As Promised, Brother, Why Do You Want to Tease Me?

Goddess, Goddess, I will follow you for the rest of my life. I really like this kind of delicate daily life and psychology... Jiang Heke, who is obsessed with nonsense, is considerate and sensitive to his younger brother... It's so delicious. Brother Bai is also such a smoky person, so chic and gentle. It's so cute that it made me feel warm and angry, and I was so angry that I had 5 meals. Goddess... I'm sorry, I'm thinking about the goddess again. Please write me some more. Children always cry when they are hungry.

I have only written about the first world now, so I will comment on the first world. First of all, it helps to clear up mines: two strong and two clean ones attack each other, the emotional line is not abusive so far (in my opinion), the writing is also very good, and there are no bad points. I really rarely have this kind of book without any bad points from beginning to end. There are more than 70 books on the bookshelf, and some of them are either childish in writing, or the plot is weak, or the characters are not likeable, or too boring. There are only a few that I really like. Maybe it is because I am older and I am not picky now. I rarely encounter such a book. The only regret is that this book is relatively new and I don't know how to write, so if the book becomes popular in the future, I will become a long-time fan! The writing + plot + characters are all good, so there's no reason why it shouldn't be popular. As long as there is no big thunder, I will always follow Da Da! After finishing this book, if there is a next one, I will continue to follow it ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـ♡ ﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨Love you so much

What I want to say is that the author's literary skills are very good. He can describe the emotions of the protagonist and his character is not restricted to one character at all. When I read novels, I am the kind of person who wants to switch out and watch Douyin when I see some embarrassing plots, but this article did not make me switch platforms at all. The writing is always on point throughout the story, and the emotional lines between the protagonists are also very clear, without any ambiguity or hesitation. And there are both sweet and sad. When it comes to sadism, I personally think that there is no deliberate effort to highlight how sadistic it is. It seems more like this is how it should end. It's really well written✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧ Dear author, I must read your next articles. How could there be such a heart-stirring work😋😋😋😋

It looks good, it looks good. The author's plot, writing and characters are all very strong. I like it very much, especially the part between Xu Bai and Lin Zhou. I feel really comfortable and have a heart-pounding feeling. To be honest, I was really worried at first about switching to being with my brother. Fortunately, there is no such ending. I like it very much. It's so cool. It's so cool. I just clicked in casually, but I didn't expect that we saw such a super touching article. Confession author @jasmine

Nice! It's so beautiful! Men see their menstruation, and women see their nerves. This is the nemesis of depression and an alarm clock for vegetative people. It beautifully illustrates the longing and love that the five-guaranteed households in the village have for the widow. It's so beautiful to see the tears flowing from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River. It's so beautiful. , God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world map meaningful. I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which makes me realize that God does exist. I am so happy that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water.

It's so good, why is the rating so low? I rarely write a book review before I've finished reading it, but the first world is so well written that it made my heart feel warm and a bit sour. Lin Xubai did not focus on his appearance, but his personality charm was enough to attract many people. He may not look serious, but he is strong, gentle, reliable and responsible. When he refused the confession of his younger brother who he raised by himself because he already had a boyfriend, Lin Zhou's favorability increased. My first reaction was how could it be possible that he liked her even more after his confession was rejected? Later, I thought about how this is normal. When you see the person you like running towards the happiness you want, you will feel happy too. This idea was so normal that it surprised me. The novels I read before were about forced love at this point, and Lin Zhou was really raised well by Lin Xubai. From a little boy with low self-esteem to a man with upright views, sense of responsibility and sense of proportion like his brother, I felt very soft and healed after reading it, so I couldn't help but write a book review first. Then there's the knowing. I really like this character for no reason. Haha, it's such a contrast. I personally like the cuteness of the contrast. I read the author's comment that it will appear in the future, and I hope to know how many scenes there are. [Sending my heart] Summary: It's very beautiful, the writing is very good, and Shou has a strong personality. I heard that it was a slice of the world (?), So I won't comment on it. You can enter it with confidence under control. The next world is not as amazing as the first world, but it's not bad either.

The early part about raising children is really well written ꒰ *•ɷ•* ꒱Originally I didn't like the part about raising children in the novel. I always thought it was a bit weird, but the author's writing was super nice and made me get to that point. In fact, I prefer the protagonist to be with Jiang. I was always scared before choosing the plot. I was very satisfied with the ending when the protagonist rejected Lin! (If the protagonist chooses Lin, I won't say anything more and will just quietly exit the bookshelf ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू ) The plot of Lin tidying up the room and looking for birthday gifts was very touching, and I already shed tears while watching it. There could be more plots like this, it would make me cry happily｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡

Good-looking, really good-looking. I can see the progress of the author a little bit, especially the ancient plane. I cried when I saw it. There is obviously no particularly outstanding emotional development, but I can feel the smooth emotions from Li Zheng's words and deeds. It's just a pity that the fate is too weak [crying] After three years of hard work, I waited for the news of the death of my old friend, but I could watch the misty rain in the south of the Yangtze River for Brother Lin with the illusory possibility. Finally, after going round and round, the two finally (can be considered) together...

I can't believe the rating is so low. It's very beautiful. The characters are full-bodied and the emotions are very delicate. But there is no he in the text. It's a bit sour and sweet, like plum candy. I like it. There is such a shocking deliciousness in the foreign persimmons😋

So cool! So cool! The most praiseworthy thing is that the stream of consciousness driving and the ambiguous pull are all very well written. , But this makes it a little hard for me to look directly at the tomato braised beef brisket. . . I love Narcissus the most in these worlds, the kind where our senses are connected, our flesh and blood blend, we are the most intimate symbiosis in the world, no one will love myself more than me! I came here because of the dual personality in the introduction, and it lived up to my expectations after reading it! Not bad [sending heartfelt wishes]

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Looking forward to the author's future performance! ) There is meat to eat! Get on the highway! Stream of consciousness! ⭐I can't do it anymore, I highly recommend the first small world! ! ! The plot feels good! ! ! ! ! ! The author takes good care of readers! ! ! ! I really enjoyed the extra episode! ! ! ! ! ! ! Younger brother, Jiang Du has a 1V1 chapter with his brother~! It's so cool in the back! ! ! ! 1V2, this 1V2 stream of consciousness is so cool! ! ! So delicious! ! ! So delicious! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I really, really, really think this novel is so beautiful and so well written. Today, when abnormal love is prevalent, it is really not easy to find a novel with such a normal and healthy view of love. The author's views and writing style are very good. In my heart, the score of this book should be 9.9 [Crying] I can't do it anymore. Author, why are you so awesome? After reading The Second World, what touched me the most was the ending and the extras. The ending is really tear-jerking. Nie Lizheng searched for Xu Bai for ten years, and finally completed the death in the same hole in the north. The side story of Greedy Dreams is also very good, and the side story of Mo Wuyuan, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhahahahahahahahahaha, I really want to see their lives in this world. The author can write about it, and it can also be in the scarf. I really want to see it ooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Treasure author! This book is really good. I think I can refine it and try to publish it. If possible, there will be a radio drama, then comics, and then animation... I feel happy just thinking about it!

Now the author has only updated one world, but I think it is very beautiful (๑•.•๑) The protagonist Shaolin Xubai is really a gentle and strong person, not gentle in the traditional sense, but Shuang Ming who is careless but you can feel his gentleness. The author is also very active and will analyze the feelings between the protagonists in a deeper way in the comment area. The writing style is also very good. Personally, I think it's really worth seeing.

After watching the first world, I couldn't stop commenting—— The author's portrayal of emotions is profound and delicate, and I cried several times😭 Regarding Xu Bai's handling of Lin Zhou and Linzhou's feelings, it was a bit unexpected, but I like it very much! ! ! ! ! Because I originally read it with the mentality of reading a bloody novel, but I was moved by their feelings. At first I thought my brother was a dark male ghost who wanted to take things by force, but he turned out to be so innocent and cute, awsl Linzhou is actually a puppy, ahhhh! All three of them are on XP————!

It looks good, it looks good, can it be 1V2, I like both of them so much [Send my heart][Send my heart]

It's so beautiful [crying] [crying] [crying] Why are the characters written by the teacher so relatable! [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] I don't want to be [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry]

1. The author's writing style is very good, the plot is not procrastinating, there is a main line, logic and foreshadowing, and he has his own set of opinions on character creation. He relies more on the protagonist's personality charm to conquer readers. I give it 9.3 Points 2. The protagonist has morals and means. The first world was refreshing to me. Although I am more sympathetic to the younger brother Lin Zhou, I have to say that the part where the protagonist rejects his younger brother is very attractive to me. I have nothing to say about the personality charm. I give it a 9.5. 3. If there is anything to be added, the author will update it soon!

It's really beautiful. I just found this book yesterday and I'm more interested in the world of the second general. I read the first one. The story of Li Zheng and Xu Bai didn't have any close contact, but even if it was just half a bowl of porridge found at the banquet, it moved people for a long time. The author's writing style is really delicate, and Xu Bai's voice also makes people feel that he is a literati of that era. Finally, Xu Bai's masterpiece, Mentioning everyone, except himself, after reading the letter, Li Zheng also guessed the fact, but did not want to believe it. Even if there was news that Military Advisor Lin had passed away, he did not give up. He spent ten years traveling all over the south of the Yangtze River, but no trace of that person was found. Finally, he discovered that the person had stayed in the north that year. Why was the highest only five stars? It felt unworthy of their story┭┮┭┮

The whole article has been read. Author, I want to say that your writing style is not as intense as others (?) But has a softness that blends into the article like drizzle. Lin is not a perfect person, he has his arrogance and his fragility, but it is precisely because of his imperfections that he creates (?) A fuller and more three-dimensional person. It is precisely because of the imperfections that his gentleness and goodness are highlighted. But I still feel sorry for his sadness when he was young, and it's a pity that he was hurt by his family (?). But I'm glad that you persisted, Yu Lin, you are brave and tenacious... Beauty is just one of them in your destiny, not the only one; I'm glad that you didn't lose yourself on the road, you became a good person; I'm glad that fate didn't knock you down, you are still so tenacious. I hope you will be happier in the days to come, Lin.

，，3，，，！ From the arrogant and arrogant person at the beginning to the passionate love after falling in love with Xiao Baibai, he even broke his legs just to see his lover (although he is stupid, but love is not rational in nature😭) The love of a puppy can always be taken care of! Xiao Baibai's princess hug is also so cool [get it], and one thing I particularly like is that Lin Zhou finally reached 2 points of favorability. Because he was hugged by the wrong person, his younger brother experienced beatings, scolding, fear and self-doubt in his ten years of life. Until Lin Xubai appeared, he was like a drowned man encountering driftwood, so he must cherish it even more. It can be said that his love has always been cautious, and his experience has destined him not to be the kind of character who is fighting and grabbing. His brother's happiness is more important than his own, so after hearing his brother's personal answer, his favorability level became full, and the unspoken regrets dissipated, and the secret admirer saw his ending clearly. Then after Xiao Baibai escaped from death, through the perspectives of Jiang Linzhou and Lin Zhou, Xiao Baibai played the two roles of a good lover and a good brother. I kept crying. . . (The writing is not good, please forgive my slur.) You are really the author. I love it so much. I have never seen anything like this before.

Very nice! There are generally two types of books I pursue. One is without any emotional connection, and the other is the one where you gradually get to know love first and then desire... In the first world, the one that struck me the most was Lin Zhou. He has exactly the kind of youthful spirit with a little bit of inferiority and sensitivity, right? (In my opinion) If you dare to love, it will be said and fulfilled. Some emotions do not necessarily have to develop to a higher level. Well, anyway, I really like this year! Very delicious. In fact, the anchor prefers to eat New Year.

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In fact, I prefer that the protagonist be uniquely beautiful. I hope that the baby can decisively distinguish and solve emotional problems. Ambiguity is okay but I hope there will be no CP. I really want the protagonist to be uniquely beautiful. I think the author's writing is really good.

I've finished watching the first world and extras. It's super delicious, the writing is also good, the emotions are delicate, Bai Bai's outlook on life is super upright, I like it 😍. The extra is super delicious, with long flowing water, very natural, and it makes up for the regret of the main text. The first world has the feeling of an almost ripe plum, with a hint of sourness and bitterness in the sweetness. It made me cry, laughing and crying at the same time. The extra stream of consciousness is so delicious😋. Cats and dogs should always be with their owners! After watching the second world, Xu Bai is really great, and the character creation is very successful. His belief in serving the world, his self-interest and altruistic character, I ate it like crazy, it's so delicious😋. The author's writing is better and improving all the time. The world is in trouble, I cried and cried, I was so sad😭, Nie was really miserable, his lover was gone, only relics were left😭, the relationship between Nie and Bai was really good, complicated and delicate. The supporting characters are also well described. Xiao Tao finally stays with the young master; Xiao Mo is actually quite miserable. As a time traveler, there are almost no people around him who he can truly trust. He should never have a sense of belonging and security. Fortunately, there is an extra story that can comfort my wounded heart. Xiao Mo finally returned "home", but it is a pity that there is still no Xu Bai's achievements in history.

This kind of writing style without fancy words makes people read it. Its core ideas and concepts are also very good, and it is not a cookie-cutter plot. It is also one of the rare articles that has no obvious shortcomings. From the beginning, the plot is very coherent, and there is no foreshadowing but no filling in. The overall review recommends reading it.

I just finished reading the first world. The author's writing is so good. I really think the writing is very good. I don't know why the rating is so low. In my mind, it could have been around nine. I want to know if the attacker in each world is the same person in the end, and is the finale like he? I was so tortured in the first world😣

I can't stand it anymore, I can't watch any cruelty, and I burst into tears in the second world, but the author's writing is great! ! ! Recommend! ! ! But I can't watch anymore [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

I'm a very picky reader of articles. I usually read a hundred chapters after collecting them. If I encounter something weird, I won't read it. This article is about the plot first, which is very connected and coherent. I really like Xu Bai's character of staying out of things and putting his tasks first. Do you understand? But I still have to say, I don't really like pornographic articles. Who knows, I read this article in the early hours of last night and cried so much that I couldn't sleep. I had to go to work the next day, but the more I read it, the more addicted it became. I accidentally tied... The world of Narcissus should be the beginning of Xu Bai opening up his heart to accept the attack. The author said that the fifth world will be sweeter. Even if he still escapes in the end, it should be at least a little easier to endure than the first three worlds. In the end... "Thank you Jingyan, goodbye" May you and Xu Bai never leave each other (The first few worlds either made me cry so hard in the middle of the night that I couldn't sleep, or made me cry while listening to books at work. Hehe, ps: My job in a state-owned enterprise is quite easy, so there is no delay in work. It's just because it would be embarrassing if my colleagues saw me crying in the office.)

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