My Card Game System

Perhaps, you can add a little more intelligence to the monsters in the future, and try to write as little as possible and more dialogue between the protagonist and the monster. (Features of Yu-Gi-Oh! There is no way for women to be attractive. It's just a suggestion and has no other meaning)

The idea is great, and overall it is very good. I see that there is no one that I want to skip. The pace is slow. At present, the shaping of the supporting characters is relatively weak. Maybe it has not been written yet. It can be accelerated a little. The protagonist has the strength so far, but lacks the opportunity to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger. We can hurry up to the national competition, and in the national competition, we can extend some talents across the country, and also pave the way for the candidates to form a team later.

It can be seen that the author is a novice, and many parts are either classic content or a little bit fanciful. However, in this case, it can be seen that the author's ideas are very good. I personally like Beast Taming and Yu-Gi-Oh, so. Give it a five-star spoiler.

How to put it this way, it's quite interesting. Although the early plot is unbearable, just don't use the female protagonist. It can be said that the early plot is forced to fight because of this. There is also a male protagonist who can't stand it. He doesn't look like someone in his thirties. It's better to just write that he was an 18-year-old youth in his previous life. Specifically, the world view setting, summoning method and other things are not hard-coded. The real story has come out. Don't tell me he's really handsome.

Come on, come on, come on

I was so excited when I saw it later, it was so beautiful

Yu-Gi-Oh Realization is among the top three in Tomato

It feels pretty good, but the writing is basically DIY cards. The author can write more gco cards.

I suspect that I have been poisoned by the author. I have never read Yu-Gi-Oh, but now I want to play the game of Yu-Gi-Oh. Now I mainly want to read the novel. The author is too short. I have finished reading it.

The idea is great, but the plot feels very draggy.