Yandere? Shura Field? It Broke My Waist!

It's a very good harem story, but I don't know why so many words are given to the little fat boy. It's really a classic fat boy brother.

The person I am most sorry for in this life is my brother! Follow me for 22 years! There is a previous meal but no next meal! What poor sister! Can you take care of my brother? Don't worry too much! Just simple verbal education [laughing]

It looks good, and there is nothing toxic about it so far. Both parents are strong, the family is harmonious and there is no internal strife, and they are tolerant and considerate, which is very comfortable to watch. The protagonist's development is too slow, and his soul is rejected by the world. He has to wait until he enters the new academy to solve the problem. (It should be because of Shen He, so it is directly counted as an adult) The current pace is fast and the daily life of childhood is skipped directly. The plot does not seem that full. I hope that the fiancée can be inserted into the story later to recall the daily life so that the character creation can be three-dimensional. I still like the protagonist to be stronger, but it's a pity that the protagonist has no strength. With the help of my mother, I was defeated by the succubus. As a Great Sword Immortal in his previous life, he should have cultivated his skills, spiritual consciousness, and physical fitness in the future. The protagonist is also poor. I don't know when the sword was forged and what the quality levels of the sword are. There are a lot of levels that have not been divided yet. (Will there be a weapon spirit?) The protagonist will develop soon [sending heart]

I have read a lot, and I feel that the author wants to combine the emotional line with the growth of the protagonist (the protagonist is similar to the rebirth of the Immortal Emperor)

In fact, the author's description of details is really good, it is already above the average level of Tomatoes, but, other aspects are... In short, it is just sweet in one word [face covering] And I don't think the protagonist's background has anything to do with it or not. The identity of the sword fairy is just like a decoration, but I like to read sweet articles, it's delicious😋

It looks good, it looks good, the writing is not jerky, and the background is novel

Very nice novel. Good luck to the author [laughs]

It's very beautiful, Lao Mao. I support it very much, but I feel that the ending is a bit rushed. At the beginning, although the writing is very rich, there is a sense of distance, but it is still very interesting. So, are you also an Avinulin Huangmao physical education student? Prison cat[punch out][punch out][punch out]

The writing is pretty good🤔 but there is no push. There are some poisonous points, but they are common poisonous points of male porn (the kind caused by harem). The plot and character creation are quite good, and it has been completed. It is considered to be relatively good on Tomato. The plot can keep it from being boring at the end, which is more than 90% of books.

It's awesome, the writing is a bit tender but it doesn't have much impact. The plot is really interesting.

Beautiful, no need to say much, very delicately written

This is my first book, give me five stars to support it [Chigua]

This Western fantasy novel is well written, with detailed descriptions of the characters, which can well reflect the characters' psychology and personality. The rhythm in the front is relatively slow, but when I see the time in the back 2000 years ago, I can't hold my mouth shut at all.

Looks good and suits my taste

Okay, okay, the emotions are very delicate

I may be the only one who gave up because of my height. The male protagonist's family has such good conditions. He has been able to eat and drink since he was a child. His parents are very popular, and he is only 170. I saw the author said that he will grow taller in the future, but in the end he is still not as tall as the maid.

This author is one of the few books that can be read in 🍅

It's good to read. I like the author. The future will get better and better. It's best to update 3 times a day.

It's exactly what I should watch at my age, and it deserves a much better and infinite recommendation.

It's a rare Western fantasy to be seen, a good book, above the standard [Like][Like][Like]

[Full] After reading about half of it, I feel that the portrayal of each female protagonist is a bit thin. There is not much foreshadowing, and my feelings for the male protagonist tend to be yandere. I will see if I can add more later. The world view of cultivating immortals and magic is still interesting. The author also said that it is not unfinished. Please support it.

The writing is good😋, the description is very good, it's what I want to read

Good-looking, good-looking, more

I don't know. The author asked for a book review and I gave it [laughing evilly]

Five stars are given, and the author can safely code the words [love][love][love]

Come on, author, God rewards those who work hard (appreciation for hard work)

It's a very interesting book. Why doesn't anyone read it? I hope there won't be any eunuchs.

It looks great, I look forward to the author's next great content QAQ

It's great. The education and training are the best. Come on, I'm the big brother who writes about the emperor's uncle.

It's beautiful, everything you want to see is there [laughs evilly]