Sword Art Online: a Swordsman's Daily Battle

The reason for giving four stars is because the second half of the first volume is a bit watered down and a little rushed, and the portrayal of the people around the protagonist is not enough. I personally feel that the first volume can write more daily content to deepen the characterization of the characters, and also have a little more contact with the original protagonist group. I feel that this will be more friendly to readers who have not read the original work. I will not comment too much on the transitional volume of the second volume, after all, the original work does not describe much about the real world; the third volume currently has a good overall impression, go for it, author! Make persistent efforts! Lots of updates!

This is a very good sword fanfic, and it ranks in the top three among the fanfics I read. This book does not follow the original routine or plot, but the author adapted a large part of it. It's very innovative

In fact, I feel that SAO is relatively simple as an MMO. BOSS battles are just pure numerical collisions. There are no more difficult mechanical BOSSs. Look at the mechanical books of domestic MMOs. If one person makes a mistake, the whole team will die suddenly. If this were placed in SAO, one BOSS would probably consume all the players in the strategy group just by clearing land [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

Why is there no trace of the heroine at all? When did the author let the male protagonist and the female protagonist be together?

It's okay. Please keep writing, the author. I especially like Suguha. I hope to concentrate on writing more stories about the male protagonist and Suguha instead of writing about other people putting the cart before the horse [face covering]

Very good. I don't think there is a better sword fan in Tomato. Come on, author.

Good-looking, good-looking, good, good

It looks good, I hope the author can make it longer.

What can I say? I still hope that the author can take the time to read the novel version and correct the bugs in the first few chapters. After reading the original version of the novel, reading this book will make a farmer feel shocked when he sees the monthly income of a company boss. Attachment: This is the most original book I have seen in Tomato. If it is updated normally and bugs are corrected, it should be at the ceiling level among sword fan fiction. Of course, the writing style is not as good as Kawahara's old thief, but it is enough to make people look forward to it.

Very good sword fanfic

The front part is still very interesting, I suggest you start retreating after Kirito was stabbed.

I haven't read other sword fanfics, so this one is pretty good so far.

This is the best Sword Art Online fanfic I have ever seen.

Do you have a fan base [smile]