[Absolutely refreshing article, the loneliness caused by it, what will give five stars is...]
[Traveling through the heritage stream at the same time. Currently it's Curse, Pirates, Naruto...]
Traveling to the world of Spell Return, you are born with a total amount of Spell Power comparable to that of Two-faced Su Nuo!
Become the strongest ten shadow warlock in history!
But the era is actually the Kamakura period equivalent to the Southern Song Dynasty? !
I am super powerful, you can dress me well through time!
Unwilling to wait, Zen Yuan Shun and Kang Suo set a bond for future resurrection.
As a result, Golden Finger accidentally awakened after his death.
You can inherit the inheritance after your death in different worlds! ?
And the first world is the dying beggar from One Piece?
So when you own it,
The strongest spirit of an era + the Ten Shadow Techniques brought + decades of combat experience + God's perspective + identity as a time traveler + doubled total amount of spell power + golden finger!
Awaken the overlord color and domineering energy directly at the beginning!
[Listen to advice, try not to be brainless, quick to wear, cool writing, harem, abstract]
(This is my first time writing a book, so please bear with me.)
(Among a large number of curse stories, I found a small number of novels)
Reader comments
It's a very good book. It seems that the logic is smooth and the plot is reasonable, but it's a bit lacking.
Another: (Some small suggestions for the author, because I saw it on the recommendation list, which proves that Tomato has started to provide traffic, and then all kinds of readers will come)
1. Regarding the issue of the protagonist's body, some people will definitely think that this is a self-inflicted problem. The author can think of some explanations. For example, this book is based on the soul, and the body is born from the soul (it may be too clear, but the author should mean this now). Be prepared for the body to be unified later (or it is the same body).
2. Regarding the issue of the heroine, whether it can be taken with her through the world is definitely the key point (I support that it can be traveled), and taking all the heroines will definitely seem crowded (my suggestion is some, two or three in one world, up to five). This is a choice made by the author, and it will definitely offend some readers.
3. Regarding the issue of the protagonist's combat power (I don't think there is actually a problem in this aspect), there will definitely be people who find fault, so just be mentally prepared.
4. Finally, there is the issue of updating. Who can I look down upon in just one day? Ten chapters! ! ! ! ! Ten chapters a day! ! ! ! ! (Add more rules for my friends)
All in all, thank you to the author. This is a very good book on Tomato. The introduction could be slightly changed.
Come on, it's just that some scenes and cool points don't need to be too exaggerated. 100 Susanas is too exaggerated. Personally, I feel that what is lacking is not the coolness of strength and big scenes, but the protagonist's own character, which does not need to be highlighted by exaggerated performance. Specifically, it can be small details of language and actions, unintentionally, from the inside out
The logic is smooth and can withstand scrutiny. It's a cool article and there's nothing wrong with it. It just takes away from the reader's own anime knowledge. It might be a little difficult for those who haven't seen much of One Piece, but since they've all read the fanfic, they should all understand it.
Moxuluo is slow to adapt.
In fact, it's pretty good, but the imagination isn't big enough, and don't be too licky. I'm very licky at the beginning, but not so good at the end. But this author is very obedient, and other aspects of the writing are pretty good😄 I hope he can give a punch to the world of Superman
Author, I have a suggestion here. Aren't you worried that the protagonist's strength is too high? I have an idea here. Don't you want Gojo Satoru to become stronger? Think about it, there is no lower limit to being a warlock. What if a reversal spell is injected into the spell reversal! What will the effect be? Appreciate it yourself, and be honest later. If it exceeds the standard, you can arrange for the protagonist to take a punch or Dragon Ball.
When Shun stood up and stretched his shoulders, Uta saw the 2.81 Meter back drawing a long shadow in the morning light.
She was almost two heads shorter than him, standing next to him like a flower leaning against a big tree.
Are you confused? 😄
Very interesting, but the update is too slow [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]
Author, you should learn more from other authors
Why should I get four chapters in one day? [Angry][angry][angry]
Not enough to watch [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]
The administrator came to give me a rating. It's hard to think that I'm an administrator without even paying attention to the author or giving a review for the book [face covering]
Make up for it today
Time August 18 01:54:14
The writing is very good, with good control over details and intensity. The protagonist is strong and not weak. Although there is a period of growth, he was already very strong before he grew up. The length can be controlled and it won't be too long, but the author also needs to think about it and don't finish it too quickly. I hope to read four to five hundred chapters. [Adoration][Blowing kiss]
This is the first time I've seen this type of film. When I entered it, I thought I would continue writing the curse chapter, but I didn't expect to go directly to other worlds first. I'm a bit too imaginative. I think you, young man, have a great future.
The main problem is that the update is too slow. When you update the first update, there will be people who find faults. When you update the second update, there will be people who find faults. In the third update, you will not give low scores unless it is a poisonous point. In the fourth update and the fifth update, there will basically be no negative reviews unless it is a big poisonous point.
The plot is very smooth, and there is nothing that feels stuck. Currently, Juan Suo and Hong Yanxing are very consistent with the characters. Regarding the protagonist's ability setting, I read the explanation again and it seems to be quite logical. There are no problems so far.
Love it. I want to see a lot of fighting! I hope that the male protagonist's combat power will be stronger. Although Quartz's combat power is different from that over there, Mo Xuluo is very adaptable and can adapt to the lack of forward movement. If there is no CP, there is a female protagonist who feels that it is not suitable, so don't write emotional dramas.
You can watch it. Although I have only watched One Piece and know a little about Naruto, I feel that the writing is still good. (In terms of combat power, I feel that it is a bit broken, but the combat power of different worlds is incomparable. It's fun to watch)
Speaking of the Ninja World Arc, will Kaguya be resurrected? It's impossible for Otsutsuki to beat the protagonist with the ability of three worlds, right? What can be absorbed is just chakra, not domineering or magical power.
The rating is really low! If the character feels extremely frustrated while reading the book, why? This book is absolutely enjoyable to read, and the story is seamless and organized. I recommend it to everyone who likes to read variety comics. Author, don't stop updating, come on!
The plot is very smooth and exciting, faster and faster.
(Comment on these first, wait for me to read it a few more times before expanding on it ദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧)
It's very interesting, the content is interesting and interesting, so far it's very good, I hope the author can keep it up
Good luck to the author!
I really dug up the fairy grass. It's unexpectedly beautiful and easy to read. It doesn't drag out the ink. The pace is okay at the moment. I hope it can continue.
Not bad, not bad. I won't say more. Anyway, it's good. How good it is depends on your personal opinion. I think it's good, so the comments are good. If I think it's good and you don't think it's good, then it's better not to say it's good. So why is there so many words in the water? The needle doesn't poke.
The setting of traveling from the world of Spells to Pirates is very creative, and it was fun to play directly with Shanks afterwards. However, I feel that the pace is a bit slow for those who have never seen Spells. Overall, it is pretty good.
I am King Akaishi, and I declare that this is not a stone. Generally speaking, it is okay. If you like watching explosive killings, you can give it a try. There is no magic plot [Thoughts]
Absolutely cool article that comes from this and teaches you about elbow strikes.
If you like it, I'll give you one
Good-looking, love to read, watch more\(//∇//)\
That's quite a lot of energy.
Come on, the author speaks his teeth
Ok ok ok
It feels okay without a lot of psychological descriptions
It's a very good book. It seems that the logic is smooth and the plot is reasonable, but it's a bit lacking. Another: (Some small suggestions for the author, because I saw it on the recommendation list, which proves that Tomato has started to provide traffic, and then all kinds of readers will come) 1. Regarding the issue of the protagonist's body, some people will definitely think that this is a self-inflicted problem. The author can think of some explanations. For example, this book is based on the soul, and the body is born from the soul (it may be too clear, but the author should mean this now). Be prepared for the body to be unified later (or it is the same body). 2. Regarding the issue of the heroine, whether it can be taken with her through the world is definitely the key point (I support that it can be traveled), and taking all the heroines will definitely seem crowded (my suggestion is some, two or three in one world, up to five). This is a choice made by the author, and it will definitely offend some readers. 3. Regarding the issue of the protagonist's combat power (I don't think there is actually a problem in this aspect), there will definitely be people who find fault, so just be mentally prepared. 4. Finally, there is the issue of updating. Who can I look down upon in just one day? Ten chapters! ! ! ! ! Ten chapters a day! ! ! ! ! (Add more rules for my friends) All in all, thank you to the author. This is a very good book on Tomato. The introduction could be slightly changed.
Come on, it's just that some scenes and cool points don't need to be too exaggerated. 100 Susanas is too exaggerated. Personally, I feel that what is lacking is not the coolness of strength and big scenes, but the protagonist's own character, which does not need to be highlighted by exaggerated performance. Specifically, it can be small details of language and actions, unintentionally, from the inside out
The logic is smooth and can withstand scrutiny. It's a cool article and there's nothing wrong with it. It just takes away from the reader's own anime knowledge. It might be a little difficult for those who haven't seen much of One Piece, but since they've all read the fanfic, they should all understand it.
Moxuluo is slow to adapt.
In fact, it's pretty good, but the imagination isn't big enough, and don't be too licky. I'm very licky at the beginning, but not so good at the end. But this author is very obedient, and other aspects of the writing are pretty good😄 I hope he can give a punch to the world of Superman Author, I have a suggestion here. Aren't you worried that the protagonist's strength is too high? I have an idea here. Don't you want Gojo Satoru to become stronger? Think about it, there is no lower limit to being a warlock. What if a reversal spell is injected into the spell reversal! What will the effect be? Appreciate it yourself, and be honest later. If it exceeds the standard, you can arrange for the protagonist to take a punch or Dragon Ball.
When Shun stood up and stretched his shoulders, Uta saw the 2.81 Meter back drawing a long shadow in the morning light. She was almost two heads shorter than him, standing next to him like a flower leaning against a big tree. Are you confused? 😄
Very interesting, but the update is too slow [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] Author, you should learn more from other authors Why should I get four chapters in one day? [Angry][angry][angry] Not enough to watch [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]
The administrator came to give me a rating. It's hard to think that I'm an administrator without even paying attention to the author or giving a review for the book [face covering] Make up for it today Time August 18 01:54:14
The writing is very good, with good control over details and intensity. The protagonist is strong and not weak. Although there is a period of growth, he was already very strong before he grew up. The length can be controlled and it won't be too long, but the author also needs to think about it and don't finish it too quickly. I hope to read four to five hundred chapters. [Adoration][Blowing kiss]
This is the first time I've seen this type of film. When I entered it, I thought I would continue writing the curse chapter, but I didn't expect to go directly to other worlds first. I'm a bit too imaginative. I think you, young man, have a great future.
The main problem is that the update is too slow. When you update the first update, there will be people who find faults. When you update the second update, there will be people who find faults. In the third update, you will not give low scores unless it is a poisonous point. In the fourth update and the fifth update, there will basically be no negative reviews unless it is a big poisonous point.
The plot is very smooth, and there is nothing that feels stuck. Currently, Juan Suo and Hong Yanxing are very consistent with the characters. Regarding the protagonist's ability setting, I read the explanation again and it seems to be quite logical. There are no problems so far.
Love it. I want to see a lot of fighting! I hope that the male protagonist's combat power will be stronger. Although Quartz's combat power is different from that over there, Mo Xuluo is very adaptable and can adapt to the lack of forward movement. If there is no CP, there is a female protagonist who feels that it is not suitable, so don't write emotional dramas.
You can watch it. Although I have only watched One Piece and know a little about Naruto, I feel that the writing is still good. (In terms of combat power, I feel that it is a bit broken, but the combat power of different worlds is incomparable. It's fun to watch)
Speaking of the Ninja World Arc, will Kaguya be resurrected? It's impossible for Otsutsuki to beat the protagonist with the ability of three worlds, right? What can be absorbed is just chakra, not domineering or magical power.
The rating is really low! If the character feels extremely frustrated while reading the book, why? This book is absolutely enjoyable to read, and the story is seamless and organized. I recommend it to everyone who likes to read variety comics. Author, don't stop updating, come on!
The plot is very smooth and exciting, faster and faster. (Comment on these first, wait for me to read it a few more times before expanding on it ദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧)
It's very interesting, the content is interesting and interesting, so far it's very good, I hope the author can keep it up
Good luck to the author!
I really dug up the fairy grass. It's unexpectedly beautiful and easy to read. It doesn't drag out the ink. The pace is okay at the moment. I hope it can continue.
Not bad, not bad. I won't say more. Anyway, it's good. How good it is depends on your personal opinion. I think it's good, so the comments are good. If I think it's good and you don't think it's good, then it's better not to say it's good. So why is there so many words in the water? The needle doesn't poke.
The setting of traveling from the world of Spells to Pirates is very creative, and it was fun to play directly with Shanks afterwards. However, I feel that the pace is a bit slow for those who have never seen Spells. Overall, it is pretty good.
I am King Akaishi, and I declare that this is not a stone. Generally speaking, it is okay. If you like watching explosive killings, you can give it a try. There is no magic plot [Thoughts]
Absolutely cool article that comes from this and teaches you about elbow strikes.
If you like it, I'll give you one
Good-looking, love to read, watch more\(//∇//)\
That's quite a lot of energy.
Come on, the author speaks his teeth
Ok ok ok
It feels okay without a lot of psychological descriptions