book has a unique and immersive feel. You can guess the general direction of many books after reading half of them. Even the apocalyptic water has a lot of daily word count. This book is still somewhat fresh to me. Come on, author, he will get better and better as he writes! I read half of it when I was serializing it. I forgot about the content and started reading it again. It was still very interesting. The protagonist's personality is very humane, but the comment section is really cruel. I have read many apocalyptic articles with almost uniformly cruel and ruthless protagonists. Apart from being happy, there is no trace of humanity. The protagonist of this article has human emotions, and the writing style is also humorous, so it is suitable to read carefully.

... The sentences are fluent and the writing is good, and the plot is reasonable and hidden with joy. An interesting classic road story, a growth-oriented heroine with extraordinary luck, and a talented dark cooking master. Pay attention, not a strong woman, not a strong woman, not a strong woman! ! ! ! Let me say the important things three times. The heroine's actual combat power is not very high at present, and she is a fake boss who pulls the strings of others. I have been following the update for a month, and now the plot has reached the airdrop night event. The male protagonist's power has begun to show signs, and the female protagonist has wide connections and high overall quality. The rating may be low right now, but it will go up. The heroine's character in the early stage was very unlikable (overly timid, overly timid, text-pleasing syndrome, and late-stage lazy cancer), but she has been growing in the direction of killing decisively. The world view is complete, the content is humorous, and the copy is rich and thought-provoking. It is highly readable and is a road book with great potential.

As a road survival story, it's pretty good and pretty! After getting through the pitfalls in the early stages (I feel like I can fast-forward to the middle and later stages), the rest is pretty smooth. The heroine is also slowly growing up, and I'm following her every day!

Very nice! The first section is about personal road survival, and it will be very enjoyable for those who like to watch the stocking up. In the middle, when the male protagonist, friends and other characters begin to be enriched, the plot becomes hilarious and interesting. The male and female protagonists and the black cricket interact. It really makes the adrenaline surge, blushing and heartbeating. Save the earth at the end, the serialization is not over yet, woo woo woo. . . . .

There are laughter and tears, there are group portraits, and the CP ratio is not high, which I like very much. The heroine slowly becomes stronger step by step. At the beginning, the male and female protagonists never interacted with each other, but the second male lead became more and more likable. I also wondered how the male protagonist captured the heart of the female protagonist later on. I was so moved when I saw the later part. But I also really like Black Cricket Boss.

It's pretty good-looking. The heroine is a relatively lucky ordinary person and a bit of a homebody. It's understandable that she couldn't complete the exercise task she did every day in the early stage. She's still a relatively fragile ordinary person. However, in the later period, the heroine also started to exercise regularly and her physical condition improved a bit. Those who said that the heroine can't do the training task in this survival game and give up, you can try it yourself to see if you can finish it [Thinking] [Thinking] Anyway, I can't. I can't take two steps without breathing. If you can't accept an ordinary person being the heroine, you can just skip it and don't watch it. The author's writing style is also good. For me, there are basically no outstanding points. The disadvantage is that there are too few. If you don't like to follow serials, you can buy more and read more.

It's very interesting, the writing is humorous, and it's not a big cheat. It's a life-oriented road story. I personally like it very much!

This book is very interesting, but the heroine is a bit abstract at the beginning, but it is indeed a coming-of-age story. She grows up very smoothly in the beginning and the back, and then slowly becomes stronger. The plot in the back is also ups and downs, which I never imagined. There is no such routine. After reading more than 100 chapters, she changed. It may be a habit. Or something else, I think the writing is very good, and the more I read, the better it looks. The abstract feeling in the front is that the author is writing about me [face covering], which is a feeling that has not been integrated into the book suddenly, but the back is really beautiful, everyone has their own characteristics, come on, don't give up, never give up [send heart][send heart][send heart]

In the early stage, the heroine is very annoying. She has a bad memory and her brain cannot be deceived. But she is slowly growing and becoming stronger little by little. The heroine's character is very close to ordinary people. If you don't accept it, don't watch it. Later, the heroine gradually becomes more mature. It looks a bit like a story about growing up. In the end, the hero and Brother Cricket are really good at each other. It is more important for the three of you to live a good life than anything else.

It's really beautiful. I wait for the author's updates every day^O^ The heroine is kind but not a virgin (I personally think she can help others appropriately when she has the ability). The protagonists are growth-oriented. They are all very strong and are working hard to become stronger. They are not complacent with the status quo. It's a piece of writing that I think is very good. I've been following it for a long time.

The book is very good, very interesting, and I really want to follow it. After all, it is really rare to find a road novel that suits my heart and has a CP, but I really, really want Mr. Cricket to be the male protagonist. Mainly because he got to know the heroine, and their early interactions were easy to get along with. Then I saw the real male protagonist later. There are more and more scenes and more and more interactions with the heroine, and I can't accept it😔😭😭

The subject matter is very novel. The focus of this article is on the growth of the heroine. You are just a very ordinary person. She is soft-hearted and kind-hearted, and she is loyal. So in the early stage, to be honest, I was a little bit heartbroken, but when I think of her, she is just an ordinary person, an ordinary person living in a peaceful world. She does not have superhuman wisdom or extraordinary force, but she is indeed making progress little by little, so please give her some patience! She will get better. I have only read 500 chapters now. I feel that the author describes the small characters in the story very well. Everyone has their own growth path. This is a book about unity and friendship. The heroine relies on her kindness and righteousness to bring different types of people together to overcome difficulties together! !

The heroine may seem a little bit virginal at first (it will be changed later), but the author's writing style is progressive, the characters are very delicate, and the middle is particularly funny. The heroine is not given too many golden fingers. It is a good survival novel with long-term flow, flesh and blood, opportunities and risks, warmth and challenges.

It's a really nice road story, with the feeling of a long flowing water, and the description is very delicate. The heroine gradually grows up, and the relationship with Xiao Yuer is also very touching. There are copies and group portraits. In the later period, the male and female protagonists get along well with each other. I watch the updates every day, it is very beautiful!

It's really good to read. I finished reading it in three hours. [I almost cried] [I almost cried] [I almost cried] [I almost cried] [I almost cried] [I almost cried] The author wrote a lot. Love to read. Love to read.

It's very interesting, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, and the heroine keeps improving and growing! Cheerful and strong personality! [Admiration] It looks great. I love watching it. Come on! You wrote so well! Don't stop updating! Support you! [Like][Like][Like] Seriously, a little meltdown. Because he was in the same district as the villain, I thought the villain was the male protagonist, so I always regarded him as the male protagonist. Although his presence was not strong, I still regarded him as the male protagonist. I saw that many people were supporting Mr. Cricket or Doomsday Gourmet. If the male protagonist became one of them, it would be a bit of a breach of defense, so I gave Feng Wuying a voice and let him compete for the male protagonist. Feng Wuying's setting as the male protagonist is also quite good, but he appears less often [face covering] em... No way, no more tricks, let us Feng Wuying compete for the male lead.