About This Paradise Island

The two stories so far seem to have been well designed by the author. It feels like a lot of thought has been put into them, and the reading does not give the feeling of "why is it so far-fetched, so sudden". The writing is smooth, and there are "obvious" foreshadowings in daily life and games, which made me a little curious about the function of these things. Especially the identity and purpose of the male protagonist, the hope seen by the class teacher, and the disappointment of the cold-hearted woman. Will it have anything to do with it (it feels like nonsense, but it must have something to do with it). The look and feel is very good. It has a novel flavor that is different from other point-based death games. The writing is comfortable and not scary for the sake of horror (by the way, people die too often in the game, which weakens the role of points. At present, it seems that the cold-faced girl seems to use points to save her life). People who like it will like it very much. I hope the author can answer the question of whether Coco is his girlfriend. Although I also think the cold-faced girl is the leading female character (that is, the main character), I don't like the issue of non-specific feelings between men and women. This probably has nothing to do with the main line of reasoning. I hope I can answer it so that it can clarify some readers. (Writing this, I suddenly realized that this story could easily be a tragedy. I hope the author can also answer the question about the tone of the story.) For reference only.

The plot is exciting, the author's every copy is obviously logical, and the results are unexpected and reasonable. As a single female protagonist (Coco is 5 stars, not 2 stars), the novel is indeed a masterpiece. The male protagonist has a delicate character. I feel that the author has put a lot of effort into the male protagonist's character, and the plot is not out of the ordinary (the male protagonist sees the female protagonist as a master, and the female protagonist only cares about the male protagonist, which is a double strength) There are not many words in the dungeon tasks, and there is no sense of fragmentation like reading one dungeon before moving on to the next. It feels like a sparrow that is small but has all the internal organs. The total number of words in the short article is too small, not enough to read! Also, the number of readers is very small. I suggest the author to use more code. Come on [laughs]

So far it looks good! The interspersed daily life and the protagonist's gags indeed reduce or even eliminate the heaviness, but if he wants to express the heaviness later, the author will probably have to put some thought into it. Because I mostly listened to the book, the reading is a bit rough. The only problem I have right now is that some of the content and foreshadowing in the game are too dry. In order to preserve suspense, letting the protagonist mention something without explaining it and waiting for the subsequent revelations are also a bit blunt. Maybe I can find a better way to deal with it? Personally, I prefer books with single female protagonists or adding love lines as appropriate. When looking for books, I usually only look for books with single female protagonists. As for why... Well... The interaction between the protagonist and Yun Keke is not blunt or inexplicable at the moment, but I feel that Yun Keke's current strength is slightly different from what was described. If I remember correctly, the description of Yun Keke's strength at the beginning should be in the upper reaches (if I remember wrongly, just pretend I didn't say it), but it seems that Yun Keke is basically just a gunman-like existence now, and has not played any role in the game, which makes her current positioning very embarrassing. Although I said I'm looking for a single female protagonist, I don't really care who the female protagonist is. I just don't like the harem tendency, and I hate CP fights. I can't say I like or dislike Qin Guanmiao, but he is shaping up very well so far, and I hope he can continue to do so! (Finally, I would like to say that I really like the interaction between Wang Kai and Wen Yun👍🏻

It's good to read👍🏻. To be honest, this book is definitely one of the best among all the books I've read. It's just that it's not very eye-catching at the beginning, but after reading a few chapters, it's very interesting. Both the tasks and the plot are good.

To be honest, the subject matter is relatively new, so the characters are well created, and some plot reasoning, including the conception of the characters, does not say whether they are pure love, or whether they will have a harem, but the Coke sisters and Xiao Qin are indispensable. They are constantly dependent on each other for life and death, and establish a friendship that is above friendship and love. It is worth watching. Alas, can I still finish reading it in my lifetime?

Putting aside whether it is pure or pure love, the author's logic and writing skills are still good. The story is quite novel, and the several small units look very exciting. The world view is also very good. Why everyone is selected into the school and why some people seem to have lost part of their past memories are thought-provoking. Hopefully, as the protagonist grows up, these mysteries will be revealed. The main and supporting characters are also very vividly portrayed. Although the protagonist is very capable, he is not invincible. The supporting characters also have different personalities and are not overly stupid or evil just to complement the protagonist. (Oh, maybe Jiang Yi is more evil than them all) I must say here that Qin Guanmiao, Wang Kai, and Wen Yun are all super charming 🥰 🥰 (Although I haven't written much yet, some of the fragments are very heartwarming) As for the female character Yun Keke who currently has the most chapters and has the deepest emotional entanglement with the male protagonist, how should I put it? Although I have no interest in her, her complex emotional conflicts are also very interesting. As an ordinary person with some ability, on the one hand, she is willing to be a pawn to protect her sister. On the other hand, her feelings do not allow her to become just a pawn. She knows that Jiang Yi's protective behavior and provocative language are all fake, but she still wants to bet on whether there is any sincerity in his hesitation. (Alas, this girl, if you want to seize the opportunity of his wavering, you still have to consider what he needs. You have to be a useful person to him in order to maintain this relationship, or you can be more confident in protecting your sister) As the protagonist, Jiang Yi has an attractive personality and abilities. But his behavior makes people curious about what he has experienced before, why he wants to change, or what kind of person he wants to be. Looking forward to the author's revelation.

I still prefer evenly matched love. The male protagonist actually doesn't love Xiao Qin, but Coco just doesn't have any highlights. The emotional scenes feel like I'm flirting with you, and you happen to be flirted with by me. Deduct one star and give it four stars.

It took me a few days to catch up on the latest chapter. It looks good. The pace is just right for me, which is quite rare. Another thing is that the relationship between people is also very good. The interaction between the protagonist and the character is really very graphic 🤭 There are many plot twists, but it is still a bit difficult to show and achieve the effect. Overall, it is worth watching. Come on, author, come on^_^

The foreshadowing and several introductory levels in the front may be a bit boring, but there will be many small surprises later, and it requires a certain amount of patience and observation to discover the small details. Overall, it is relatively good, and I love it as a loyal fan.

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