Mingke*******

A good book, with delicate emotions, overwhelming sweetness, warm daily life, and the writing is very comfortable to read. These are all advantages. It is a new book with great potential, and it is also the best new book I have read so far. Of course, the above only represents my own opinion. Then there are some possible minor problems, that is, the love line is a bit fast, uh... This may be considered an advantage? But what I want to say is that the emotional change between Haihara Ai and the protagonist should be a bit abrupt, and the problem is probably due to the lack of foreshadowing. There is also the problem of handling the relationship with the senior sister. This seems to be quite difficult to deal with, depending on how the author writes it. In short, I hope the author can finish it. From my point of view, the score should not be bad, it just depends on whether the tomato is given. Good luck to the author on his debut.

Good friends are like stars. You may not always see them, but you know that as soon as you look up, they will always be there watching you from a distance. . . . . . . What's the use?

It's really sweet, really, it's sweet to my heart. Also, I hope the author can update it quickly. I stopped playing Genshin Impact because the plot is too slow. I hope I can update it ten times a day. Please! !

It's a sweet little article, not bad, not a mindless article, suitable for relaxing reading

Don't stop looking forward to it

It's pretty good. There's nothing sweet to say. It's not bad. The plot also has its own intention, But I personally prefer the kind with moderate sweetness, five points sweet. Is it because I'm not sweet enough? There is a gap of more than ten times [crying] No, I have to read some sweet articles to heal my young mind.

I haven't read much of it so far. At first I thought it was just as cliche as other Conan fan fiction, but after studying it I found it to be inexplicably interesting! Give a five-star support! Come on! ! ! Five brushes [laughing]

I haven't seen the latest chapter yet, but I'm curious how senior sister will deal with it?

Hmm... I think I have a bit of a yandere tendency, like (it can only belong to me alone [face covering])

It's a five-star review! Very good!

His book must receive five-star reviews, right?

Although I've only read a dozen chapters, it's really good!

I am a loser and I love watching👀 Sure enough, it's still blocked? That's very bad.

Although I only watched a little bit, I still thought it was good. Author, please come on^ω^

Not bad, not bad. It suits my taste. If it doesn't get too boring at the end, I can keep reading. I hope this author won't bore me to the point of reading.

Tell me, don't say it's very well written.

Well, this book is pretty good

Author, hurry up and write, it's so beautiful

The number of words in each article is so good that it looks good

I saw it, it's really ok

Very good, quite sweet

I like the daily life written by the author [Sending Hearts]

Good-looking, really good-looking

Good looking Really pretty

Very satisfied, great

Come on, author! Come on!

Not bad, very creative

Just came to my senses, one in about 30 minutes

The author must finish writing [blowing kiss], fire tongs Liu Ming

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.