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Generally speaking, this novel is at a better level among the class. It is a bit toxic, but it is not too big. If you read the book review, be sure to read it. I have a few suggestions for you. The first is the girl who is always looking for death. Regarding the high school joke [thinking] [face covering], don't give her too many pictures just for the sake of the number of words. Write it to death as early as possible. It really affects the perception. There are also some places that are a bit unreasonable. [Thinking] But good readers will make up for it themselves. For example, the scene when they first entered the training camp burned out inexplicably. It was obvious that readers complained about it, but I think you can fill in another paragraph at the end. For example, the male protagonist is actually playing the role of a white face. Even if the male protagonist doesn't sing, the army commander will do the same thing later. [Thinking] It's impossible to really expel him, so if you write like this, I think there will be a lot less complaints. [Thinking] Please read my book review.

It's okay. I saw a lot of people saying that the backpack limit is a poison point. I think it's okay (I have a high poison resistance point). After all, it's not an inheritance. It's useless if the backpack is fully open. Some things can't be used. If you take out some things, you will become a blacklist.

Good book, it made my blood boil when I read it

The setting is quite good, very good, and you can't help but read it. It just feels like there are too many settings for the protagonist. If the author wants to add more, I feel like he can add them to the main plot. There is no need to make so many.

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I saw the updated chapter. The overall plot is compact and there are no problems with the logic. I was curious about why the score was so low. I read the comments and found that they were mainly dissatisfied with the previous title. I thought the title should match the Invincible style. After reading the introduction, I already knew in advance that it was an upgrade stream, so I have no objection to this issue. I will give the author a five-star rating. I feel that 8.5+ Is worthy.

The author's description of the battle and the use of some fighting terms are acceptable, and it feels a bit like a novel with a guide in a time-travel game. By the way, the protagonist doesn't travel through time.

Author, please update it quickly. I'm going to die. If you don't read this book to me, I'm going to die.

Great, my blood is boiling

Not bad. It feels good to show it to me.

Give the author some points, it's not bad after all

The content is compact and organized but a bit short

Interesting book, good to read, love to read, more to come! ! ! Without financial conditions, I can only offer five stars ('▽')

Love it. Love it. Wings of Demacia.

I can't stop watching [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

Cool, but not enough to watch

Very beautiful and interesting

It looks great. I love reading it. Come on, author [Like]

Interesting, no doubt

A rare gem of a tomato.

It's full, no need to say more [blowing kiss]

Not enough. Ahhhhhhhhhh.

Okay, the needle won't prick

Very nice, good luck to the author [Like]

A good book needs no introduction.

Good book, but not enough

It's good-looking. Anyway, I like to watch it.

Okay,

I usually don't comment much. I think this book is still very good, so I gave the author a thumbs up. It's a bit short. I hope it can be read until more than nine o'clock.

Personally, I think it's okay and it can fit on a bookshelf.