This Is the World I Like, Save It Directly!

(Superior) Orange LV7, 36.25 Points/50 points First impression 150%: sense of substitution 4, attraction 3 Basic settings 75%: plug-in 4, setting 3 Content 125%: Writing 4, Creativity 4 Structure 75%: Rhythm 3, Main Line 3 Details 75%: Personality 5, Logic 3 Balance Penalty: None Highlights: official setting, protagonist's behavior Poison point: none Feelings: The description of the characters makes people feel comfortable, and the use of plug-ins is very good. It doesn't look like a new author. Calculation process: 1.5×7+1.25×8+0.75×21=36.25 Points ───────────────────

Although I don't know why the rating is low, it is particularly good in one aspect. The disadvantage is the contradiction of returning to the country. Normally speaking, when something like this happens in a big country, 300,000 people are dragged in. There is no point in concealing it. The second is the setting of combat power. The author should be a little hasty in writing, and only wrote three people in detail The protagonist, the male protagonist has a tyrannosaurus rex physique, and the female quantum physique is also known as Shenwei. Now there is a new cute guy with unlimited firepower. Part of it is a language problem. There is no interoperability system, but the protagonist can do everything. Anyway, the details may not be polished well, but the subject matter is OK and unlimited flow.

Overall, it's not bad. The protagonist's character is very likable, but he should be more sensible. Why do I feel like the author is getting more and more effeminate in his descriptions?

Is the warmth meant to preserve the protagonist's humanity? But one thing to say, I personally felt good about the first dungeon experience, but the subsequent character interactions in real life would feel a little awkward. I hope this kind of slap-in-the-face plot will never happen again. During the entire "Civilization Game", the time span is very large, and there are many dazzling and impressive ups and downs. The fewer such small storms, the higher the expectations for the tsunami. Therefore, I personally think that since it is a "civilization game", the focus should be on the dungeon, as well as the overall plot advancement and character growth after the dungeon. It would be better if there is less ink in this kind of reality.

Author, have you updated today? When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates. Author, have you updated today?

It looks good. It looks good. The setting of the savior is quite good. I don't know why I felt powerless at the beginning of the whole story, but the later part is really good! This book is still worth reading [laughter]

How can I put it, it's actually quite okay, but the second copy was too long and I was a bit tired. I initially thought of waiting for a while and then come back and continue reading after the second copy was finished. But it turned out that I waited for more than a month, and there were still dozens of chapters to go before I got to the third copy. I really lost interest in it (because there were too many jumps, and some things would not be connected). This book is rated this way mainly because of the second copy. Many people said this at the beginning, but the author said that it has a complete world view, and there are foreshadowings and so on, but... I just don't know how to describe it. After reading the three pictures of this copy, I feel a little tired, but there are still so many [face covering] After reading it... I'm so disappointed. I thought the protagonist would grow up after the second copy and shed his childishness and innocence... But just like a child, he never grows up. If the sword is the courage to move forward, and wisdom is the composure of strategizing, then the shield should be a steady and solid responsibility, but the protagonist... How should I put it... At least in terms of personality, it is not as consistent as expected. (Compared with the other two, it is also the least authoritative), and then there are... There are some loopholes, but they are innocuous, and the author has his own outline after all, so he will not point out. It is just a disappointment for the protagonist's character. It is a pity. If the protagonist's character is as thick and calm as the imagined "shield", you can kick me when it becomes the final backbone of someone, thank you.

Starting from the third game, I slowly began to add metaphorical sentences from primary school students, which were identified as AI expansion. It was quite good when there was none before. The main reason is that I am quite isolated when listening to books. I can skip it when reading, but it is not easy to jump when listening to books.

I can be considered one of the author's first readers. The only novel I reward is very good. Come on, author, and try to update ten times a day, otherwise don't blame me for canceling the five-star novel. It's rat tail juice!

It's wonderful. I don't know why, but all the apocalyptic stories on the market now are related to dark intrigues. I don't know, I thought I'd never experienced light and heat. It's quite good to write a warmer and less holy book like this.

It's very good-looking, very good-looking. It may not suit the appetite of some people, but it is a very good work for the public. I highly recommend it. I hope everyone will support it. I have finished reading this book and spent several hours reading it on another device!

It's great that I haven't seen anything unbearable so far. The setting is very good and the plot is quite good [Like]

I still think that there are some parts that I can't think deeply about, but for the current plot of about 40 chapters, it is considered a four-star high-quality food (we are also eating well). I'll see if there's a deeper analysis of the plot later in the comments. Maybe I ran away halfway, hehe~

When I first read a few pictures, I felt that the character of the protagonist was a bit soft. However, in the middle of the first dungeon, things got much better. The character set by the author was strong enough, and the protagonist became more confident when he gained strength. Moreover, the protagonist is also a little clever and can use his brain.

It can be regarded as writing the dream of a middle school student, traveling in different worlds one after another, saving civilizations one after another, and destroying the devil with like-minded partners through love, friendship and bonding. It's a pity that it was finished too quickly and it was a bit rushed. I feel like I can still write at least 4-5 copies.

This novel only has a score of 7.7, In my opinion it is at least a 9. The male protagonist has a positive outlook on life and is not toxic, the plot is original and innovative, and it is knife-free. I haven't finished it yet, but I don't have a knife at the moment, so it's pretty good. The ending was too sloppy, the Civilization game didn't say anything at the end.

It looks good. Come on, the author. I haven't seen this kind of subject for a long time. The writing is also good. There is basically no poisonous point.

It's very beautiful. The first copy was great. Personally, I think it would be around 8 points.

I can give it a 9.5 On a ten-point scale. The characters are well drawn. The plot is different from most copy-and-paste infinite streams. Each world is different (it feels like chasing a horror house in junior high school. At that time, I was looking forward to every update. This is to look forward to the next world). The disadvantage is that the ending is very abrupt (I think of Genniao, but Genniao left enough praise for ideals, but the ending of this book is very hasty)

The subject matter is rare, so it's okay to write about it.

The skills are novel, the subject matter is broad, and the ending in the protagonist's second copy is unexpected and surprising. This is a story about friendship, love and salvation [smile][snicker][note]

I love it with five stars. Although the author's descriptions are somewhat mediocre, and I'm weird for my age, I don't think it's toxic at all. For someone who can't get interested in reading just by looking at the title, it's worth five stars to read it [Adoration]

The invincible flow of Doomsday Civilization game, focusing on one cool thing

The writing and plot design are all top-notch, and the male protagonist's character is a bit innocent and childish. You may think he is a virgin at first, but after watching more, you will be infected by the male protagonist. This kind of person must exist in the end of the world, a veritable "savior"

Everything is fine so far. There is no obvious poison. I just want to see more. Author, please update as soon as possible.

The author wrote it carefully. Although it is a little bit poisonous and embarrassing, it is considered a golden legend in Tomato.

It's really good. The male protagonist can't be said to be the Holy Mother. He's quite kind, but not the Holy Mother. Oh, speaking of it, I've noticed that there are very few really kind male protagonists over the years. It's also strange to say that generally speaking, male protagonists are non-killing and decisive. I basically don't read it. I was stunned to finish this novel, and then the ending felt a bit rushed. This is okay, um, that's it.

A rare masterpiece among civilization games

It is a good article that integrates high-level skill description, upgrade flow, apocalypse, science fiction, micro-group portraits, macro, a smooth and not brainless plot, and good and stable characters. Hey, I almost missed it. It would be a pity for omnivorous people not to read it. Personally, I feel that the author's writing style is very good, with a bit of publishing flavor from an old bookworm [Thinking] In short, it is a very, very good-looking type to me.

It's great. It's a pity that the original version was cut off. I want to see a magical girl fight an evil monster!