Warhammer 40K: the Story of the Time Travel

It's ordinary, but the protagonist is like a normal person, which is the most rare thing. To put it bluntly, the protagonists of some fan fiction are similar to human beings...

It's good to read, I love to read it, the author writes it well, the protagonist's character is also very good, the whole story goes smoothly, I can read it even if I read it every few days, it's not a harem kind of thing, I don't understand how you can talk so much in one breath in Warhammer, it's amazing, anyway, I'm tired of watching that kind of thing, hey, I can't stand it as soon as I have a girlfriend and wife, because some of them are not well written, a bit unnatural, hey, I'm not afraid of being taken over by Slaanesh, even a simple Krieger can kill him

It's very beautiful. The normal version of Perturabo shows no mercy to chaos. He has a correct outlook on life. His sister and brother are also alive. It's like a dream-fulfilling fairy tale. Friends who were hurt by the original work can read it. The disadvantage is that the hang-up is too big. In just a few chapters, you can easily pull the loyal version of the rebel Primarch, and Chaos is no longer playable [laughing and crying]

At least it's not AI, the writing style is light, and the plot is more attractive to me. Five stars for encouragement, I hope there will be more updates soon The hangup is relatively large, and my desire to catch up with the update is not so strong... Those who were hurt by the original work can come and take a look.

Not bad, the group of magic modified original bodies is almost 10 people.

Very good Peipei, reading this kind of tender article makes my heart warm. I like the interaction between Peipei and her sister. The very good family relationship makes my 🐡 spin. I hope Yuan Pei can see it and break his guard😋

This article was not written by AI. At present, the writing style is relatively stable, not a piece of fiction, but occasionally a little humorous. I think as long as the author continues to write, the rating of this book will never be too low.

Overall, it is a relaxing and joyful story about saving the world. Can it be regarded as redeeming regrets? But I can't stand the rebels being killed and replaced by loyalists pulled from the Apocrypha. Although it is normal for the Empire to surrender to death, the fact that I came to Perturabo shows that I still have some feelings for the rebels. Even if I spurn the rebels, it is too much to find others to inherit all the remaining advantages and glory of the other party and then throw away the main body.

It's not that you update one chapter in a few days, I'm also drunk. If you update two chapters in one day, you must be very popular. Well, I took a look and it's okay. It's been more than a month and you've only written this much.

Good looking, finally the ruffian boss is not a naughty person [Cool]

It's very well written and the characters are very good. The main perspective is from the alternate world of Perturabo. His abilities are almost unleveled, and he draws the loyalists of Apocrypha to come over, and their interaction is very interesting, without any harsh separation. Yunzhui is also very comfortable to watch. Every time the pony appears, he feels happy. He has beaten three demonic primitives so far. He is very powerful.

I have a question, can the protagonist and the primarchs recruited by the protagonist awaken the essence of the warp, especially the protagonist? The renegade Perturabo became a demon of Chaos Undivided, and did not lose his warp essence like the renegade Primarch who took refuge in the Four Gods. In this case, can the protagonist awaken to the subspace? If he awakens, will he directly have one more of his own, or will he have to compete with the original Perturabo?

It's very good. I've been reading it for a long time and it deserves five stars. However, the update speed is too slow. The writing is okay, at least it sounds okay. The review is that the pufferfish is a little bit poisonous but very fresh and delicious~ The author quickly updated it and someone came to change it for me. Let's play music and dance~😋. The update speed can be faster.

The writing is very good and steady, and it feels good, not AI. Later, the protagonist gradually merged with Petolabo from a time traveler, and turned into a positive version of Petolabo. By the way, the Angron Red Emperor pony Flawless Phoenix from the apocrypha will appear later. Oh, by the way, the human part of the emperor has become a lolita (image)

It's pretty good. Pure hand rubbing can achieve this quality. The literary drama is handled well. Unfortunately, the martial arts drama is a little bit worse.

Update me quickly, quickly, quickly, quickly, quickly, quickly, quickly. Quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick.

The writing is very good, now I need to challenge the longest river and the highest mountain in Tomato Warhammer. Please enter the text: Red River, Eldest Princess, Holy Word Luojia, Bona (the first high-quality book I read), Astra Militarum. By the way, there is also the Red Dragon Emperor

Come on, big brother who writes about embarrassing people

It's hard for me to imagine that a novel I started writing at the end of November last year only has 220,000 words and 45 chapters now😩 I haven't read it for a long time and I successfully read it for the second time. It's very interesting. It can be seen that the author is really serious about writing. The author also treats everyone's comments sincerely and corrects mistakes in time. I respect you, the author! 🤓

Awesome, I want to see the mouth and teeth of the Iron Holy Statue! ! !

Compared to other shit of the same type, this one is pretty good.

Well written, you will be rewarded by becoming an e-devil. For the sake of human beings, one man divides his troops into four groups and kills four hawkers [laughing]

Although this book is written by a novice, the author is very willing to polish his work in detail. It now has more than 100,000 words, but I can read it all in one sitting, which is better than the author who wrote half the book.

Although it is relatively short, it is really good-looking! 😭🥰

More more more more more more more more more more more more, very nice [like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like]

Can the author come up with a better title that will at least attract readers' interest in reading? Not bad, I enjoyed it

The idea is very good, it just depends on how to write it next.

I can't catch up with the children. Why did the expedition take so long? I feel like I couldn't understand it when I watched The Unremembered Empire. The 30k Macragge has a book from the 2k period.

It can be compared with the eldest princess next door. This book is also very good.

I think I'm very good-looking. If I don't look good, I'll turn into a beautiful girl for my brothers. Especially one of them, Macragge's Adventure, made me laugh so hard (bushi) [laughs]