HP: If Qingmei Doesn't Believe Me, Why Come Here?

1. First of all, I think the setting of conflict between the protagonist and Hermione first and then feelings is very good. Once written, it is a good emotional line, which is worthy of praise. 2. I very much agree with the restoration of Hermione's character in the original novel. Most of the current novels are weakening Hermione's character and making the character more likable from the beginning. This is a kind of OOC and I don't like it. 3. The author's writing style is passable, not to mention very good. I think it's OK so far, and there are almost no typos. He writes and corrects it seriously, which is worthy of praise. 4. Actively reply to readers' comments and absorb readers' opinions. It is very good, but some readers' opinions are really useless, just complaining, and they can't understand the character of Hermione. I really don't know if you have read the original Harry Potter books. Hermione was like this at the beginning, and she only grew up later. If you really don't like it, can you find other books? The author is writing seriously, portraying the character of Hermione, and at the same time respecting the character of the original Hermione. 5. Don't change the outline. Now that I have written so many chapters and the outline has been decided before, I will write it carefully. The ones that I really can't stand will have been screened out long ago. Changing the outline is a big no-no. I hope the author will remember this. 6. Since we have chosen Hermione to highly restore the original work, we cannot just write about the meanness and arrogance in the early stage. Growth must also be well described and a successful heroine written. Criticism: Some conflicts are really too deliberate. It is understandable that the author wants to create conflicts between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. Try to avoid some very deliberate contradictions and descriptions. Summary: The author's conception is pretty good and his writing style is OK. Keep up the good work, author, I will continue to pursue it [Sending my heart]

Full star anti-sinking. It's enough for the protagonist and Hermione to interact every few chapters. It was good to read one person's comments before. The cumshot girlfriend and the half-licking male protagonist. If you want to read it, just read it.

I feel like the author's writing is pretty good, and I really enjoyed reading it. Come on, but the relationship with Hermione is quite awkward. It obviously feels like it was written by force because of poor writing skills. The ideas are pretty good, the plot is very good, and the characters are very occult. Give me full marks and encourage you! However, I suggest you write more about your imagination and less about your emotions!

The subject matter is okay, but the introduction is a bit sloppy. I almost didn't click in to watch it. The battle plot is a bit watery and could be described more focused. Either it's not detailed enough, or it just feels a bit boring and simple to fight. Also, is Hermione planning to be the heroine or something? It's a bit complicated. Hermione has deviated from the shrewdness in the original play and is a bit forced to be opposite the protagonist. But every time the protagonist forcibly forgives, logically this is the case, and they should have broken up [laughing] As for Harry, although he is quite a little lion, and the original novel is a bit impulsive, he is actually quite thoughtful and will not completely believe what Ron says. He hates Draco not because of what Ron said but because Draco's attitude was like a villain at that time. There was no such thing as a tsundere at that time [smirk]. Of course, you have to be stupid when you should be stupid. After all, he is a lion [please take a closer look] Neville's modification was pretty good, but I just couldn't figure out why he was twenty or thirty centimeters taller in two months [face covering]. After the protagonist gets up, can he treat his parents, please? Snape is a bit sentimental. Even if Lily is resurrected, his first reaction at this stage is probably whether the dark wizard caused it, or Dumbledore is trying to trick him [almost crying] Anyway, I really want to read it. The writing is very good. Please update it soon [laughing evilly] [please update]

Hahaha, it's so interesting. Compared to those who give low marks because it is not a fast-paced emotional line, I pay more attention to the protagonist's career line that is different from other Hartong people, not to mention that the foreshadowing of the emotional line can be said to be natural and real. The most attractive thing is that the author sticks to his ideas and writes grown-up characters, which is different from the serious flattening of characters in many Hartung humanities. At least some of the explorations made in this book in the first dozens of chapters I read - Neville's premature and courageous growth, Malfoy's early maturity and sexual transformation, Snape and Old Deng's cooperation as a protagonist. ? (I didn't remember all of them) As a suitable supplement for followers... It's novel and refreshing. In short, stack up the armor first - it may not be comprehensive, but the first few dozen chapters are pretty good. It's late, I'm too lazy, I'll fall asleep after watching it for a while.

What I want to say is that the characters written by the author are very well-rounded and well-written. Don't let those bad reviews disturb your thoughts. Especially Hermione's behavior is very real. Although it makes people uncomfortable to watch, when I think about it, it is still clear why I did the things I did. The words and comments made by the author are very right [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] @ who generates electricity with love

Is it the way to separate first and then reunite? [Laughing evilly], you can look forward to it, I don't like vases. [Praise]

So far, it's pretty good. The single heroine is Hermione. Hermione's character is in line with the original work, and the update frequency is guaranteed. However, there are some contents that I hope the author can modify. Come on, author [Explore] If the author asks us to support the book, shouldn't we let it die?

This book is very carefully written, and there are not many faults to be found. It is very rigorous. What is important is that the characters are portrayed very carefully. Because of the appearance of the protagonist, the character's personality has changed, but it is very consistent with the changes that the original work should have. Nice!

From the current point of view, this novel is actually very good. The bad point in the early stage is the emotional drama, but the author's explanation makes up for this part. Although it looks a bit clumsy, the logic and development of the plot with reasonable and low poisonous points cover up the past. If you like reading recommended readings from hp fans [like][like][like]

I just hope that the heroine will no longer be the same as Hermione. The writing is very good.

Not bad, very nice. I hope it ends before the protagonist merges the wizarding world with the Muggle world. No matter how you think about it, it will take a lot of time to integrate it. It might take hundreds of years. If it could be integrated, it would have been integrated long ago. Personal opinion

Do you want to change the cp idea, Hermione and Krum, the male protagonist has no cp [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] Because I really feel that distrust is really hurtful [ Face covering ]

The writing is very good, and the degree of restoration of the original characters is very high (especially the degree of restoration of Hermione is really high). In addition, the plot is also very well-conceived. There is no unreasonable magic change in the plot after the protagonist joins. Furthermore, the protagonist's idea of ​​combining technology and magic is also very interesting. All in all, personally, this book deserves a five-star rating! PS: The only thing that I don't like very much is probably the addition of the plot of Under One Person. Well, actually there is nothing wrong with the plot of Under One Person, but I prefer a more pure HP plot. This is purely a personal preference.

I think the author's writing is flawless, his ideas are clear, and he has good answers to readers' questions. Personally, I think the author's description of the relationship between the protagonist and Hermione is understandable. It may feel a bit awkward at first, but when you think about it carefully, it makes sense. All in all, I think it's well written. Keep up the good work, author.

Well written, there are very few that are not purely enjoyable.

It does bring a different reading experience than before, but the difference with the original settings still needs some more convincing patches. Writing fan fiction to modify the settings has always been a highlight. Compared with direct modifications, adding settings is easier to accept.

Very interesting, the author should not be affected by those bad reviews

5.7 Rating, but if it grows to 6 points, I will be missing.

It's pretty good, but when can I face the White Devil?

It's not bad. It's not too poisonous overall. It's considered a good grass.

Nice! ! ! Come and see! ! ! You can't just make me feel uncomfortable! ! !

The characters and personalities fit the original work, and the content has strong logic.

A great book, especially worth reading. It's written in such a way that needles don't prick it. If you want me to read it, just pretend I didn't say it.

The writing is really good, but there are always some people criticizing me in the comment section.

So far so good

Okay, it's mainly pleasing to the eye

It was a little uncomfortable in the early days, but it got better after the second grade.

I just wanted to ask if there is a female lead here?

It's very interesting. Please support me.