The Life and Lies of HP Polaris

I have to say it is very exciting, the writing is very good, and it is also very funny. The feeling with Theodore was like walking on the riverside, with the water sparkling and the breeze blowing everything just right. And Barty Jr. Is two similar people who meet under the night to create their future together. And there is another point. Theodore will draw his wand and aim it at the heroine because she takes the initiative with old Nott, but if the heroine takes the initiative with old Barty, it is estimated that little Barty will clap and cheer beside Kuku. So they really match each other [laughs evilly]

I love her so much. She is the perfect heroine in my heart. I have named her the top heroine in HP novels so far. I like the portrayal of this girl so much. The girl is a restless ideal, burning anger, and boiling life. The girl's slap is not a fragrance but a bursting wind! This was followed by the sound of skulls cracking! Even Lixi's hair is free. In the vast world, the Dinghai Shenzhen protects everything she wants to protect, and her friends and family have lived up to her protection. She gets whatever she wants. The girl's ambition is straightforward, bright and wanton. Lissie is a shield and a sharp sword, protecting everything and being unstoppable. Jili Guala said a lot, but I really, really like it.

A very, very, very, very good book, with a bit of British humor, and the writing style is very smooth, unobtrusive, and describes the development of the plot silently. And in my opinion, none of the characters are OOC, they all have positive and negative sides, they are flesh and blood, not a dull mold, they are very warm. The relationship between them also moved me very much. The heroine is an excellent witch who is powerful, hot-tempered, and values ​​love and justice. I really enjoyed this book and maybe this will be the first book I read twice. I'm going to die. I'm going to be turned into a repair dog. I really really like the No. 1 Pick. It's obviously easy at the beginning, but how can it be so tough later on? I thought it was the kind of light-hearted comedy where two people try to help each other. How could it be so different from what I expected? It's like tricking the dog into killing him(;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`). But this book is indeed quite good, I recommend it (눈_눈)

It's a complete masterpiece, both the character setting and character description are well controlled, and the writing is very mature. The plot is also very smooth. I originally thought it would be more relaxed and enjoyable, but I actually cried to death at the end of the first volume ᴛㅅᴛ I really like Little Barty for personal reasons. When I saw that the introduction was about Little Barty being the only male protagonist, I clicked in. Although there wasn't much in the previous plot, it was so good that I couldn't stop watching it. I really didn't expect that when Little Barty let Lissie go and sacrificed herself later, she became the only choice, which really corresponds to the title. It's so delicious. The emotional line... The light emotion makes people savor it carefully. ᴛㅅᴛThe two people are like puzzle pieces with corresponding corners, they match perfectly, and they are a match made in heaven. And the relationship between Lissie and all her friends is very good, especially Lemmy and Sirius. The two bitter melons are really bitter. Lissy came into their lives like an angel and turned a piece of chicken feathers into a treasure. In fact, there is no need for Lissy to save so many people, but she is a brave and selfless witch (The Sorting Hat is really wise, isn't it! Lissy, you are really brave!) I haven't finished reading the second volume yet, and I already feel so happy~! I can see Lissy smiling in the arms of her parents. Lissy is well protected by her parents. I really just want to say one thing from the bottom of my heart: Please continue to be happy, Polaris^ω^ Read it all! The second volume really improved! Frankly speaking, I have always hated Peter, and the many fan works I have read rarely glorify Peter. When I read about the moment when Peter got the pendant, I was surprised. Peter also had a highlight moment of becoming a hero at this time! (It seems that the Sorting Hat was right) Including the character supplements for other people, as well as some foreshadowing (for example, the cause of Elodie's death is really consistent with Lao Fu), wow, it's really exciting. The second volume not only fulfills Lissie's wish, she finally gets the love of her entire family, but also makes up for the regret that the first volume could not stop - to be honest, Remus should live his life like this, he is a very, very, very good person and should not be constrained by his werewolf identity. There is also the Sri Lankan religion. It is hard to imagine that the Sri Lankan religion can also be peaceful and approachable and respected by others, haha. At first I was really worried when I saw that little Barty had no memory, especially the part where little Barty felt inexplicable about Lissie. I felt a little worried for Little Po. Yeah, but the plot was very smooth and I didn't get too hung up on it. It was really satisfying until I saw little Barty regaining his memory. The details of the young couple were so sweet that I kept laughing ^ω^ The best place to cry is near the end of the soul flashback. The regrets of two generations of people from two time periods have been brought to a perfect end. There will never be more sadness. I really can't stop crying💧. I sincerely thank the author for writing this story that tries his best to save all the sorrow. I hope Lissy and Barty will always be happy. Finally, I would like to thank my uncle, old friend, and the best GG for protecting Lissie.

It's rare to see a novel in which the male protagonist is Little Barty, but the author wrote it very well, and the excitement in the novel was immediately aroused. The character of the heroine has a bit of self-sacrifice in it, but overall I just feel moved by the heroine and I like her very much. It's very interesting. I was a little impatient when I first started reading it. After reading a few chapters, I found that the author's writing style is very good, with a touch of humor and just the right amount of comedy between the lines. It's really good to read. I feel delayed by the title and introduction. This book is really worth reading again and again. I give a thumbs up to the author.

It's so beautiful. The emotional line between the heroine and Buddy is very beautiful. It's so cute! ! ! ! ! ! I am willing to follow the author forever! ! ! The battle part really made me cry (´;;`), Popo is just their Plan B (╥ω╥`), and for Batty, she is his Plan A, there is only one choice for Popo, cry and cry hard. Finally, when Popo "died", Barty voluntarily entered the ring of fire to accompany Popo (ﾉಥBenefitಥ) (Author, can you update two chapters a day? 😭, It's not enough)

Very, very beautiful. . Miss Polaris's character and the pace of the book's progress are very friendly to impatient people and her strength is also very strong. I really love Mu Qiang and it's very enjoyable. The author works hard and writes u. I look forward to Miss Polaris' next life. I have read all the parts updated by the author so far. So far, I think the best thing I've written is the friendship line in Volume 1. All in all, it's so beautiful that I can't describe it in words. I recommend reading it!

A very, very beautiful book! The protagonist Lissie is a really good kid who works hard to save everyone. The author's handling of various emotional lines is really good. Personally, I actually like the first half of the pendant part the best, and I shed a lot of tears for the ending of the pendant... The author is very good at writing gentle swords filled with a touch of regret... And the portrayal of little Barty in this book is also better than my expectations. A young man who has lost his most energetic years will always be a paranoid but vivid person. Who could read this and not say, "A pair born to work together (no)" Lissy always gave me a cold sense of humor in the first half, very cute and very funnyww so it's great that Lissy can be happy (leaving tears of joy) Finally, thank you to the author for creating such a lovely heroine and a story full of kindness and warmth!

The male protagonist, Little Barty, is divided into upper and lower parts. In the first half, the female protagonist is lonely but frighteningly strong (actually it makes people feel sad to watch the 14 [crying] author). In the second half, the female protagonist has a happy family, gained many new friendships, and is frighteningly strong. Recommended for those who like to watch strong female protagonists, the male protagonist appears very rarely in the two films before and after, even not as good as other male guests, and the career line of the female protagonist is the main focus; also for those who like CP, the male protagonist effectively appears, and the soul mate who fights the road is here, less sugar is very suitable for Chinese tastes, this is life and death! The writing style is delicate and vivid, and a lot of razor blades can be extracted from the large amount of humorous words🥲Finally, it leads to a harmonious and touching ultimate achievement. In short, if I were to make a list of the most delicious Tomato HP fanfics, this book would be in the first echelon.

The writing is really great. The CP of Little Barty has one-way arrows from other characters towards the heroine, but the heroine only loves Little Barty. The relationship between the two of them is also very easy to connect and very touching. However, Little Barty does not have many scenes. He only has a part in the late part of the first volume, and half of it in the second volume. It is divided into one and two volumes, the descendant generation and the parent generation. One volume is super knives and makes tears flow. The second volume is sweeter and happier. It has family, friends, and love. It is very complete, but occasionally there are a few small knives, but it does not affect the book. It is super good-looking. The two-way running between the male and female protagonists is very interesting, and I don't feel anything abrupt. The official pairing is not split, but in the second volume, Remus, who has not turned into a werewolf, is given a new wife, who is the heroine's cousin. This book saves everything that can be saved. The first volume is a self-destructive rescue. It also gives Peter a different ending in the second volume. He is not betrayed and is not so annoying. Although the introduction to this book indicates that it is not a cool novel, I actually felt quite happy reading it. The heroine, a prophet with a fiery temper and high combat power, is very smart and powerful. The little Barty in this book is really super delicious. I love to see how mean they are when they fight each other, hehe. Even in the extra story, there is no other cp line arranged for the heroine. I love this very much. The heroine only loves Barty from the beginning to the end. The heroine is also Barty's only option. No matter what point in time, his soul and life belong to her. At the end of the volume, little Barty accompanied the unconscious heroine to the end of her life. In order to send the heroine to her original timeline, she died calmly. Neither of them told their love for each other until they died. The soul of a nineteen-year-old boy was trapped in a body in his thirties. It was not until the second volume, when he was fourteen years old, that he broke the shackles of the Imperius Curse that had lasted for thirteen years. He remembered everything in that timeline. The year changed. The heroine was two years older than Barty. Hehe, it looks good. Recommend it. It makes me crazy.

It's really super good-looking, with both knives and sweetness. I like it. Most of the characters are based on the original work, and I don't feel uncomfortable watching it. I don't understand why so many heroines in the fandom take Malfoy's 80 behavior for granted, or have been ridiculed and found it cute. I can't understand it, so this aspect of this book really pokes me. Fans who follow the original work really feel comfortable reading it, and there are a lot of tears at the same time. The heroine's baby is really affecting me, it's really beautiful. Why is the rating so low and why so few people watch it? It's so beautiful.

The structure is rigorous, the logic is rigorous, and the overall rhythm is very strong. There is no part that makes people feel weak. I read it in one sitting! And the author has a kind of dry humor, which I really like! ! The personality of each character is very real (it's great that there are no forced gold fingers and inexplicable pink bubbles), and the details are also very complete. I will rank this masterpiece as the top three hp fanfics I have read so far. I like the character of Barty very much. I have read a lot about Barty, and I have rarely seen one that did not polarize his madness and paranoia but instead showed his innocent and happy side. He and Polaris fit together like two puzzle pieces. Why are they not a perfect match? That is to say. The author is really a person with strong thinking ability and also very delicate and full of emotions. I want this kind of writing ability too! ! !

The writing is really great, which is enough to make up for all the regrets of the original work. I got a lump in my throat [crying] several times while reading it. Of course, it was HE in the end. In addition, you can actually indicate in the introduction that there are relatively few love lines and CP interactions. In the previous article, I saw more than one reader complaining that the male protagonist did not appear. In fact, many people came here for CP Barty. The relatively small role made me feel disappointed. I am afraid that this disappointment will affect other readers' views on the full text. In fact, the entire novel is quite well written. Even if the love lines are relatively small, it cannot conceal the advantages of the book itself [Love]

The writing is superb! It also restored all the worries and was super healing. Especially after reading the second volume, I feel warm in my bones. Although some people think that it is a knife, I personally feel that it is more touching than a knife, and overall it is super healing after watching it, and the tears I shed have turned into feelings and satisfaction. Both sides of CP have a feeling of "it can only be him, it can only be him, and luckily he has him". The protagonist is strong but very logical, and the characters are not OOC at all. I even dream back to the days when I read the original work. The rating is so irritating that I want to give it ten stars [crazy]

The writing is really good. Please read more. It's not enough. So who is the male protagonist? The writing seems to be Little Barty, but after reading it, I think Xiaoduo is better. Wuwuwu

The only fanfic I have read, it is very good and not sloppy. It is very friendly to people like me who have only watched the movie but are curious about it. There are no unnecessary emotions. There is love but just the right amount. Not too much or too little.

Very exciting, very humorous, very fairy tale It fulfilled many of my dreams, with both laughter and tears, but overall I still prefer the second volume, which is more complete. Liz has parents who grew up with her. Remus no longer has to experience the tragic fate of becoming a werewolf. Little Barty is freed from the loneliness and misery of being persecuted in time. Although he comes from a white wizard family, he has a dark wizard atmosphere. Regulus no longer has to go alone to the place where he dies incognito and has no burial. On the way, Sirius will no longer waste the most exciting and infinitely possible ten years of his life in Azkaban, and Peter will also get the chance to start over... Everything is still in time, everything comes just right, including the old friends in the long river of time, who appear just right. The carelessness and plots that waste Xiaobao's soul are downplayed, and only the right hand-holding and eye-catching are left. Although it is a happy event, it is also tiring.

The writing is very delicate and touching, and the plot is very smooth. I don't think there is anything inexplicable or embarrassing or corny. I really feel for the heroine. Please bring happiness to Liz soon.

Oh, it's so beautiful. It made me die. It made me cry. It made me dizzy. Oh my god, the writing in this book is simply miraculous. The emotional line is also super well written. I really like Barty~😋 and the heroine baby is also very smart. She has brains and strength. It's a pleasure to watch. The others are too. I really like the sense of a group portrait of everyone together. And this is the first fanfic I have read in which Peter becomes good and makes great achievements. It makes people's hearts warm after watching it, and the ending is also very good. I couldn't bear to watch it till the end😭😭😭It's so beautiful.

It's very interesting, I shed tears several times after watching it [crying] [crying] The protagonist is really a very good little girl. The most heartbreaking thing is in the first volume. No one can unswervingly choose her first and only, until Little Barty, I really cried, because he also has nothing. I really like the unbreakable vow little Barty made. No matter where in time or space, it belongs only to her. Ah, little Barty, you are a good wife too. The second volume is very good and makes up for the regrets of the first volume and the original work. It makes me Ha Nuannuan [almost cry] and Min Na Sangdu is living a good and happy life. It's really good.

I actually don't quite understand why this book has such a low rating - it may be because CP is not popular, but it is very reasonable and I would call it a soul mate. The text feels old. Maybe the author read some books written by the Republic of China or older authors when writing this article? It gives me the impression that it has a very strong flavor... To the extent that a few very familiar names come to mind. Very beautiful and touching. Lissie's emotions were too strong, as touching as if she wanted to burst out of the page and cry out her desire. The writing style in the front and back volumes made me enjoy reading it twice. Relatively speaking, the writing style in the first volume is more refined and depressing, while the writing style in the second volume is much more relaxing, as if I relaxed along with Lixi's feelings. It made me feel warm all the time. Praise the author and praise Missy!

It's a very nice book, and I feel it's the top level of HP fanfics among foreign persimmons! Polaris' character creation is very successful. Our North Star is the shrewdest, bravest, most ambitious, most righteous and fearless Hufflepuff (bushi)! The teacher's writing style is superb, and there is a sense of humor that suddenly makes you feel silent between the lines. One of the biggest regrets in the early stage: failed to assassinate Fudge! I rarely read Barty Jr.'S CP articles, but I have to say that he and Polaris really match each other! Our Polar Star is worthy of such a unique and firm choice without any hesitation. The dance in the snow is really sweet and sweet, the ultimate romance wrapped in broken glass. From the first volume to the end, I cried countless times. Teacher qwq's writing was very touching. I could really relate to Lixi's experience. The second volume is so happy. Remus has grown up healthy and has not been bitten by a werewolf, has a happy family with his parents and aunts, and his young lover has not been tortured by the Imperius Curse for more than ten years. Generations has fulfilled many difficult questions in the original work, such as the deaths of Cedric and Dumbledore, Sirius's vindication, and so on. Lissy, Daphne and Theodore are the best Slytherin trio! Later, after watching it, the body felt warm. Regulus, who was recognized as a hero by his brother, Severus, who was respected by everyone during his school days and did not break up with Lily, and even Peter were redeemed! Both volumes from the children's generation to the parents' generation are very shocking and delicious! The river of time at the end was really so tearful! Thank you teacher for making your dream come true! He lovers are dancing in ecstasy! Also, Karkaroff is really the person I hate the most in this book! ! The hate level has surpassed that of Umbridge (mainly because Umbridge was sanctioned)! I really cried when the pendant failed! Although it was repaired by Grindelwald later, the new friends after formatting are not the old friends who grew up with Lissy... It's too bitter. The Lissy of the next generation is really a little bitter gourd qwq

It was very interesting, with a lot of knives. I cried for about three hours while watching it, but the ending was very happy. Celie saved everyone. It was a very happy ending for the original work. We, Xili, must be happy in the future

A completely beautiful and great article. I can give you the answer before I finish reading it. The writing has a unique style, light humor and smooth narrative dialogue. Master, why don't you tell me what your other vests are? I really want to eat your food [crying] All the characters in the article It also fits the characters very well. It's so happy. [Crying] Mom, you must keep writing. It's so beautiful. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] I'll discuss the plot later and tie it up after reading it. In fact, now I can see that the author's writing skills are really awesome [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

It's a very interesting fanfic. I've been looking for Little Barty's for a long time, and I finally found it. It's very interesting. When the first and second volumes were about to end, I burst into tears. The author's writing is very delicate [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Full marks. To be honest, as a boy, I really don't like watching erotic videos on female videos. But this fanfic is the best fanfic I've ever seen. Whether it is the conception of the plot, the values ​​​​and the exquisiteness of the language, they are all top-notch. Once you read it, you won't be able to stop. There are echoes of laughter and tears everywhere. Of course, the book itself is not great, but in the first half, you made our little North Star feel really lonely and distressed. Fine chaff.

God! Good writing! It's light, but it can show an unintentional sense of humor in the details; the plot is smooth, and one of the meanings of the birth of the fandom is to save all regrets! (Make a fist,; the emotional lines are naturally not abrupt, and everyone has flesh and blood. (The author has a good grasp of the characters, and it is not very OOC for the original party. The family line is a little sharp, but fortunately, love brings us back to the right track across time. In the first scene of Little Barty's appearance, the love line immediately shows why he is the male protagonist, and the road of confrontation is also the resonance of the soul. People always have many worries and many fetters, but a person who has no hesitation can take you as a plan. How can people not be moved by people like A?

Omg, it was so well written, because I have finished reading the serialized book by the same author. The writing is so good [crying] I cried so much in both books. This book really made me feel that love is the greatest magic, especially during the decisive battle in the second volume, all my friends from the first volume came. There were too many regrets in the first volume, and the whole atmosphere was bitter, but the writing style was so humorous that the sense of depression was alleviated. I wonder if Theodore hadn't pointed his wand at Liz, would it have been like a sideshow? But Barty really won, everyone had selfish motives and first choice, but none of them were Liz. Even though Liz had paid too much, even though they all treated Liz well, the only thing Liz wanted was given by Barty. 🥲It's really easy to cry. Liz in the first volume was really distressed. The whole first volume was spent watching Liz grow up step by step. In the second volume, I return to my parents, my lover comes back, everyone survives, and everyone has a good ending. Great HE! ! ! I sigh again, the author's writing is so good

I came to comment without reading much. Just for this sentence, I think Theodore and our Polaris also had a good fight [shy] [shy]. It was so innocent that inviting a girl to dance made my ears red. I saw a comment: "I did a super brave thing! Invited Polaris to dance!" Especially good product I have changed my mind now. Barty is so suitable for Polaris. "At every node of time, my soul and life belong to you." This can no longer be described in words. The love between them ❗❗❗In the first volume, everyone's first choice was not the heroine, only Barty. Although I know this is due to human nature, it is still sad. Our Celie is a kind-hearted girl who sacrifices herself to save others. In other books, I would really feel like the Virgin, but the author is great The writing style makes me feel that our Celie is worth saving, but there is still a bit of regret. In the second volume, we are very happy. Mom and dad are here, Barty has recovered his memory, his relatives and loved ones are here, and he has defeated Voldemort. But here is really a bit shocking. The author gave Peter a highlight. I have never seen this kind of thing in the HP fans I have read. But if you think about it carefully, Peter was assigned to Gryffindor. Bravery is actually his character background, and it is normal to make such a choice. I hope they can always be happy in that world!

Every description in this book is like a star soaked in morning dew, shining just right, and even the trajectory of the air flow has been accurately described by the author in words. The author's big pen is so gentle that even the regrets in the story are kneaded into soft clouds. Reading is sour but not painful, leaving only the overflowing aftertaste swirling in the chest. The plot is laid out like a slowly unfolding ancient scroll. Every time you turn a page, a new scene comes into your eyes, and there is no hidden ingenuity between the lines. In this fan world, I see richer possibilities and more moving emotional trajectories for the characters. This is not just a second creation, this is a great voyage that gives new life to the characters. For this reason, I offer five-star praise