Bring Magic to a Better World

The needle is not there, except for one point in the front where the transition is rather stiff, the rest are handled very well, such as the seamless connection between combat and daily life and the heroine's emotions, all are perfectly integrated. Although it cannot be said to be a masterpiece, the flow of the plot is very good. .... Be careful, I've written 100 chapters in one dungeon. I'm tired. From 110 to now, more than 206 chapters are all dungeons.

Don't know why the rating is a bit low. After looking at the first few pictures, I saw the heaviness of family and the comedy of campus. It can be seen that the world view is very complete, and the author's thoughts must be delicate. I think it's very good I originally thought it was well written, but there were too many battles and it was too long. It was like what Cao Cao said was tasteless, tasteless to eat, and a pity to discard. What's more, after all the chicken was eaten, I ate a large pot of chicken ribs without making a sound.

Well, the real world of magic and daily life on campus make up for my regret in watching the full-time mage in the later period. The author's writing style is very good, several times better than some urban daily writing. The content is quite interesting, the protagonist's battle scenes are really cool, and it feels like watching Mo Fan Poor author, there aren't even a few comments in the book. It's a tonic. I'll prescribe it for you.

The writing is okay. I jumped over the first 12 pounds and didn't write anything about it. I just wrote about him quarreling with his sister. Overall, the content is okay, but the pace is slow. I like to write some short stories about parents. It's less like a magic article and more like an article about the breath of life.

I originally thought it was too slow at the beginning of the first year of high school, and I didn't know how the author would write about the past three years. After reading it, I found it good, and I loved watching it. The characters have distinct personalities, and the emotional drama is also good. The introverted heroine is really like what I used to do. She is as introverted and can empathize with it. I have done many similar things, such as being hated by a friend and being scolded for paying money to a friend. Later, the relationship improved again and so on.

It's really beautiful. Among all magic-oriented novels, this novel is also among the best. The characters are portrayed very carefully, except that the blind wood demon in the middle is too long. There are almost no flaws. Come on,

The writing in the front is pretty good, the protagonist is quite unique, and the story is quite interesting. However, when playing with the blind wood, the story went too slow. I spent more than 20 chapters writing this, and also wrote about the aftermath. The entire copy already exceeds sixty or seventy chapters.

The characters are full-bodied, the emotions are delicate, and the writing is also very good. It can be seen that the author wants to write a group portrait, but it can only be completed when it can be written like this [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

Okay, overall it looks good. I love watching it. The copy of Blind Demon is too long, and Laoban is gone. He was written as a disabled person and became acceptable to ordinary people; the foreshadowing of his parents' whereabouts was too hasty, and the foreshadowing of the coincidence of the sun and moon ornaments can be looked at again.

It's so good. I only dared to comment after seeing the latest chapter, in which the protagonist spends a thousand miles with flowers and travels across the city at night. The author's many line drawings are very contagious. There are many small details that portray the characters very profoundly. I am very optimistic about the author. Please don't stop updating. I will also support you for my love [crying]

I personally like chaotic full-time mages, so this kind of magical power system is very attractive to me. The current plot is quite interesting. The first few chapters are a bit delayed, but it is necessary to solve the internal problems. Come on, author, I hope there will be a wonderful ending.

The current fantasy light novel is more of a daily routine, but it's a pity that the title ruins it. Those who like Riqing may not click in. Those who like fighting and having fun click in and feel that it is selling dog meat with a sheep's head. But the plot is relatively smooth, and there are a few small bugs that don't hurt. A light novel about daily life and magic practice. It has been on my recommendation list for a week or two, and I just clicked on it today. The author can change the title of the book when the time comes for book testing. The title of the book does not attract readers. The content is quite good, suitable for old 2D readers, haha.

As for the radio wave, in the early stage, it looks like a comfortable daily series, with a reasonable and smooth feel, and the emotional experience with the best friend sister is also very good. Later, it has an urban and cool literary feel, and the combat power is a bit broken. Afterwards, it relies entirely on the mechanical deity of the male protagonist. However, the flaws are not concealed, and the description of the male protagonist is also good. Overall, it is a film with clear advantages and disadvantages, a slow-paced drama about The Devil's School that is light on daily life, and has been well received.

It's a very good novel. I finished reading it in one go with more than 600 chapters. The characters are rich in emotions and the storyline can't be faulted. The only bad thing is that the pace is a bit slow. I'm still in the middle realm after more than 600 chapters and haven't learned the magic of the middle realm. The key point is that I'm still in high school and haven't taken the college entrance examination after more than 600 chapters.

The early stage was fine! The plot is somewhat familiar! [Cover face]

A pretty good description of daily drama! In this aspect, it is much better than the sometimes confusing and refreshing feeling of a full-time mage, but it is also obvious that the author likes to foreshadow and is somewhat unable to control the description of the fight. If the author could improve the outline and change the name during the book test, I believe he would get pretty good results.

En . . . . How should I put it? Some of the small plots are very densely written, and the big plots are written a bit quickly. The battle plots are very detailed, and the characters are very delicate. It is recommended to read a hundred chapters first and then read it. It will be more enjoyable. Give it a five-star rating first and then read it. Read one big chapter at a time, otherwise the fragmentation will be serious

Please support me. This sister is not said to be unruly and willful. I feel like she is the same brother and sister as Lu Shu and Lu Xiaoyu in "My King, My Majesty." The campus plot is in the style of a light novel, which is not bad. However, as other comments said, the early plot is somewhat inconsistent with the title. As a result, if you want to watch the battle and have fun, you will feel that it is not good to watch the campus daily life and "sister".

Author, it's so good. Don't give up. There are still two hundred chapters left. I'm afraid I'll finish it by accident. I like this kind of slow-paced, stable realm and big world view. You must let us see the battle after high-level.

Current progress of learning Kunlun potential The first 150 chapters or so are really quite satisfying, and have a very Japanese-like feel. To be precise, it is similar to the feeling of an extraordinary world but an ordinary life. But after opening the copy of Blind Demon, it feels like the author has torn away the mask of peace and revealed the tone of the world - death and blood. However, there is one thing to say, the copy of Blind Demon is too long, confusing to read, and bugs are here. After playing all night, how many times have you used skills, do you still have a blue bar? [Thinking] But it's a really good work. The main fighting department feels very draggy.

Let's see how much time I have. Generally speaking, it's pretty good. Putting aside the plot of the Blind Wood Demon (it's reversal after reversal, it's too long-lasting. I guess many people just skip it. My suggestion is to skip it, otherwise it will be easy to persuade them to quit). There is another flaw. The protagonist's soul must have gone through college. His emotional dependence on Yun should have been there for a long time. In the Shura field between Yun and his sister, Jiang Lin did not do anything at the beginning and allowed it to develop. Aside from these, the plot content and other descriptions are still good. First long review.

I have been reading books on various platforms for a long time. There are really not many books about magic that I can read. This one is considered OK. However, the previous dungeon had more than a hundred chapters of fighting and reversal. Too many consecutive reversals made it not so attractive, and it was a bit delayed. But overall there is still room for improvement, and the rating is a bit low here🤭 How can you attract people with less than 10,000 words updated every day🫠🫠🫠There are just too few talented people who have given up on books, and the popularity has not increased. If the blind wood is shortened, maybe there will be fewer people who give up [exploration]

The writing is quite good. Those who like to watch full-time mage can check it out. It is the same type of stand-in. The author has made obvious progress and the rhythm is very good in the later part of the writing. The plot of the campus being invaded in the middle is a bit long and has too many twists and turns.

The description of the male protagonist's campus life before the disaster is quite comfortable. It does have the feeling of being among a group of children after rebirth. I don't think many novels about rebirth say that women affect the speed of drawing a sword, and then as long as there are women, there will be all kinds of ambiguity. . . As for the magic plot, everyone has their own preference. It's worth looking forward to. This book has a low Tomato score. It must be because of the climate. After all, it is not the kind of pure and refreshing novel with all kinds of handsome male protagonists and female protagonists.

Fortunately, I read the book first and then the comments, so I didn't get caught out. This book suits my taste very well, please go to the author [OK]

I originally wanted to read it and have been following it, but I didn't want to read the recent update just by looking at the title. I suggest the author make the title richer.

There are some neurotic novels that can be adapted to the airwaves, and by the way, I hope there will be more female protagonists (but I don't mind having multiple female protagonists if I can stay single until the end.) The novels in the category of full-time mage are a little less updated, and the relationships with friends, family, and classmates are all handled well. To be honest, the emotional description is really good, and it's very refreshing. Please write more about the author.

The content, plot and characters are quite delicate, and the dialogues are also very witty and humorous. It is quite interesting after getting familiar with the brain circuit. The sister is also very cute. However, when I look at the back, I feel that the protagonist's personality conflicts with the previous one, although the previous one depicts the protagonist's hot exterior and cold interior. Personality, but there are not many portrayals of indifference. Most of them are humorous with my younger sister and classmates. The indifference in the conversation with the monitor at the class reunion was too obvious and it felt very abrupt. I always feel that the protagonist should be a witty and humorous social expert, not a cold, heartless and unsociable person. My main feeling is that Yun Ningjing's portrayal is not as long as that of her younger sister, so she should be considered a semi-heroine. Her character is that of a rich lady who is afraid of society but wants to make friends. When invited to participate in activities by the squad leader for the second time, she will not participate because of her fear of society. Most of them are only when the protagonist participates and has She showed less social fear by attending only when she was invited, and it was easy for people to associate the protagonist with Yun Ningjing. When the class monitor invited her to a class reunion, she said that the protagonist would refuse to attend if she didn't attend. Then the protagonist replied, "What does her non-participation have to do with the protagonist?" He also accused the squad leader and Yun Ningjing of not being familiar with each other. If they were familiar with each other, they wouldn't need to accompany the protagonist? I really don't understand

This is the first time I have seen such a good-looking novel on Tomato. It integrates life and emotion so well and is not obtrusive at all. The plot is also very interesting. I can still read it after three months of reading. I hope the author will keep updating daily.

Okay, okay, it's very beautiful, brothers, the author is really good at the emotion aspect.