Writer Dazai Was Just Passing Through

Personally, I think the writing style is very good, but the overall writing style is very depressing, killing the center. Since I personally prefer a more cheerful writing style, my personal evaluation is Four stars, but the chef and the new guy bring extra points to me, so it's Five stars. Editor 2: It's finished, it seems like we've fallen into a deep pit 😢 Editor 1: I wanted to leave a comment halfway through, but it always felt out of place with the atmosphere. Congratulations, after all, there is motivation only with feedback. I still want to read the following.

It's super, super, super good-looking˶╹ꇴ╹˶well written! Oh, my love for you is beyond words (♡⌂♡)

I think the author wrote it very well

Gin and Dazai? Playing in the cultivation system? It doesn't look like it, but this kind of start looks pretty good.