Traveling Through the Book: 100,000 Indigenous Time Travelers at the Beginning

The subject matter is refreshing and the senses are good so far. But there is a big gap. If you want to show both the strength of the protagonist and the strength of the supporting character, you must suppress the protagonist. As a result, the special characteristics of the protagonist's Goldfinger being stronger than the supporting character's Goldfinger are suppressed. Therefore, you will feel both happy and unhappy while watching. A battle of wits is not like a battle of wits, and a refreshing novel is not like a refreshing novel. There is malice towards the protagonist. The suppression becomes deliberately obvious, and the results are reasonable but unreasonable. For example, when it is predicted that the golden finger will deal with the protagonist, it will make people feel inexplicable. The same can be seen in the first event when the breakthrough was made, the magic cultivator suddenly dealt with the protagonist and was suddenly solved. I didn't understand what foreshadowing was left. The depression is more than the improvement, and the improvement is not satisfying enough. In addition, the chapters are short, the progress is slow, and some of the indigenous plots are watery. After watching it, I felt a little uncomfortable. But then again, although the author feels like a dove in his words, fortunately, this book is very interesting, and the anticipation for the follow-up has made me continue to read it. I still hope that the author can continue to write, and the writing will get better and better, and the writing style will get better and better. (Just my humble opinion, I won't reply to the rebuttal because I'm too lazy to read)

Divine book! It's truly a divine book! The third young master of the Tang family was about to cry when he saw it, and Tiancan Tudou was amazed when he saw it! This is four The rebirth of a great masterpiece, the leader of the literary world in the 21st century! "Holy Ruins"? I lost some of my literary talent in front of it! "Dou Po"? I owe it some connotation! "Zhu Xian"? In front of it, my feelings fade away! "Covering the Sky"? In front of it, I lost three cents of my imagination! "Buddha"? Half of the layout is missing in front of it! This is a once-in-a-century classic of online writing! The greatest literary giant of the 21st century On! From Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Chengen, Cao Xueqin, to Kong Mo's old village, Poetry, poetry, sage, Sansu Jiaxuan; since Emperor Qin, Han Wu, Tang Zong, Song Zu, Cheng Ji Sihan, to Gautama Buddha, Plato, Copernicus, Aristotle ——Who wouldn't be in awe after reading it? ! This book by the author is truly the work of heaven and man! Excellent literary talent, exquisite diction, and The character of the Wei and Jin Dynasties, the charm of the Tang and Song Dynasties, is profound! I will see this in my lifetime Books are truly a blessing for three lifetimes! However, after reading this book, a feeling of sadness suddenly emerged: Such a masterpiece, if the day If we never meet again, what's the point of my life? What's the point of my life? ! Fortunately! Make a decision immediately and put it on your bookshelf! Only a restless heart can find peace for a moment Ning. Otherwise! If these masterpieces were covered with dust and the world could not see them, wouldn't it be a tragedy? A waste of natural resources, a waste of the author's efforts? ! After a battle between heaven and man, I finally made up my mind to sacrifice my ego and fulfill the great destiny. Me! This book review is dedicated to everyone in the world! This book must be read over and over again, until Let the whole world know about it! Walking between heaven and earth, the scorching sun and bright moon are witnesses: Is this book enjoyable enough? ——No Enough! Traveling across the rivers and lakes, rivers and seas serve as evidence: Is this book enjoyable? ——No Enough! Standing on the top of the fairy mountain, Qionglou Yuyu echoed: Is the update fast enough? Not enough! Not enough! Far from enough! Not enough chapters! Not fast enough! Not enough content! Not enough! [Come on] [Come on] [Come on] [Come on] [Come on]

In fact, I have to say that this book is already very good. There are a lot of tomato histories nowadays. The route and system of this book are also very complete. Although the protagonist has a period of forbearance, he is killed soon after and everyone is avenged. It cannot be regarded as the kind of completely brainless invincible novel, but more like the kind of intelligent upgrade novel, with conspiracy and foreshadowing. It is a good novel. [Send heart][Send heart] I don't have anything to suggest. I just hope that future readers will read less of the paragraphs. The people in them are very violent and may be infected [face covering]. If there are readers who are willing to report those very violent paragraphs, I hope you can help to report [like], which can be regarded as maintaining the environment of the book and bringing you a better reading experience. (Of course, I also thank you for reading my paragraph to the end. I wish you good luck [send heart])

So far, it is a very good novel. The early foreshadowing and character portrayal are good, and the description of the protagonist's personality is also very good. This book is not a brainless novel, or even completely enjoyable, so I hope that readers can read it with their brains and eyes (don't keep complaining about the author's problems with this or that, first check whether there is any problem with your own eyes). Some of the plots in the early stage are considered as foreshadowing, which will be explained later. I generally don't give five reviews, but the data for this book is really sluggish, so it's still necessary to pull the data. Of course, there are some suggestions here: the chat groups of various time-travelers talk a bit too much, which makes people feel like they are trying to limit the number of words. Some of the names of the time-travelers are a bit long, which is understandable. After all, Internet names cannot be repeated. There is no limit on the number of characters. It is understandable to choose a longer name, but if it is too many, it still feels like the number of characters is too high, and it is not convenient to remember (you can choose two or three more key words in the name, which seems more convenient). Also, there are too few, and it is difficult for people not to support the book (Author, you don't want the data to be too poor because readers support the book, right? Jie Jie Jie...)

First, good-looking, with above-average qualifications Second, novels based on imagination and freshness are still very popular. After all, Tomato is full of familiar routines. Third, um... It's not brainless, it's just that some details were not handled well. Fourth, for new authors, um... We need to give some encouragement. So far, I feel quite comfortable watching it all at once. I also hope that the author will keep updating, come on!

From the author's previous book. This author updates very quickly, and updates 5 times at a time. It is rare to see such a prolific author, as you can see from the last book. I originally wanted to keep books. But I didn't expect that it would only last 2 days. The author's book was killed by accident. Therefore, if you are interested in this book, I suggest you try to read the first 150 chapters. Otherwise it would be really easy to die. I will try my best to read this book every day so as not to make you die. I will comment later after waiting for more time.

Well, very good novels have a quality score of 9.5 Or above. There are few people writing novels about people traveling through time and cultivating immortals. There are not many people who have written them well. It is very good. Come on, the author. There were novels that stood out to me in the past. I wanted to follow them, but the authors who wrote well at that time stopped writing. I had no money to write [I almost cried]. It was a pity, so I won't let the author starve you to death [shy]

It's nice to read. This book transplants some flesh-and-blood divinity very wellヾ(ω*)ノI also like the one using the spine as a sword. The last time I saw it was in Chainsaw Man vs. Demon. Many cheats have their own advantages, but of course you have to be careful about backstabbing cheats. It's a pity that the author is busy with his life. After all, the data is not very good. What a treasure.

In Tomato is a low-grade book (here is a suggestion: the author quickly changed the name. I missed this book at least three times because of this name). The subject matter is novel, which is the biggest plus point, but the supporting characters are generally portrayed. In order to highlight the strong supporting characters, the first few dozen pictures give people a feeling of being strong. It feels like a pure and refreshing article, but I don't know why it started to burn my brain when I changed the style of writing. But actually it's okay. It gives people a feeling that I want to highlight that a certain character is smart, but it's a bit stiff. It feels a bit uncomfortable to read, but overall it's not bad. When the subject matter is not too extreme, this book can be used as a transitional read.

It's too short and not enough to watch. There are a lot of jokes in the chat group, but it just tastes a bit heavy on the smacking of a cup in the face. Other places are pretty good.

If you can ignore the wits set by the author, this is still a very good movie. After reading more than 200 chapters, my final evaluation is: this is an ancient novel, and it still relies on the third young master of the Tang family.

It's good to read. I'll support the author with three small ads every day. I hope this novel, in which the protagonist travels through a book and multiple people travel to a world of immortality, can be updated continuously. The original time-travelers inside each want to become the Great Love, and are ruthless and ruthless. In order to seize opportunities and other time-travelers, they use all kinds of cheats, and the cheats are even more powerful. It is also because there are different parallel worlds between reality and fiction in the world of Ten Thousand Corpses, in which the protagonist, who is familiar with the plot but has no system, cannot completely protect himself. In the virtual and real parallel world of Ten Thousand Corpses Immortal Emperor, he only survives until the pseudo-immortal king. In the systematic real world, he has faced many near-certain deaths, and without the help of the original time traveler Qing Xianer, the protagonist may have died. These original time traveler plug-ins can be released separately, which can only be said to be wonderful. The only bad thing is that the protagonist doesn't seem to realize that the enemy also has the ability to predict the future. Because of the future suit, he should have thought that his Tianji Gu was gone. After all, he must have known that you can know a certain future and destroyed this Gu. According to the protagonist's mind, he should be able to think of this.

I'll send you flowers, author. Your writing is beautiful. Come on. Stop updating. I thought this book was hopeless, but I didn't expect it to be revived. I really like books like this. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] This is my first time giving a gift to an author. I gave it on the gift list. Also, the author should pay attention to his own health.

Come on, author, the subject matter is quite new and the writing is good. I hope I can stick with it. After all, the writing of this book is very eye-catching to me. Moreover, author, you should put some notes in the introduction to prevent some unpalatable readers from mistakenly entering and leaving negative reviews.

First of all, I would like to thank the author for his work. Author, the subject matter of your book is very good. I just read it, and my eyes were brightened. But when I saw Chapter 250, I directly wrote out the emotions of the protagonist, and just worked hard to pursue the road. I think the protagonist, no matter how ruthless, should have some emotions in his heart. Maybe I have a different view, so I didn't read it before. , I also saw some brothers commenting that this book is a bit like the Great Love Immortal. I want to tell this brother that this book is not like brothers at all. There is one thing that is very different. Did the protagonist create a sect? It is very unlike that the members of the sect sacrificed themselves to the sect leader voluntarily. What I want to say, that's all. Thank you to the author for bringing a good work. I hope the author's next book will be a hit.

After reading the previous chapters, the summary is to tell readers that in the world of immortality, you must not have any morality and conscience. If you have any, you are a pig. You can do any unscrupulous thing for your own benefit. It is a good novel. Come and read it.

The author's writing is really very good. I have never read this type of book in Whole Tomato, or even in all the novels I have read. This is probably the first book in Whole Tomato where a bunch of time travelers come back and fight with each other. The books I have seen before are only one or two, which is only five or six.

The writing is quite good, but it's a pity that it's hard to read. It's not a pleasant article. The Legend of Immortality is getting more and more enjoyable, but this one is the opposite. But it's still very interesting to watch, and at the same time very depressing. It's like watching nrt from the husband's perspective. It's uncomfortable but it's so beautiful that I can't stop watching it. I love it every time.

Although it is strong, mining is not as good as cultivating immortals in the Magic Age. This one gets 4.7, That one gets 4.9, The Age of Ending Dharma is much more beautiful than this mining. I feel, yes, that's it. This Magic 12 is much better looking than that Waka. I can give 4.74.8 To this one and only 4.14.2 To that one. I'm not an anchor. This one is not as good-looking as the dual-system one. Use your brain to compile more updates for that one.

The world view is complete, the plot is continuous, and the story is clear. And everyone has a golden finger, so it feels great to play in a high-end game. Do you have any recommendations for similar high-end bureau novels?

I will only talk about one aspect of the other aspects of this book, that is, the author has written the protagonist's combat power very well. It will not be invincible all the way like the invincible novel, nor will it be invincible directly after leaving the weak period like some later development stories. After becoming invincible, it is very boring to read. Strong enemies emerge in endlessly. Even if the protagonist's strength steadily increases, there will always be opponents who can suppress and balance him. The outcome of the battle depends on strategy, trump cards, and the environment, rather than simply relying on level crushing. The combat power system is logically self-consistent and very comfortable to watch. In addition, I would like to encourage all book friends who like to read to send love messages to the author every day to help the author work faster. What do you think, author? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Five-star praise, I do what I say, and I hope it will continue to be fun in the future. To be honest, this novel is really full of twists and turns. There are some troubles at the beginning, and then it slowly becomes exciting, and then suddenly there is a big twist in the middle of the novel, which makes people feel uncomfortable. Then it reverses time and goes back to the past, and then it becomes fun again. Don't make another big twist!

I have read them all so far. First of all, I would like to thank the author for his book. At present, the advantages are also obvious. 1. The subject matter is very new. 2. The description of the behavior of the protagonists, supporting characters and villains is quite clever. 3. The overall timeline is still better controlled. At present, I personally think that there is still room for improvement. 1. The emotional line description and the control of women and children need to be improved. 2. The purpose of promoting the plot is not obvious enough, such as the Dongzhou Dynasty's hegemony, and the purpose of participation is not clear enough. At present, the overall score is 3.7. I hope the author will continue to work hard in the future! The feeling that the main outline of the middle and later stages of the novel is improved can be improved to 4 points or more

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It's quite interesting, and the setting is quite novel. It's not a brainless novel. The protagonist develops gradually, instead of taking off and upgrading at every turn. Moreover, he is not the strongest at the beginning. There are many other masters, which is okay.

Overall, I think it's pretty good. The main theme is relatively novel. I've seen some people say they feel uncomfortable, but I think it's actually pretty good. The protagonist is really difficult in the early stages, but things will get better later. The battle of wits is okay, overall it's pretty good, but the details need to be improved. I personally don't feel that there are many poisonous points. It's a bit frustrating at the beginning. The protagonist is constantly being targeted, but these are all foreshadowing and it's fun later. The emotional plot of the protagonist is a bit inexplicable. Everything else is pretty good. Overall, it's okay.

I have never reviewed a good book in such a long time, and I have never seen such a good group portrait article. The protagonist's personality changes from the early stage to the later stage are not too abrupt, and they are all experienced in crisis after crisis.

It's very good-looking. I've read 4,000 books on Tomato alone. I think it's very good to adapt into a comic. The world view is relatively large. I think the author should change the introduction and change it to the superpowers of those who travel through time. The real book is really good

The writing is very good, and the author is really a genius. Since writing this book, the five elements of the universe have become balanced, and there is even a hint that the earth element is too strong. Looks like I need to suppress it [Like] Too many people ridiculed the protagonist in the past, and the chat group was too abstract, too watery, and readers gave negative comments and ran away. After chapter 80, it became much better.

It's really good. Those picky readers, please take a look at what kind of software this is. This is Tomato. I finally found this novel in my book shortage. Don't give it up. The author keeps updating. I feel like this book is going to be popular.