After Breaking Off the Engagement, Long Aotian and I Exchanged Systems

First of all, give an introduction to the plot. The author explains at the end of the first chapter that there is no stronger woman than a man, so let the hero save him! The female protagonist is very powerful and talented. She has always been more powerful than the male protagonist, and she even saved him in turn. She is smart and decisive and shows no mercy to her enemies. It's totally Feng Aotian. In terms of the emotional line, the male protagonist also explores himself. He says he is taking advantage of her, but he always cares about it and cares about it. It is natural for the two of them to get along with each other, which is very enjoyable. Oops, I just realized that the introduction has been changed. It's very good. It's better than the previous one. This book is really good! Yingmen!

It's really super good-looking, and the subject matter is very novel. It's not the kind where the female protagonist is stronger than the male protagonist. The male protagonist who saves the female protagonist in the introduction is actually the female protagonist. It's mentioned at the end of the first chapter. Don't quit just because of the introduction. Anyway, I have read about 60 chapters so far, and the female protagonist is always stronger. The male protagonist's strategy for the female protagonist is also very interesting😄

It's very beautiful. There are many counter-routines. The female protagonist is really decisive in killing. She will never stay overnight if she can kill her enemies, and she will deal with them immediately after killing those who cannot be killed. I feel that the male protagonist will become a dank male ghost in the future. Some of the attributes that occasionally pop up can already be seen hahahaha

It looks good, although there are a lot of enemies, and they die one after another, but Long Aotian is really like this, and his death is quite simple, not the kind of person who is still resenting people after hundreds of chapters. At present, it seems that the female protagonist is the original protagonist, but the experience of the male and female protagonists in the previous life is a bit stomach-ache. It seems that it is a glimmer of hope that it took the brother a long time to find. Although I understand that the male protagonist did not save people in the previous life, I still have a little knotty feeling. I guess that if this knot is completely solved, the female protagonist will be less stingy. If not, I am actually a little bit uncomfortable. The main reason is that I feel a little uncomfortable after being together easily in this life. In short, the relationship line depends on the author's arrangement. At present, the career line is a lot of fun, the talents are full, and the task rewards are generous. It is indeed a top-notch system. Come on, author.

Nothing else, needless to say, this book is to my liking. The female protagonist becomes stronger along the way, but the female protagonist is always stronger than the male protagonist, which makes me very satisfied. At the same time, the heroine has a correct outlook on life, is very clear-headed, and knows what she wants. I haven't found any clues in what I've read so far. I hope the author will keep this pace, not interrupt updates, not finish the work, stay healthy, and take care of yourself. Finally, I wish you all a happy day and everything goes well.

There are still many poison points in the early stage, but there are some changes in the mid-term. Why do you use weak words to describe the heroine's baby in the early stage? [Punch out] But the later description of it as a female eagle is still very good. The main reason is that the male characters portrayed are more dominant, and I don't understand that the female protagonist should be portrayed more, right? ! And why is there such a thing as losing a sister and gaining another? ! Is this what a normal brother would say? What's more, she is also a sister control, which means that as long as she is a biological woman younger than herself, anyone can be her, as long as her identity is the same, she doesn't care who she is [angry] [angry] [angry] There is also the male protagonist. I won't say much at the beginning. The male protagonist's thoughts are written about the heroine's inner thoughts as soon as he appears on the scene. Is he important? He's just a man, so he shouldn't focus more on portraying the heroine's baby. He was so aggressive during the questioning session [awkward laugh] The same goes for the system. Why does the strategy system strengthen the talents of the male protagonist who already has an advantage? It is several times stronger than the female channel guide system, and the Long Aotian system does not show any signs of Long Aotian. Maybe I am pursuing the ultimate protruding power. The above is what I personally feel is toxic. The content is indeed that the men are stronger and the women are stronger. This is not a trick, but the front always gives people a feeling of being evenly matched, which is slightly unpleasant. But winning the first prize in the back is very satisfying! The character design is quite three-dimensional, reflecting the duality of human nature, and there is no single shot to death. There are good and bad female characters, but if you look at them carefully, each one is good and has their own characteristics, but their stances are different. Later, the frequency of system appearances was not very high, which was quite good. The heroine, Baobao, is really hard-working, capable, and smart, very good. The depiction of the battle is still very wow and exciting. However, I wrote it earlier, so my thinking is not too out of the ordinary, and it is rather outdated. However, the later part is still okay, and babies who are resistant to poisons can eat it [thoughts]

It's really beautiful! ! ! It's been a long time since I've seen such a strong man and a strong woman [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] I really like it! ! ! This is truly a refreshing novel. The ones I read before were almost frustrating me to death. It was really hard to find one that suited my taste. I was so moved [crying][crying][crying] I hope the author will work harder in the future. I really like this book! ! ! Come on, of course, I also wish the author good health and all the best! ! ! Take care of yourself [love] [love] [love] Don't look at the low rating, it's just because this is a new book, just published, but it's really good! ! ! ! !

It's a good-looking, very novel setting. It's not that the female protagonist is stronger than the male protagonist, but the female protagonist is the strongest. The female protagonist even saved the male protagonist several times. Oops, the male protagonist approached the female protagonist at the beginning and said it was because the guide had already been silently attracted to her. If the male protagonist had an admiration value, I would guess it would be 70 by now. Hahahaha, the female protagonist is now 30, and she is still in the stage of liking her. Wow, it is the male protagonist who has been teasing the female protagonist. She is so attracted and swayed. The heroine's combat power is really awesome. I can defeat all enemies with one sword. With one sword in my hand, in the face of absolute strength, all the plots and tricks are in vain. The heroine is dumbfounded. She is overwhelmed by her strength [Admire]. Then I praise the author's writing style. It's really good. The characters are good and the plot is good. How come you are so good at writing? I love it. [Adore]

It turns out that the male is stronger than the female! ! ! ! ! ! I love it so much. After searching for a long time and eating a lot💩, I finally found a novel about a real strong female character (it's finally not a novel about a spoiled wife wearing a double-masculine skin [crying]). The author's writing style is also very good (ദ്ദി ˉ͈̀꒳ˉ͈́)✧ It's not a running story. I'm really looking forward to the following plot, and I hope I will become the strongest in the world! ! !

Overall, it is very good. It is not traditional and old-fashioned. It is very realistic when viewed with new ideas. There is no vicious female supporting role or brainless competition. But Chapter 41 shocked me. Regardless of whether the heroine is the original owner or not, the change in the brother's attitude is too strange. It doesn't matter whether the heroine is the original owner or not, but in this chapter The original author had a loving family, and discovered something was wrong with the heroine, and then immediately accepted the existence of the heroine, which made me unable to stand it. I also really liked the plot of this book, but the result was that it was so frustrating that I couldn't get enough of it. Please, author, please change this paragraph. Oh, forget it, that's it.

It looks good, the plot is very novel, the female protagonist upgrades to fight monsters, her system and cultivation are better than the male protagonist, I like this kind of strong men and strong women, the author greatly cheers [blowing kiss] [please update]

Very nice to look at. It's very good for me, a female protagonist, and she's not aggrieved at all. The benefits that the system should give to the female protagonist are unambiguous. She's stronger than the male protagonist at the beginning and has always been stronger than him. There's no pretense. The plot is also very compact and not procrastinating. She's always looking for opportunities to fight and practice. The male protagonist is okay and has a very innocent puppy character. I've been reading the book. I can't say enough about the main heroine. She's well portrayed. It would be great if there were more women in the supporting roles😊. I like more group portraits of powerful girls.

Very nice upgrade flow ʕ•ᴥ•ʔThe heroine's baby is so powerful that it's reassuring😌The emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are also very delicious😋All enemies are given as gifts. Come and get one for free. The heroine's baby has both edge and reservation, which is well balanced. Hehe. I really like this kind of thing that can make a big wave in front of peers, and can pretend to be weak when facing enemies with high cultivation levels🤓Invincible. Then a little 🤏🏻 personal reading opinions: What initially attracted me was the numerical training panel and system task auxiliary upgrades. Completing tasks - obtaining gain points - improving cultivation, I think it is very innovative, but after reading more than a hundred chapters, the heroine mainly relies on opportunities and practices by herself. Although it is also very satisfying (after all, it is the opportunity that increases the luck value), but it always feels a little inconsistent with the previous part qwq. There is relatively little text in the later mission releases and reward values. If you are reading this type of game, you need to pay attention~( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ As for the utilization of the system, you can judge whether the enemy is dead based on whether the task is completed. This is really suitable for eradicating the weeds (＾ν＾). However, in the beginning, it was written that the heroine could look at the opponent's panel values and then compare her own level with the opponent's. Later, this function was not continued to be used [crying] It's a pity, I think this is also very useful. TUT Finally, the author's writing is super good (⌒▽⌒) and the battle scenes are described in a grand manner, which is in line with Long Aotian's tone. Hehe, the heroine's actions are not trivial! This boy is so terrifying! The plot arrangement is also very coherent and compact~ I have collected a lot of fairy tales with good reviews. In fact, I put them on hold after reading half of them. This is the only one. Even though it is being serialized, I couldn't help but read it first and follow it in one go♪ (v＾＿＾) v I like it very much! Recommended!

It's okay. In this tomato where evil women are prevalent, a righteous heroine suddenly appeared. I was very surprised. The heroine is a very good person. However, there are still some settings in the book that made me feel uncomfortable. It is obvious that the hero needs to conquer the heroine. In the beginning, the heroine also needs to deliberately encounter the hero. However, it can be ignored. Overall, it is okay. I like the heroine design very much.

This book is pretty good, a real heroine! ! It's completely a male version of sex! The female protagonist has always been stronger than the male protagonist! Although the title of the author's chapter is funny, the article is very honest! The orthodox cultivation and growth stream! The description of the techniques and moves is also very good! Let me say it again, the heroine is super strong! By the way, the only thing that makes me a little uncomfortable is the attitude of the heroine's brother after he found out that the heroine is not his sister. He was cold and then quickly accepted it? I think either we shouldn't let the heroine's family see it, or we should say later that the heroine and her brother are the same person, otherwise it would be a bit strange!

The pace of this book is relatively fast. The book ends at Novice Village in 100 chapters. I didn't realize it was already 100 chapters long. The author explains the male protagonist's self-strategy very well, that is, the female protagonist here seems to be expressionless and "cold" to be captured (mainly because she was psychologically uncomfortable after being ignored by the male protagonist in her previous life, and now she knows that the male protagonist wants to capture her, so she chooses to sit still). But to be honest, the relationship between the male and female protagonists is not progressing that fast. The book is tied with only 15 favorability points. It's about a lot of careers, and the male protagonist doesn't have much of a role to play, and there's no hero to save the beauty (at most, the beauty saves the hero once, and since then the male protagonist has never returned, and there was another time with his brother). The female protagonist has been on the road to pursue a career. As for the plot of friends, I personally think it's pretty good. It's just the plot of the first meeting between the brother and the heroine. It lacks some descriptions. If the brother had more descriptions in his mind and given a little more time, it wouldn't be impossible to treat the heroine as his sister. With this sudden acceptance, I hope I will write later that my brother probably feels that the heroine is the original heroine. If the heroine is not the original heroine, I have no idea. How can a person who takes up my sister's body be kind to her? (Mainly at that time, I saw the word helplessness in the description of my brother's mood, and in the original book, my brother was not in the plot at all. I thought it was my brother who was reborn, so I was helpless and painful and could not save my sister.) However, when I thought my brother was reborn, I started to watch it again, so I should still watch it as long as the rhythm in the later stages is as fast as the early stage, and then I hope that some pitfalls can be fixed. [Congratulations] Great support to the author. Every good thing will have shortcomings. It is best to make up for the shortcomings. But I still hope that the good points of this book can be like the sun, and the shortcomings will disappear as soon as they appear [laughs]

It's beautiful. It's beautiful. Come, everyone. Don't be dissuaded by the unreasonable things in front of you, there are foreshadowings. Good looking. Explain the reason why my brother accepted the current heroine so quickly. Don't abandon the article just because the male protagonist has a strategy and a talent. The female protagonist has always been better than the male protagonist, and I feel like her brother is no worse than the male protagonist, and even better than the male protagonist. This is really nice. The male protagonist doesn't like the female protagonist for the sake of strategy. It feels like the male protagonist has already shown signs of it in his previous life. Oh, let's all come and see it anyway.

There are still a few more chapters to write a follow-up review of! It's this book cover. At first I thought it was a boy's novel. This book is my favorite among the immortal cultivation novels I have read recently! There's nothing flashy or anything. Very unobstructed breasts... The author's writing style is relatively simple, a bit unremarkable, neither good nor bad? It's considered average. I think the delicate emotional descriptions in some places are handled very well! It's quite touching! And then the protagonist's golden finger is actually a bit wide open! But I think what the author wrote is not very exaggerated! There is no feeling like a boss waking up from a bed five hundred meters away! You will enjoy watching it and you won't find the running account boring! Then I saw that the female protagonist and the male protagonist in the two hundred chapters now get along easily! This is okay, but I think it feels a little inconsistent when the hostess sets it up! Or is the heroine just so different? 👁And not much is explained about the background of the male and female protagonists! Look forward to it! All in all, this book is still worth reading! It kills time and also kills chapters... If nothing else happens, I will keep chasing it! I hope I can write better and better as I write...! Don't read the comment section [Petrochemical] and hope that the author will not engage in female competition in the future. . Plq is relatively intelligent

It's so beautiful, shocking and delicious😭😭😭Goddess, please give me more, please Goddess, just treat it like feeding chickens. You win, brother, you completely won this time. You broke my psychological defense. I completely broke my defense. In front of you, I am just like a wild dog that has been soaked in heavy rain. At this moment, I understand that you can't even say a retort when you really break your defense. It turns out that a moth that has never seen light in its life burns not its wings when it throws itself into the fire, but the only hope left in its heart. Please give me one more chapter. I'm dying. Please. I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I can't breathe. Please give me one more chapter. Just one more chapter. I'll do it again in the future. Please, really, just one chapter. I swear I'll do it again. I really can't bear it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep. I beg you.

It's super beautiful [love][love][like][like], the subject matter is quite novel, the heroine has a good outlook on things, is cold and detached in front of others, has great talent, and is also smart. In short, I haven't found anything out of the ordinary so far [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] How dare you burst out ten chapters in one day and scare me to death [grievance]

It's quite good-looking, and the heroine is very strong. The shortcomings are that there are a lot of descriptions of the heroine's appearance, and there are inexplicable emotional disputes. Some of the overbearing sentences are awkward, but considering that it is about Long Aotian, it is okay and even a little funny. It will get better and better as you watch it, so don't be scared away by the hot reviews (if you really don't like it, it's not too late to run away). What I disliked the most at the beginning was the sect. By the time I reviewed it, I had already left the sect. The second thing I don't like is the arrogance of the male protagonist, who later becomes inferior to the female protagonist. Personally, I think this book is pretty good and worth reading.

This book is really refreshing and comfortable to read ①The female protagonist Jiang Ying is stronger. The male protagonist works hard to catch up with the female protagonist. When in danger, the female protagonist saves the male protagonist. The heroine deserves to be the first genius ②The male protagonist conquers the female protagonist, and the conquered female protagonist doesn't have to do anything. It's great to not be controlled by the traditional strategy writing system. ③The heroine Jiang Ying is Jiang Ying from the previous life. There are many hints in the previous chapters, but the latest chapter makes it clear. ④I like the heroine's brother Jiang Xu very much. I liked him as soon as he appeared. Jiang Xu's own aura is also very strong. It's great that he is not overwhelmed by the male protagonist Long Aotian. His brother Jiang Xu is also a proud man of heaven.

The male protagonist's growth line is average. I don't think the male protagonist is worthy of the female protagonist. But the heroine's growth line is very clear, she sticks to her heart, and the heroine's character and behavior currently look good. Will review after watching it

Nice! I started reading this book when I had nothing to do. But the more I read, the more I read it. I have been following it for a few days. The heroine setting of mua is really to my liking. She is decisive and smart in killing. I feel that the rating is not worthy of the content. The author has been very careful with the code. I can't read enough.

I'm so excited. I finally saw Yingying win the championship. I just didn't give a rating. On such a special day, of course I have to give the best five-star praise to the author Dada. Dada's writing style is superb. He made my Yingying look as cold as the moon, unparalleled in the world, and vividly portray the indomitable spirit. It's great! ! ! I would like to call it the number one immortal cultivation novel in my mind. It's super detailed. Now the descriptions of Tianyuan Realm are so awesome. I don't know how awesome it will be in the future. Anyway, no matter what I write, it's awesome. The scene where Ying Ying won the championship must be recorded in the annals of history for me. Open a separate page and let us congratulate at the end: "The eightieth round, the last game, Jiang Ying wins!"

The heroine is such a strong person who can survive in desperate situations. Her success is not inevitable, but is the result of her own confidence and luck. With this kind of mood, 17's success is not the only necessary condition, but it also proves that she is strong and tenacious enough. The story of grassroots counterattack is very difficult and Hard work (the above is purely a personal opinion, please forgive me for the bad writing) I think this is a novel worth reading. It has both family and love. The supporting characters are also well portrayed. The women here are not the kind of people who are obsessed with love. They have their own ambitions. I think this is very good. Second line: It is having this kind of confidence that makes her success inevitable. Although this condition is not the only condition for success.

I found that some of the negative reviews were because they felt that the male protagonist can also gain talents through the strategy [face covering] Everyone compares this book with other female channel books. What is the comparison? Before the female protagonist came, this book was supposed to be a male protagonist. The male protagonist should be the strongest, but after the female protagonist came, she was stronger than the male protagonist. And they always focus on describing the female protagonist. She has a strong sense of female channel. This book is double strong, double strong, double strong!

I personally read the first 30 pictures, and I think they are quite good. I have read some other immortality stories, and the beginning is quite nonsensical. There are also a lot of inexplicable jokes. It is very boring and feels outrageous. I want to read a real story, so this article is very good. It has an independent true martial arts system, and some private settings that are integrated with the immortality. It is quite novel, and there are not so many inexplicable jokes. It really tells a story, and I personally can still accept the cp. Some of the descriptions in the article feel that the male protagonist is quite down-to-earth, and this book is a double time travel between the female protagonist and the male protagonist. Some of the psychological descriptions of the male protagonist really have a contrasting sense of humor. In short, it makes people feel pretty good. You can read it.

What else is there to say? Five stars will be given to you directly. It's so beautiful. I go to the heroine and just kill her, strong, strong, strong. Finally, it's not the heroine who needs the hero to save her at the critical moment, but the heroine who saves the hero hahahahaha. Top-notch writing, five-star praise!!! [Adoration][Admiration][Admiration]

The female protagonist is very strong, not as strong as the male protagonist and the female protagonist (maybe because the male and female protagonists have not yet met, but the male protagonist sincerely admits that the female protagonist is very strong). The world view is also relatively complete, and many small details are also very good. I am not into the sand sculpture style or abstract style, I like pure and serious rush. The female protagonist is really strong, and there is no female protagonist. The male protagonist has the attributes of Long Aotian at the beginning, and then I was worried that the relationship with the female protagonist would be like Long Aotian in ancient times. However, the author handled the process from the male protagonist Long Aotian to the male protagonist of the female channel very well! ! ! And there is no deliberate intention to let the male and female protagonists get along in the same frame. Very natural! ! ! There are three shortcomings: 1. When the heroine's brother accepted the heroine at the beginning, he felt that it was not written well (I know what you mean, but those two sentences are not very good) 2. It has not written two thousand chapters yet 3. There is no daily update of 100 chapters. I hope the author can improve based on these three points, especially the second and third points.