Cultivation, This Is the Immortal Who Is Cultivating!

The subject matter is good, the writing is also good, and there are a lot of laughs. The only thing that I can't accept is the love line. Between the two love lines, I either go to one directly to confirm the other, or directly start a harem. At the beginning, Qingmei's writing was too warm, but later on, another woman was introduced, which caused the emotional line of the whole story to suddenly become disconnected. Moreover, due to the deletion and editing of the early emotional line between the one who played Tianxiang and the protagonist, the early love line was confusing, especially the first kiss was too abrupt, resulting in a significant drop in experience. It is not that I hate Tianxiang, but that the emotional line is not handled appropriately. In other cases, I feel good so far. (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it, I have given it a 5-star rating)

There is a female protagonist, multiple female supporting characters, and a lot of ambiguity. I like to watch pure love and non-CP, lightning protection. I heard someone mentioned that the author has made revisions. What I heard now is that the female protagonist started to appear after the latest version. I have not re-read it. I still maintain my concept. If I have seen it recently, it is definitely true and I can explain it below. Please do not criticize or use inappropriate words. Thank you.

It's quite funny and light-hearted. It's not a mindless read, but you can still read it. The novel is quite interesting for readers and there are many talented players among them. The heroine may be two heroines, of course, it may be three. The author himself didn't say it clearly. There is a childhood sweetheart, a fox demon junior sister, and Lin Shiyu. To be honest, Lin Shiyu's plot arrangement is a bit problematic. It's too fast. I still don't like it. It was a bit hostile, and then it became ambiguous. When I saw that part, I felt that I was more confused than the protagonist. In comparison, the childhood sweethearts and junior sisters who have some emotional foundation have not made any progress. Lin Shiyu, this weird talent, came from the sky immediately. The author is really not as good at writing emotional lines as abstract. This is a multi-female protagonist, so it is still a bit poisonous. If you can accept it, it is still very interesting.

Brothers! ! Show me! ! ! ! ! I took turns reading it on both phones and finished it. I would call it the happiest novel during the Chinese New Year. I didn't skip a chapter. Whether it was Qin Luofeng, Shen Jianren or Brother Dahuang, they were all my favorites. There was a female protagonist, but it really didn't matter. I laughed from beginning to end. Do you know how hard it is to hold back laughter in the middle of the night? The whole thing is a kind of relaxed daily life, the whole text is free of charge, I really love it, this abstract Tianyuan world, it is my favorite among the five million-word novels written during the Chinese New Year! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Look, look, it's pretty good. The writing is bland but not entirely without ripples. The cheating is done honestly, there are no weird tricks, the rhythm of cheating is also handled well, it is not frustrating to be invincible at once, and the growth path is also clear. In addition, the setting of the novel is also quite good. A world that can innovate and bring forth new ideas is always easier than a plot of fighting for some resources. I like this one very much.

There's no plot, it's just jokes [I learned] to write about daily routines, and it's still entertaining to read, so it's well written. This writing style reminds me of the blue-collar Xiaoxiaosheng's books. The characters, abilities, and connections are somewhat similar. I like this kind of books very much. It's bland, funny and cheerful, not depressing.

There are so many hot memes that will make you want to read more. It won't work anymore. This heroine makes it impossible for me to watch anymore. Hey, fuck me.

A very good book, almost impeccable. It must be said that the protagonist's system appearance rate is very small, and it is relatively perfunctory in the situations of "three years later" and "five years later". The growth that the system gives to the protagonist is exponential. It would be really difficult to write without pressure, so it is acceptable. This way of handling it is not a problem.

I really like the function of this system, it's very interesting. I prefer recording life, and it just hit my XP. It's full of life. I also like the character of the protagonist. He is very strong, gentle, and funny. In fact, I don't think he needs a partner at all, because I think his goal is to become stronger. Maybe it's just because the heroine just hit his XP. He really likes stuffed animals. In fact, the heroine is optional, but I prefer not to have one. The author is not very good at writing emotional dramas. Everything else is very good. I think this world really pokes me. I think this world is very interesting. The author is also very humorous and funny. Come on, come on, support you! Except for the heroine, I like everything else, and I think I will finish it. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's a refreshing read about cultivating immortals, the story is simple and engaging, and the author's writing is quite comfortable to read. The Taishi's Douyin is a cover of a cultivator, focusing on writing about the Internet and promoting the economic development of all heavens and worlds. This book, on the other hand, has little presence in the Douyin system and mainly writes about cultivating immortals.

Overall, there are no major unbearable flaws. The only issue worth mentioning is the female protagonist. The author's emotional line is a bit strange, which makes those who want to watch a harem, a single woman, or a film without a heroine a little confused. However, the overall atmosphere and story of the article are still very warm and interesting. I hope that the author will do better in his future works.

Overall, it's pretty good. From a content point of view, it has a certain amount of comedy. At the same time, the content is not so boring and interesting. There's a lot of fun. There's a certain main line. The only drawback is that the relationship between the characters needs to be remembered a little, because the characters are relatively small. Much, uh, the only bad thing is the female protagonist (she likes human heads, is a bit infatuated, and is a bit yandere. Although she may look nice, she is actually very strange), but I said at the beginning that it will be watered down in the later period. Basically, you won't meet her in Chapters 7 and 8. Overall, it's okay.

The God-Man Sect, the God-Man Plane, is hilarious as hell. The setting is very good, but the start is a bit ordinary but there is nothing poisonous about it. It is a world of immortality that will evolve a lot and is very clear. The logic is very clear and not too cliche. The supporting characters are generally very distinctive, and the protagonist is not unique. It has a sense of everyday warmth

The writing is very good, the content is funny and light-hearted, and it is very suitable for leisure reading.

It's very interesting and interesting, the only drawback is the title. More than 200,000 people are reading it, so I added it to the bookshelf. Since the title of the book was unremarkable, I thought it was just an ordinary fantasy novel, so I never read it. But after reading it, I caught up to the latest chapter in one go. But it gets more and more boring later on, especially the plot after ascension

It's a rare comedy masterpiece among Tomatoes. I have a sense of anticipation after reading the whole book. The realistic description is so genius that I couldn't stop laughing [covering my face]. The overall fluency, logic, and shaping of the world view are very good! As a newcomer, my first book can be said to be quite successful. However, because it is the first book, there are some plots that are not handled well, but it is not very serious, not to mention that every book has similar situations. Regardless of the flaws, it is still a very high-quality comedy work about cultivating immortality!

A beautiful article about cultivating immortals, no need to say more Unlike some authors who can't write without villains, the author's Xiuxian here is the real genius of the great sect, and he also wrote how a powerful world should behave.

It is not a dark world of immortality, good and evil are very clear, and everyone except evil cultivators is a good person. It is one of the important cornerstones of daily novels. The plot is not ups and downs or touching, it is what the protagonist sees and feels in the peaceful world of immortality, and it incorporates a lot of funny elements without losing the interest of reading.

This book is so fun. I laughed so much that I felt like I was possessed by Aha. I highly recommend reading it!

I've finished reading it. I just started reading it. It's very interesting because it's the author's first book. Newbies will always be a little confused. Once confused, they will listen to the readers' advice, and then the writing becomes a bit confusing. This is also the reason why there are many inexplicable nodes in the book, but in general This is an excellent book. There is no other book in which the protagonist is either on the way to fight or fighting. There are no passers-by who want to mess with the protagonist the first time they see him. This is a light-hearted and enjoyable novel about daily immortality. It is also a refreshing novel. The protagonist never gets frustrated.

Hahahahahahaha, it's a very interesting book, worth reading (the author is very funny), funny but not exaggerated (laughing in the middle of the night gave me a stomachache). Disadvantages: The later stage is a little boring compared to the early stage, but overall it has no impact. The biggest shortcoming: The emotional scenes are a bit stretched, which is also the main reason for giving four stars (but the author himself said that this is a great attempt, so it is understandable). Reading suggestion: You can briefly read the emotional drama part Overall rating: Delicious with a few flaws, needless to say! ! !

Just like the title of the book, it is indeed very casual for everyday use. Overturned the traditional impression of the world of immortality This is a realistic author! [Sinister smile]

This book is very interesting, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight with Dong Zhuo for Dong Zhuo's sake. Lin Daiyu fought for hundreds of rounds. But Xue Baochai is really too strong . If it weren't for Noxian's outer ring + Noxian beheading Taiwan. This wave of M4's six times strafing will kill you, among other things. I compare Appreciate what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Little You are so arrogant, don't stop in front of your brother Liang" to show Zhu Liang Three sticks to the monkey to kill his homesickness. All in all, this book Festival is interesting.

It's very interesting to watch and has a lot of laughs and IQ is online [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

It's really good-looking, and it's also really abstract. The parts about Du Ling and Impermanence were so explosive.

It's a very funny book. The main character in the sect is also a sect of gods. Don't be shy, the whole world is a sect of gods. The language is witty and humorous, and every time I see those "real" special effects, people can't help laughing [Like] [Like]

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Mountain 108: "Don't show off your arrogance in front of Brother Liang, young man." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, a lot of foreshadowing, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good.

The writing is weak and the plot is bland, but very comfortable. After watching too much fighting and killing, it's a good change of taste [Chigua]

The daily episode is so good and has enough emotional value. Although there are not many battle scenes, they are still very good. Another thing is that the author should update it soon! There are no donkeys in the production team, why are you so lazy!

Don't look at so many low ratings. What would you say about the character of the junior brother? The main character doesn't mention the younger brother at all in the back. If you don't like it, you can skip reading it. This book is an abstract and funny book. The latest one has wandered around the world and has become an immortal. It is an abstract and funny book. This is the only one I like and keep updating. I sincerely recommend it. Bo, oh, by the way, once again clarify that the protagonist has said in the middle period that he can cultivate clones. Readers, don't worry. *^_^* It's not mentioned at all later. Don't worry. The bloody plot between the clones and the protagonist is because I also hate seeing it in person. Read it with confidence (≧∇≦) After the lower bound and the protagonist becoming invincible, the author has no ambition to update. He keeps reminiscing. In the past, if the popularity of this book was still very high, I could still remember it. Now, I have almost forgotten all the characters in this book. I am still raising them, and I feel like they are almost exhausted.