His Secret Crush Is Exposed, and His Childhood Friend Goes Crazy!

Overall it's good, with detailed descriptions and sincere emotions. However, Wen Shan's character is split from front to back. In the early stage, he was a sensitive and fragile but strong person. However, in the later stage, I felt that he relied too much on Tang Chi. I think people who have experienced such setbacks should become more independent and strong. There is no need to pile up plots to portray Tang Chi's image. Secondly, the pace is a bit fast in the early and middle stages. Whether it is feelings, relationships or plots, they are advanced layer by layer, especially from the sour secret love to the decisive departure (still a little hesitant). This part is my favorite plot - I can take it up and let it go. However, the pace slowed down instantly in the middle and later stages, and a lot of pen and ink was given to the deputy CP, and the composition was a bit sloppy. It was a pity that Wen Shan's strong core was not reflected. Overall, it's worth watching. Finally, I hope that the author can create better and more perfect works.

At first, I didn't have any feelings or thoughts about the review saying that I can sleep well. It wasn't until I read more than 30 chapters that I found out that it was true. . It feels like I spend 15 hours a day sleeping anywhere [stunned]

Personally, I prefer sour articles. The author writes them very well. I was so loved that I fell asleep [stunned], sour and then sweet (actually a bit bland, not interesting)

The sour part in the early stage is good, but in the later stage, Tang Chi is comprehensive and everything is arranged for Wen Shan, which makes people feel that Xiao Shan is not that good. But in fact, Xiao Shan should be an independent individual with a strong heart and a gentle core. He can accomplish many things well on his own, instead of relying on Tang Chi for everything (it says here that you can ask for help when you encounter difficulties, and Xiao Shan is responsible for taking charge of the whole thing). If you want to see a sweet love story, you can still do it. Finally, I hope my wife can continue to write articles. Overall, the flaws are not hidden. The descriptions in some places could be more detailed, but by the standards of sweet novels, it is very good. Keep up the good work, ma'am.

Okay, I haven't finished reading it yet. I'll summarize it at the end.

It's really good to read. The author's writing style is very good. It's been a long time since I saw something I like in 🍅 [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

The cute cookie bar is okay.

Super pretty, super sweet couple [learned]😳

The writing is delicate and the description of the two characters' personalities is also very three-dimensional. The first part is slightly citric in the secret love, and the second part is the sour and sweet strawberry. The whole thing is gentle and comfortable. It's suitable to watch Nuan Nuan before going to bed. It's very reassuring.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking