Want to Be the Pick-Up King of Another World

It feels okay, and it fits my mentality of hating Bone King, but the author's writing skills are a bit lacking in meaning. I hope to write better in the future (it seems that one star and five stars are not included in the statistical score, and four stars are encouraged)

That's great, I'm not the only one who thinks that Lao Gu (King of Bones) does an amazing job to a beautiful girl like the Holy Queen [face covering]

The subject matter is very good. I was attracted to it by the Holy Queen. I have seen more than a hundred pictures. The plot is not as bad as the reviews said. Of course, there are still some poisonous points. For example, the protagonist is targeted by the nobles at the beginning and says that he wants to upgrade in a low-key manner. Things are so big later. Although it is to connect the plot of going to the Holy Kingdom later, it makes people look a little uncomfortable. Although there are some big and small poisonous points later (can't remember), but overall it is quite good. Also, I can't think of how the protagonist can win at the moment. The protagonist's level ability props and teammates are still too weak. I hope the protagonist can become stronger in the future [Like]

It's a pretty good book about upgrading and fighting monsters. It has some flaws, but they're not big problems. I've only read a dozen chapters, so let's see what happens next🤗 It is worth mentioning that the rhythm of the battle is well written, at least it is better than the average. Compared with the literary drama, the literary drama is not too disappointing. There are no shortcomings in the rounding. Maybe it would be better to add more non-obtrusive jokes to liven up the atmosphere? From the perspective of game flow, there is a feeling that I have been working on the main plot regardless of the branch plots. Although there is a sense of rhythm... It is still too fast and not smooth enough. It is a little bit too much. Only this type has a bit of aesthetic fatigue😞

The writing in the Bone King fanfic is okay, but it always gives me the feeling of being a newbie. The setting and part of the plot don't look smooth, and I can't say I overpower the protagonist. It's just that the author can't handle it well. I'll write down the specific suggestions in a paragraph review. It's a pretty good fanfic that you can read.

3.5 Stars, emmm, the biggest feature of this novel is the inch-stop! There are many times when you think it's time to feel better, or when Cao Pi is in trouble, the author will feed you a lot, and not only once or twice, but it's still good after more than 300 chapters, and it's still being beaten at level 100 [face covering]. And the protagonist just likes to do some tortuous things, wasting a lot of effort, getting half the result with twice the effort, otherwise it's okay, I can watch it.

I think the plot of this novel is very exciting, and every twist and turn is unexpected. The author's writing style is also very good, allowing people to feel the depth and complexity of emotions. I really like this novel and I hope the author can continue writing it and let us keep reading it!

The writing is very good. The growth speed is enough now. Don't affect the normal logic too fast. Also, the update is too slow. Or, I will need level 100 helpers later. If the indigenous people are not good, it depends on how the author arranges it. Um😓Updates are so slow! The pace is pretty good so far, I hope it continues.

The clues of family, friendship and love in the novel are rich and touching. Through delicate emotional descriptions, the author allows readers to feel the deep emotional bonds and interpersonal relationships, and evokes the warmth and cherishment of human emotions.

Generally speaking, this book by the author has its shortcomings. Although the early Holy Kingdom chapter seemed a bit difficult because of its immature writing style, the writing style gradually improved in the Theocratic Chapter. The protagonist and other characters are more fleshed out, the emotional lines are richer, and the plot is more logical (of course, the author sometimes still convulses like drinking fake wine, and writes some difficult content, I hope to make some changes [face covering]), but in general, the image of the protagonist has been created relatively well since the Theocracy (if the score is 100, I can Give it to 85~90) Here are two words from my heart: I really hate the Bone King, what does this skeleton take life for? [Angry] Finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard and write a better book, make the protagonist's character more full, the emotional drama more delicate, make Seul-yu stronger, and finally let the protagonist twist off this skull and play it as a ball! (First give four stars to encourage the author, and then give five stars after modifying and improving the difficult content)

It's ok, it has a unique flavor. I read a few Bone King fanfics here and here, and gave up the idea of writing one. The one I clicked on is "Welcome". The magic fighting method is so well written that it's hard to surpass. In addition, I have to read the original novel intensively and delve into the setting. I feel too tired. I used to be the same. I play an MMO game called Territory Life, and I am the vice-president of a certain guild. Among the more than 20 of us, we have all kinds of personalities. Some love fighting, some love farming, some are gentle and impulsive. I thought it would be interesting to write the real life stories of our guild into Bone King. Then I thought again, doesn't that coincide with the Six Gods?

Although the early stage is based on the classic aristocratic bullying routine, because the author downplayed the emotional feedback of this part of the protagonist, it will not give people the feeling of eating a fly. The main part is a monster-killing and upgrading process. The protagonist's upgrade is relatively smooth. I look forward to the follow-up.

There are very few better-written bone fics on this platform. Some of the author's self-written stories are also good. After reading some 360 chapters, the author no longer knows how to write and is already in trouble. I felt aggrieved in the front, and again in the back. I thought that if I held it in for so long, something big would happen to me, but I didn't expect it to be this "big". It was still the key to the death of half of my teammates, and it was still the key to losing the chain. I was forced to change into a woman, and then I was teleported away, and it was a long and smelly way home. There are still a lot of weird things that I don't want to talk about. I couldn't leave after reading those chapters of 360. I am really a hardcore fan.

Among many novels, this novel is undoubtedly my favorite. The plot is fascinating and the characters are deeply rooted in people's hearts, making people unable to extricate themselves. Coupled with the wonderful descriptions, I seemed to see the details of every scene, as if I was immersed in it. If you are looking for a novel worth reading, this one will not disappoint you.

It is also a very good fanfic. Although the psychological score may be lowered when I first clicked on this book to read the comment section, and although there may be some loopholes at the beginning, the author has basically changed everything that can be changed later, but this book still suits my taste. Keep up the good work, author. Ten updates a day is the best [laughter]

I've been waiting for updates on the novel, looking forward to seeing that plot twist. The author's writing is getting better and better, able to vividly depict the emotional fluctuations of each character. I hope the author can continue to create and let us see more wonderful stories!

The plot of this novel is very gripping, with every twist and turn surprising and shocking. The author's writing style is also very good, allowing people to feel the depth and complexity of emotions. I really like this novel and I hope the author can continue writing it and let us keep reading it!

This novel is really good. I saw it on social platforms. I have been reading it for several days. The author's writing and plot design are excellent, making people immersed in the story.

Through the characterization of details and the rendering of emotions, the author presents a real and unforgettable world to readers. Readers can feel the emotions and joys of the characters and experience the changes and challenges in the story with them.

This novel is so fascinating! Through various channels, introductions from friends, recommendations on the Internet, etc., I finally started to read it, and I was completely immersed in it. The development of the story and the characterization of the characters made me unable to stop. This attraction is indescribable!

The plot of this novel is very touching, which made me feel sad and moved. The author's writing style is very delicate and can make people feel the sincerity and power of emotions. I think this is a very touching novel and worth reading.

The emotional progression between the protagonist and the Holy Queen is quite well written. I would like to give you five stars for encouragement.

The author's writing style is smooth, concise and poetic, and readers can enjoy the charm of beautiful sentences and language. Their brushstrokes are delicate and just right, making readers immersed in it and feel the beauty and power of the words.

I'm so happy to see this novel updated today! Every plot makes people feel the sincerity and power of emotion, making people want to keep watching. I hope the author can persevere and continue to create more beautiful novels!

I read more than 600 latest chapters in one go. Overall, it is an excellent work. The following comments contain spoilers, please read at your discretion and represent only my personal views. I can honestly say that I just want to watch the protagonist save girls and conquer girls. The rhythm of the plot and emotions in the early and middle stages are very suitable for my taste. However, as of the last 600 chapters, the most progress descriptions with the opposite sex and the only second base is the funny sister. If you want to have emotional descriptions such as home runs, you can consider it as appropriate. Then from my perspective, the Elf chapter really made me jump. I chased and finally got to fight with the strength of the Bone King. My emotions had accumulated to a point, but you stopped me all at once. The protagonist also changed his gender and ended the first battle with another identity, which was one less exciting point. I was quite disappointed with this first collision that should release my emotions and should be the most exciting in the whole book. I suggest the author add a [Gender Change] tag in the introduction.

It's okay. I was originally going to watch Torture in the Great Tomb, so there's no need to rate it too harshly. It's just that the original part was a bit long. Chapter 300 finally reached the Great Tomb. I hope it can be done faster [Thoughts]

Good books naturally gain attention on multiple platforms! Whether it's Weibo or Tieba, there are people talking about the wonderfulness of this novel in every corner. I was also influenced by my friends and started a journey of pursuing reading. Unexpectedly, it is really fascinating, and every time I turn the page, I look forward to the next chapter.

At a book club event, I heard everyone discussing this novel. Curiosity prompted me to learn about it, but I didn't expect it to be beyond my imagination! The story is tight and engaging, and every character resonated with me deeply. This is a great book that brings me endless joy.

I saw this novel on an APP advertisement and thought it was well written, so I read it. Unexpectedly, this novel is really good! The plot is compact and the characters are vivid, making people want to keep watching.

It's very comfortable and refreshing. I feel that the characters in Bone King come to life, but the later chapters are a bit too bland. Maybe it has nothing to do with the main plot. I feel a little tired after reading it, but I feel comfortable again in the last few chapters.