Reborn as a Zombie, I Crash Through the School Beauty's Door from the Start!

It seems to be a new book, and it is quite good to read and write so far. It is rare to see the style of two strong characters evolving together. However, it may take some writing and thought to make the male and female protagonists complementary. After all, this is a novel with obvious combat power stage. It is difficult to balance the strength of the male and female protagonists. Generally The male protagonist of the novel has all kinds of adventures, so it is difficult for the female protagonist to write about it. He only directly cheats on the female protagonist and does not see a surge in combat power for a while. I have a small suggestion. In fact, if you want to show that two people can survive together and one person will die alone, you can consider starting from the personalities of the two and design a The dungeon separates two people, and then the two people make mistakes and almost die due to the weaknesses of their respective personalities (for example, the cautious one is too cautious, the bold one is too bold). When the two people are together, they will remind each other to look at the problem in more detail. In this way, the complementarity of the two people is more effective, but it may be thankless to write this way, because the male and female protagonists have very clear personalities.

It looks good. I hope it will continue to have a single heroine. Don't run away. There are not many people watching it now, but there will definitely be more people watching it in the future. Come on

I think this book is pretty good, but there are some details that need to be paid attention to. For example, the pair of glasses had already been upgraded to the second level when they and Bai Xin separated for the first time. Later, when they were upgraded, they were said to be upgraded to the second level. So I hope the author can grasp some details. I hope this book will be popular, and the author will give it his best.

The plot is compact and interlocking; there are a lot of foreshadowings at the moment, and the world view is very broad, but the progress is still very slow around chapter 70, and there are relatively few emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists; I hope the author can keep writing, it will be a wonderful book

If you can't fill in all the holes, you know the author [star]

The idea is good, but unfortunately the writing style is still immature, and the logic of the writing needs to be optimized. I hope the author can gradually solve these problems. If he writes better and better, he should have good results.

The male and female protagonists grow up together. It can be seen that the author has many ideas and has buried a lot of foreshadowing. Many settings have not been revealed. Isn't he going to have a eunuch?

It's very interesting. Come on, author 😘

Judging from the world view that the author wants to depict, it is probably very ambitious. I hope the author can grasp it.

It feels pretty good, but not many people have read it. I haven't read a post-apocalyptic novel for a long time, but I saw a good one as soon as I came here.