Through the Book, I Became the Treasure in the Palm of the Dark and Crazy Critics

The writing of this book is smooth and not bad, but the author portrays the court too casually. In the middle, it is read that an ordinary woman can casually enter the court to see the emperor. This is a bit illogical. The emperor does not act like an emperor, like an ordinary county magistrate. But the heroine is well written and her character is well written.

The book is very good and the writing is good, but it feels like it has nothing to do with the copywriting. It feels more like the days when I traveled back in time to solve crimes in ancient times. Although it is not the kind of heroine who needs help from others for everything. The heroine is not familiar with it and I feel that there is no problem with the writing. Those men, how should I say, the performance does not match their identity. Everyone is at a disadvantage, and it feels like a huge fog. This emperor, huh, when I was chatting with the heroine, I felt that he was the kind of treacherous old fox who digs holes for others. As a result, he got angry when he was doing business and had no real appearance. I also felt that the punishment was a bit too small. Of course, I don't know much about it, but I just felt that it was not as hard as the heroine. In fact, I still hope that the heroine can grow up after this time. Now I feel that if I am separated from these men, the heroine will be played to death. She is not on the same level at all. The growth stream should also grow up at this time. We can't always rely on others. Originally, the original intention of the heroine was to support her cousin. Now the emperor is tolerant to the heroine and maybe her cousin is the reason. This is completely opposite. I hope that the heroine is independent and strong, and excludes the reasons for the author's good writing style and good subject matter. In fact, the plot The development direction is very familiar and classic. Old bookworms should be able to tell. I feel that the author also wants to do something in-depth. However, after reading the comment area, some people actually pointed out that it was a bit too much. Some people could not understand it and even felt frustrated by it, but this is indeed a sign of growth. The shortcomings are slipping, I hope the author works harder. In fact, I also want to read something shallower. PS: Bring the copywriting and plot quickly. Give me some food to eat. The child is going to starve to death. He has written about this kind of subject. Give him some food to eat. I want to see blood flowing like a river!

I've finished reading it, and it's very interesting. The writing is very good, but the emotional line is a bit too slow, and the rhythm of the plot is also a bit slow. The rhythm of the plot is a bit slow, and the emotional line is slow, which makes it a bit boring after watching it for a long time. If the emotional line can be faster and have ups and downs, it will be more emotional, or the plot rhythm will be faster. Then there are plot problems, but the author's homepage shows that he has written some books, and they are improving. It's great. It's great that you can persist for so long! Come on! ! !

My God, does Xianpin know? I looked at it excitedly and found out that it was an author I had read before [almost crying] [like]

It's really good to watch. I will keep following it. It's my favorite plot about a woman disguised as a man. The male characters currently appearing are all very good, and the female protagonist is also awesome. Please update more!

If it's not so beautiful, how could the rating be so low? I strongly recommend it, the plot is very interesting and the author is very interesting. Great author, I really think this book is very interesting, I must keep writing it [crying][crying] I think these characters are all very three-dimensional, and the emotional lines are much more reasonable than other novels of the same type. I really like it, I really like it, the author, cheers! !

The writing is really good!

Super super super beautiful

It's good-looking and beautiful [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration] Come on, author [laughing]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I think I like it very much

Come on, author! Sit back and wait for the meal

Well written, my mind is spinning!

It looks good. Can I have several male protagonists? I don't want to make a choice.

Is this heroine a boy or a girl? Sometimes I use the word he next to the single person, and sometimes I use the word she next to the female character.

I like the heroine very much, and the author's writing is also very good, but there are a lot of things in the plot that cannot be discussed. I can lose my mind for the heroine [currently working on the manuscript]

It's really good, but it's only a few dozen chapters, so sad [crying]

It's so good that I caught up to 4 o'clock last night. There are few novels that can keep me reading all night [Love][Love]

What a super nice book

It's very beautiful. The heroine's character is designed very well.

The logic is clear and the plot is compact. I'm a local dog, I like to watch

It's very good-looking, but there are a little bit of logic problems and some minor problems, but it's really good-looking. Thank you to the author. Come on, come on.

It's very interesting. I hope this book will be a hit.

The plot is reasonable, the heroine is also very good, and it's pretty good to watch. Super, super good-looking, the heroine is very charming