In the Hokage World, My Caring Big Sisters Are a Little Too Many

I will raise them first, but I can give some suggestions. If the author opens a harem, he can first change the names of those substitute heroines in advance, and then use Dragon Veins, plus some TV plots, such as those without good endings, can be arranged.

I can understand the White Tiger Holy Land as similar to Miaomu Mountain, but does the technology need to be so advanced? What kind of amusement park, and mechanical dog, etc., You can add a secret realm, or a spring with a beneficial effect, etc. Technology-related things can be slowly spread in the follow-up. Psychic beast technology is so advanced, isn't it a bit fragmented? [What]

. . . It's inexplicably beautiful. It might be a bit boring at first, but it's really well written, very detailed, and very interesting. It's no longer interesting to just read it. Books like Tomato are quite difficult. You have to reasonably suppress the combat power without being aggrieved. It's best not to be too economical in the dialogue and give a little detail. After all, Tomato. Keep up the good work. Come on.

It's okay. If you like daily life, you can give it a try, but I always feel that there is nothing outstanding. And my age has always been at this age. It's just daily life anyway.

It's quite novel. It's different from the conventional Naruto fan fiction and has its own innovation and plot. The adaptation is very good, keep it up!