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Okay, support the new author, that's great. Many of the opinions are quite pertinent and neutral, not one-sided. Off-topic: I finally saw a book where the male protagonist becomes Sasuke's brother to prevent the discovery of the original plot. There is a description of family ties. The protagonist of this book has a very cute character and a pretentious system. Hahaha, he will force the king brother in the future hahaha. Sasuke's writing is also very cute! There really is no meal replacement! Nowadays, the female channel of Naruto is all about falling in love, with a lot of stories, and the male channel has a lot of invincible and cool harem stories. I'm all watching. The style of this article is quite neutral, and the daily descriptions have a bit of a female channel flavor. I feel like the protagonist is going to become a "succubus". There will definitely be a lot of younger brothers in the future. From the beginning, I started pretending to be a male channel invincible hahahahaha. It's so fun to watch~

Very well written! ! Lots of updates, no heroine! ! Handsome alone! (If you can have some masculine flavor, don't force it, just see how it is written. It would be great if there is no female protagonist) [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

It's okay, but the author can't use a female protagonist. I like the protagonist to be strong alone, or to have a female protagonist but not have a strong sense of presence. I don't want to patronize and talk about love.

There are no embarrassing plots and no water characters, and the writing is comfortable to read. Although the male protagonist is not as tsundere as Uchiha should be, the gentle Uchiha is also very good, just like Shisui and Itachi. I hope there will be no female protagonist or that the original cp will not be removed. It may be because the original work has too many regrets. I hope there will be less regrets. There are very few pure bad guys in the entire ninja world, so I hope the author can give most people in the original work a perfect ending. Although The original work can be considered a happy ending, but Neji's death, Jiraiya's death and Naruto's, Sasuke's childhood are really heartbreaking. I prefer everyone to be harmonious and beautiful. I really don't want Neci to die. Why is the scapegoat's son also a scapegoat? He has obviously worked hard since he was a child but still can't escape the control of the caged bird of the clan and the fate of death as a ninja. But if the author has a big outline, forget it [cry][cry][cry]

It's very interesting, mainly because I can't find that kind of character in Naruto books now, for example, Kakashi. CP and Orochimaru CP, etc. Then I went to read this kind of book, and then I found that this kind of book is more interesting than others. Well, I think it is a bit interesting.

It would be nice if the heroine doesn't have to be Hinata. The author could consider Ino, who is also the clan leader's daughter.

Very good. It usually picks up gradually in the early and late stages. I would like to suggest that you don't waste time writing too many supporting characters and advance the main plot. Come on.

Simply the best article I have ever read

Super pretty

It's very interesting to write, keep it up!