Tokyo*********

Not bad. At present, it is not certain whether Ichika is a time traveler, after all, her own memory is quite vague. Similar to being invincible, there is even a plot where "future Kaneki Ken gets on top of current Kaneki Ken" and then kills randomly. Ichika's fighting performance is also very strong. The plot is relatively compact, with almost no transition between events. And I don't understand how to let a 6-year-old child leave his parents to go and change the world.

When Ichika came back from time travel, I thought it was an accident at first, but later it was arranged that Kaneki, who became the king, would also come back. According to the subsequent plot, it can be seen that it must be Kaneki's arrangement, but for what purpose? Later, it was said that Ichika was needed to create a world where ghouls and humans could coexist? A six-year-old girl? Was that wrong? Then why does the Bronze Tree capture Ichika? Then it suddenly turns 12 years old. To be honest, this is really a bit confusing. A six-year-old girl suddenly becomes bigger. Even a ghoul cannot change all the bones in her body instantly. Then why does Ichika have to replace his father to create the Black Goat? Secondly, Kaneki is a bit cold-blooded. I think the author's description at the beginning is calm and gentle. Um, it's not equal, and as a little girl, Ichika's combat power is too high, and her personality is a bit contrasting. You said a 12-year-old child with an IQ of only six years old manages a large organization? This is completely forcibly raising the IQ. From the beginning of the life of a cute girl in the stable area to the sudden creation of a black goat to hunt ghouls, the sense of separation is particularly strong.

It looks great, thank you to the author.