Falling Iron: Searching for the Beast of the Heart in Ompharos

It's very interesting. I also like the story style, but can the author improve the characters a little? Don't add too much ambiguity between the male protagonist and other female characters. This will look very obscene and perverted. And can the author clarify whether there is a female protagonist? The plot is very interesting. I hope there will be less embarrassing and obscene plots.

It is rare to see a story that is not mainly about abstraction. However, the pace of the plot during the attack on Nanook is a bit fast. In fact, you can refer to Datongfeng and use the protagonist's talents to integrate the power of other fates to create a similar ultimate move and the iron tomb explodes. When the time comes, billions of years will come and go. How can a new look be born without death? Abandon this body and replace it with the fresh (west) wind, sweeping the sky and restoring the light years.

Don't you think the three of them look a lot like the three Yuexia brothers? Bai'e's counterpart is Kaz's highest combat power and leader, and Wamwu's noble warrior is his counterpart. The hero's counterpart, Ashidisi, is slightly weaker but is the brains of the team.

No, it's too hot to be naked😭Author When I read the title, I originally thought it was a Lily CP fanfic about Xia Die and Feng Jin, but after reading a little bit of the text, I realized why the female character is so ambiguous with the protagonist (well, the male character is also the same) and told me that it was a CP where the main character is Xia Die Feng Jin😭? Please don't trick people into coming in. Please change the label🏷️ It's too hot to be naked😭😭😭😭Sorry😭😭 I just want to read these two CPs😭I won't be a Lily Dolphin anymore😭I'll go to a website that specializes in fandom CPs next time😭wuwuwu But the text is okay, I just wish there were less swear words😭😭I beg you😭😭😭😭😭oooooooooooooooooooooooo Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh

When did you write the book? Backstabbed.

With careful psychological description, colorful characters, charming plot and interesting development, this work is one of the few good books I have seen in Beng Tie.

I guess the heroine in the first stage is Feng Jin, and the heroine in the later stage is Xia Die

Every character is full of life, full of emotions, but very real. I don't like to read sad stories, and I burst into tears while reading some passages, but I couldn't bear to put it down.

This book is really good, but why is there no rating? The rating of this book in my mind can reach 9.0 And above. As long as the author doesn't finish it or stop updating it, I will keep following it. Good luck to the author! Come on, author, don't give up. I've been chasing this book. You must keep writing!

This is the only book I hope has more female protagonists [face covering]

I think this book should be rated 9.0 Or above. It is very beautiful and a masterpiece of thinking, rationality, and emotion! ! ! ! ! [Like][Like][Like][Like]

Funny type

It was added to the bookshelf a long time ago and I only read it recently. The front part is very attractive, overall it is not bad and worth watching.

The CP is actually Feng Jin! So pretty! [Sending Hearts]

The content is rich, the logic is clear, and the characters are well created. There is no doubt that it will be five stars.

This book is okay, it's pretty good, why is the rating so low?

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Already laughed to death

I've read dozens of chapters, and it's pretty good. The plot is something I've never read before.

I really like this book, the content is wonderful, I can't put it down

Thank you to the author for keeping writing, it's beautiful😄😍

Not too bad [grievance], overall it's good

A book with stalks, sweets and knives, very suitable for consumption [smile][smile][smile][like][like][like] Judging from the scores, they are all 5, and there are a few 4s in Yuer. Why is it only 6.6 Points?

The rhythm is very clear, it is happy when it should be happy, and it is heavy when it should be heavy. There is no very happy performance when the scene is serious.

The characters are vividly depicted, with flesh and blood, and the story is vivid and agile. The plot is rigorous, the logic is clear, the words are sophisticated, the writing skills are solid, and the author is very useful.

It's quite good to watch, the plot is exciting, and there are always plots you can't think of. Enjoy it carefully.

This book is relatively easy to read, and the plot setting is relatively smooth.

I like this book very much. The plot is vivid and interesting, and the characters are described in detail.

The author is knowledgeable and knowledgeable, and writes in a way that makes you want to see the ending.

Each character has his own characteristics and vivid image. His actions are in line with his own personality and background. There are also some philosophies about life and dealing with things. It is a great book.