The introduction is really difficult to write. The protagonist Qing Yuan was born in the mortal world and has a humble status. He longs for immortality in his heart. He started to move forward gradually from martial arts. He may have lost a lot on the way, but he finally achieved the great path. However, in the face of the final choice, he failed to take that step. Instead, he looked back on the past and looked at this life. He only said: "The long road in the world of mortals is not as good as a drunken confidant."
The road is broken and transformed into heaven and earth.
Reader comments
It's not bad, but there are a few minor issues. The narration is very fast, and the writing style needs to be improved. The enemies written earlier were too fast.
It's not bad, but there are a few minor issues. The narration is very fast, and the writing style needs to be improved. The enemies written earlier were too fast.