What Kind of World Is This?

Please can you guys point out the shortcomings, I always feel like something is missing [crying][crying][crying] [Division of realms: There are five realms in total: the mortal realm, the earthly realm, the heavenly realm, the Daluo realm, and the saint realm (may be added later)] [The mortal realm includes: Qi refining stage, foundation building stage, golden elixir stage, Nascent Soul stage, and divine transformation stage] [The Earthly Immortal Realm includes: the Void Refining Stage, the Harmony Stage, the Mahayana Stage, and the Tribulation Stage] [Heavenly Immortal Realm includes: Earthly Immortal, Heavenly Immortal, True Immortal, Mysterious Immortal, and Golden Immortal] [The Daluo realm includes: Taiyi Golden Immortal, Daluo Golden Immortal, and Hunyuan Golden Immortal (quasi-sage)] [The realm of saints includes: Hunyuan Da Luo Jinxian, Hunyuan Wuji Luo Jinxian, and detachment] [1. Mortal Immortal Realm (introducing Qi to condense the foundation, transforming a baby into a god, the body is extraordinary, the destiny is the same as heaven and earth, crushing the common customs, and then touching the true meaning of the immortal way) 1. Qi training Introducing Qi into the body, the physical body is extraordinary, and one punch can destroy thousands of troops, and ordinary weapons cannot damage it. 2. Foundation building The true energy is condensed into liquid, and it can walk through the air. A sword can cut rivers, and the power of a palm can split mountains. 3. Golden elixir When the golden elixir reaches enlightenment, all laws are invulnerable. A single thought can burn down a city and destroy a country, overwhelming the world in the mortal world. 4. Nascent Soul The soul transforms into an infant and is reborn with a drop of blood. If the soul is immortal, the physical body will not die, and the mind can travel thousands of miles and be invincible. 5. Become a god The soul merges with the sky, moves the stars and takes the moon, can tear apart the void, and grasps the mighty power of heaven and earth for the first time. 2. Earthly Fairyland (control the spiritual veins of mountains and rivers, control the earth's laws, travel thousands of miles in the sky, control a territory, and be the master of the earth) 1. Refining the void The body melts into the void, travels through all realms, a thought reaches billions of miles, and the hand can pick up stars and shatter the moon. 2. Combination Humans and laws are unified, the laws are beginning to appear, and a single finger can destroy a whole world. 3. Mahayana The Tao body is perfect, and it can overwhelm all the heavens. It can fight a world of heaven alone, and all races will bow to it. 4. Overcoming the tribulation He resisted the Nine Heavens Divine Thunder, devoured the power of thunder and calamity, and suppressed the sky with his physical body. 3. Heavenly Immortal Realm (the body merges with the sky, the Dharma reaches the sky, draws the power of the stars, and creates a body that is invulnerable to all laws, ranking highest in the Immortal Class) 1. Earth Immortal The Dao foundation is stable and will not fall into reincarnation. It can seal the star field and dominate the world. 2. Immortal Soaring into the heavens, the magic power is revealed, the stars collapse and the galaxy is extinguished at the flick of a finger. 3. True Immortal The fruit of the Tao is eternal, unbreakable through all tribulations, overwhelming powerful enemies in all realms, and unstoppable. 4. Xuanxian Holding the power of law, you can tamper with the rules and reorder the world. 5. Golden Immortal The law is perfect and all laws are difficult to break. Under the great Luo, he is respected and invincible. 4. Daluo Realm (jumping out of the long river of time, not involved in the reincarnation of cause and effect, the past, present and future can be understood in one thought, and immortal) 1. Taiyi Golden Immortal Jumping out of the long river of fate, unaffected by cause and effect, unbound by time and space, one emperor for eternity. 2. Daluo Jinxian Time and space are immortal, and I am immortal. The past, present and future are all in one thought. 3. Hunyuan Golden Immortal (quasi-sage) Touching the origin of the great road, all realms will be destroyed in one rage, the highest under the saints. 5. Saint Realm (the Dao penetrates the chaos, the law controls the universe, creates the world, all the Dao bows its head, is irreversible, invincible, and immeasurable) 1. Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian (sage) After attaining enlightenment and becoming a saint, he opened up the world and returned to ruins with his hands folded, and all the people bowed their heads in awe. 2. Hunyuan Wujiluo Jinxian (the ultimate realm of saints) The sage is the ultimate, his Tao runs through the past and present, he can reshape chaos and reverse the world. 3. Detachment Jumping out of all avenues, time and space, and chaos, one thought creates and destroys chaos, which is supreme and supreme.