HP: a Little Coward Comes to Gryffindor

Big. A small reminder: Can you put on the label that bullies will not fall in love with the bullied? Many people left after reading this article. The writing style is good, the story is beautiful, the narrative is strong, the plot and rhythm are good, the picture is imprinted in the mind at once, it is beautiful and beautiful [shy][shy][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] Indescribably beautiful

The contrast between the smiling tiger Dark Lord and the cute little rat is a bit jarring. Don't worry, dear friends, although the original Peter is a hateful rat, the Peter in this book is completely different from that damn rat. He is really a kind and lovely boy! Magic rat with healing! At the beginning, I thought James and Xiaotian were a bit annoying, but now, the children have become kind and beautiful, and even Rat and Snape have become good friends. The predator didn't become a bully, and Lily and Xiaosi are still good friends, and they feel warm after seeing the dead body. Besides, Rat's inner activities are a bit rich. Often his words are astonishing. Especially the matter of calling Lord Dark Lord Lao Hei [laughing evilly] is so shocking to everyone, it really makes people laugh (laughing)

It's really strange. Maybe it's the writing that saves everything. It's unexpectedly well written, and the emotional development is not abrupt. Although Voldemort did a lot of bad things later, I think if Tom had received a lot of goodwill from the world at the beginning, he would probably only become a careerist.

I really like this article. I was attracted to it by the evil side of CP at first, but I think the author's writing style is really good. It really doesn't feel like the first time I write an article. At the beginning, I was still confused about how the emotional line between Voldemort and Peter Pedro would end. The way to hit a straight ball is unexpectedly appropriate? And this relationship is not even deep and hard, the writing is very harmonious, and Peter also has his own persistence, but I also hope that the ability to compete in the later stage will be a little stronger. I always like two strong people in love, and I don't think the comparison is too holy. It feels like the big brother next door.

Not attacking any college! Let me repeat the important thing again, only the stance is different, not to blackmail any college! Lightning protection: The male protagonist is weak due to his positioning, has no decisiveness in killing, has no grudges and grudges, has a growth flow, and will become stronger in the later stage. Lightning protection: The male protagonist will try his best to stop bullying, but will not take sides and target anyone unilaterally (the bully will wake up, the bullied will fight back, and everyone will grow) Lightning protection: There is a one-sided attraction between characters in the middle, but there is no cp//Also, the official cp is not removed

A very cute article, but I don't know how to interact with Tom? [Thinking] The current situation is that they are opposites, right?

I feel very good, the author is great! Regarding some comments about the protagonist (cowardly, mediocre, too ordinary), I was wondering if you saw the back part? The reason for the poor transfiguration is because the wand used does not match, right? Is practicing animagus in the second grade just mediocre? He also fought back against some of the pranks played by James and Chris. He didn't just tolerate them, and it was not without reason for their reconciliation later on. I sincerely hope that everyone can be patient and comment after reading it [smile] It's rare for a novel like HP to have an emotional line that doesn't disobey me and allows me to follow my heart. Keep up the good work, the author! [Like][Like][Like][Admiration][Admiration][Admiration]

The setting is really novel, and the writing is also very good. It's just that kind of plain writing, but it's very, very addictive. The relationship between the two protagonists is not abrupt at all, it is gradual and not very OOC. It's the kind of feeling that after watching it, you still want to watch it twice or three times. The plot behind it is not very clichéd or cheesy and can be guessed at a glance. Instead, it is very novel and creative. Now what I look forward to most at 5 o'clock every day is reading a book written by my wife. So this book deserves 5 stars.

This is the first HP time-travel fanfic I have read. I did not disassemble the cp. I have read Deha before. It is the first time I read the story of the previous generation. Moreover, the details written by the author are very exquisite (private settings are harmless), and the translation tone makes it feel immersive! I very much agree with the author's point of view. Weak people can also become protagonists, and ordinary people can also change the trajectory of their destiny. If you want to see strong protagonists and strong CPs, don't complain. Those who like the growth line can enter! Nowadays, there are too many crazy criticisms of cold protagonists. On the contrary, Peter, an ordinary child who is warm, kind and brave, and grew up in an environment of love, is really rare! Baby, you are an excellent Gryffindor~ Lao Fu is super charming! Originally, Riddle would be OOC if he could fall in love, so everyone put their minds aside and watched, but the author's character in big letters fit perfectly without any sense of inconsistency, and the interaction with Shushu was also sweet~ I really hope that this pair of CPs can get a second part to follow up... I think I will never be able to watch Voldemort and other CPs again... Gryffindor F4 hahaha, the growth lines of the four little ones are also very interesting. In the early stage, Potter and Sirius were really little bad guys, Peter had the guidance to change them, Remus no longer had to endure the pain for so long, the relationship between Lily and Petunia has also improved, and Snape was redeemed and walked out of his own way. They are all very good. In fact, I only remember Harry's things from the original novel, and I can't remember many things from the previous generation. Reading this is like watching the previous generation extra (Happy IF version), it's really good ~ Let's just treat it as a sideshow. The interaction with Lao Li is just giving out sweets, hahahaha, come and watch, come and watch~

To be honest, I don't have many interesting points in reading the article, but this book has found another interesting point for me, which is the three words "you don't see" that I am interested in! ! ! Ask yourself, except for the three words "You don't see", the author's writing style in this novel is still good. However, in the third year of high school, every time I write an essay, I see many classmates who like to write "You don't see" and "I will see" in the article. If I read it too much, I will feel stressed about these three words. It's not that Xiaosheng is looking for trouble, he just feels that writing "Don't you see" in vernacular writing has a dead-end feel like a shit basin with a gold rim (Xiaosheng's Chinese teacher has also repeatedly emphasized not to use this kind of thing in vernacular writing, as it will easily lower the perception score) However, I think the author seems to be a fan of "Jun Ke Ke". Reading through the novel, the number of applications of "Jun Ke Ke" is simply amazing. However, it's still the same sentence. Apart from using "Jun can see" a bit too much, the author's writing style is really good, otherwise I wouldn't have tied it [laughs][laughs][laughs]

This book is really evil but surprisingly good. The mice that have passed through it have broad cognition and clear moral standards. It really hits the point that I like. It can advance and retreat, and has a certain degree of relaxation. This book is really good to read, not only sweet but also quite funny and healing. The only thing is that the ending is too sloppy. It feels very rushed and some foreshadowing has not yet been explained. The subsequent development of wizards and Muggles and the ending of the protagonist's emotional line are really a pity. It ended all of a sudden. Any extras will make up for the sense of truncation.

Well, actually, a lot of people in the comment area said that the male protagonist, Madonna, is okay. It fits the setting of the original Petru. He is a bit cowardly and an imperfect character. But now that I have written it, I feel that Petru has become a bit charming. Lily and Lupin both have obvious single-arrow tendencies. What I wrote before and Jie Dao It can be understood that they are mixed together for the sake of the plot, but now I feel that many people have a favorable impression and there is a lot of friction. Petru (the male protagonist) has not fought back much. The element of time travel is not very useful. There is no cheat. Overall, it is pretty good-looking, but it is a bit tiring to watch when he is always bullied and does not fight back.

As long as you get over the bad points at the beginning, the writing will become smoother and smoother. There are no particularly bad points. It's very sweet and not abusive. The writing was very confusing at the beginning. The author tried too hard to make Potter and Sirius look particularly bad. They were inexplicably bad and bullied their classmates. The protagonist became friends with them inexplicably, and later they changed for the better and better. The ball has always been straight, and the attack is also very tolerant. The ending was a bit rushed, and it felt like there were still a few characters left unwritten, especially Severus's feelings, which were not continued at all. Overall pretty good.

Beautiful, well written in big letters! It's just... Will Peter always be so [face covering] not good at magic? Didn't he really get a golden finger or something? I'll continue to see.

Maybe the author doesn't know much about it, but if possible, I hope the teacher can change the book cover [cry] [cry] The cover character is Albert, the character in the otome game "Girls' Throne". Although our young king is dead, no matter how you look at it, it is not suitable for use as a book cover. ——From a heartbroken gamer [crying] [crying]

How can I say it? It's really sweet. If you like The Dark Lord, you can watch it. The character settings are quite complete, and James and Sirius have also grown. The protagonist Peter is dull and cowardly, but he is also very warm. Lily and Sev are great too However I only read half of it and couldn't stand it anymore When I read it, I thought it was a redemption story, but it turned out that it wasn't the Dark Lord but he still did a lot of bad things, just like the romance and gangster stories back then. As for some people who would say that it was because of Dumbledore that Tom became so extreme, I can only say that the beholder has a different opinion.

It's good-looking, and for someone like me who's seen too many pull-and-push stories, it's easy to watch. OK, as the length of the story increases, the character of the protagonist becomes more vivid and full, including some supporting characters, who will also have their own shining points. In short, they are all well-behaved. The plot is slow-paced, but not too draggy. PS: I read the book review when I was bored (probably when I read more than 50 chapters). Part of it was because I was entangled with the looters and the Sect. So let's talk about it Bullying situations still exist! But later on, they will realize their mistakes and apologize. As for whether Sri Lanka has forgiven them, I won't spoil it. As for the ambiguous plot in the story, don't worry, after all, the introduction is still very clear. Finally, @, will our GGAD be included in the scope of the official match?

I've been chasing it for so long that I forgot to rate it [laughing and crying] It's very interesting. The description of Riddle in the early stage is quite good, but when he is about to fall in love, I feel that his character has changed a bit. I think it is the power of love. Very good for Peter's creation haha ​​heartthrob style. Why is the rating so low?

＼(`Δ')/I think it's okay, but I'd like it if there could be more interaction with Riddell.

This article is okay. It's just that the emotion is written too far. If you don't have the patience to read it, you may not be very interested in this book. So I recommend you. If you want to watch it, I think you should be more patient. After all, I haven't seen the emotional part yet, but there are already some clues in the front. Our little Peter likes Tom a little bit. He thought Tom was very handsome. Whee

Ah! It's so sweet! The two of them got together with almost no twists and turns. Both of them are very good at playing straight ball! What I hate the most is that some stories don't even have a mouth, and then they get to the finale awkwardly. It's annoying. There are a few OOC things in the mid-term, but it doesn't affect my opinion. A relatively small mouse can be with Voldemort, so what's wrong with it? Hahahahahahahahahahaha I just want to watch the extra story, but I haven't seen Peter tell Voldemort about his origins, and he hasn't given birth to a child yet. Big words to the author! Looking forward to the next book!

It's so good. This is the best fanfic I've ever read. The author must have a lot of extras. I will write to the Ministry of Magic and award you the Order of Merlin, First Class [KISS][KISS][KISS]

The pace is relatively slow, and the ending is a bit rushed, but overall it's pretty good. That's right, the plot transitions a bit quickly, there is no dividing line, and it's a bit confusing to watch. The emotional line is quite delicate, there is no sudden and inexplicable progress, it is progressing little by little, so the pace is a little slow... It is still good and beautiful.

Quite sweet little text Step by step, I got closer to confirm my feelings, and the tug in it was so poking me... The ending is really great, the young couple are so adorable... (Peaceful) There's a bit of a heartthrob in the middle, but it's not a big problem, and it's 1v1 at the end, which is pretty cool (o^^o)♪

I have been reading this book for a long time and love it very much! [Adoration][Adoration] The character creation is very consistent with my imagination of the character, and the emotional line makes people laugh. The author's description of Peter won my heart. Looking at other articles, the descriptions of Sirius and James are either too good or too bad, but this book deeply describes their diversity, especially Sirius who made him realize that the meaning of family is one.

Looking forward to it! I want to see more scenes of the two getting along soon [sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's the first time I see the protagonist being Peter, which is very interesting

I'm super, super good-looking and invincible. If you want to watch CP, then you can watch the later ones first, because Riddle's appearances in the early stage are really pitiful.

It's so good-looking, it's not all about romance, the protagonist also has his own things to do. The relationship between the characters is well grasped, and the interaction between the protagonist and other people is very normal. It does not feel like he is an outsider, but like he is completely integrated into the world. Other characters also have roles, they are not NPCs that drive the plot. The interaction between the two male protagonists is also very sweet, not too OOC, and the relationship does not develop too quickly. It is just comfortable to see them slowly getting closer and falling in love. I really like this book! The author is awesome. I love you so much [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

Emotions change very naturally, and getting along with her is super sweet. At the beginning, I felt that the main plot was too slow, and there were too many descriptions of Peter's life and growth. But after reading it, I felt that it was just right. A person's life is not only love, but also family, friendship, and childhood, which is great.