A Younger Sister's Love Is Always Encouraged by Her Older Sister

In fact, the real feeling is 3.5 Stars. The subject matter and the interaction between the two are very delicate. The only flaw is that the description of the Middle Adventure Club is too distracting. If the short story occasionally takes away chapters 8-10 from the two protagonists to describe small branches, it will make people feel very fragmented. It is recommended that chapters be marked in parentheses, so that people can skip reading without missing the interaction between peach branches, or add them to the extra chapter. I really like the sweet pet and pampering, it's very pretty.

It's quite good, but there are too many words in the variety show. If you don't like watching it, I just like to watch something sweet.

I really like the author's narrative style. It's like reading a script. The scenes, characters, lines, and emotions are all marked one by one. The plots are not necessarily consecutive, and the filming is arranged according to the timeline. The description of emotions is a bit shallow, and there are not many inner monologues, so it is difficult to feel the emotional changes between the characters. Including the extra story, it is difficult for me to understand how painful Sister Ding is when she is struggling, so that she keeps having dreams while living abroad, and I don't know how she handles the change in family love. It is a pity that there is no delicate description in this aspect. In terms of plot, I quite like the detective agency section. It is impressive and alarming, but it is quite abrupt for the main axis of the story and seems to have no effect on advancing the main plot. If Ting Yu is to be scared and go to sleep with Sister Ding, one or two episodes is actually enough. I selfishly feel that it can be written better. The description of the entertainment industry may be okay in the banquet part, but other parts are not very realistic, especially the description of public opinion, how different situations are handled, who handles them, and the means of handling them. If these are written well, people can be more involved in the plot, and only then can they feel Tingyu's status in the entertainment industry and the blessing of capital. Overall, the logic is smooth, the sentence structure is also very smooth, and the plot has no contradictions. It is quite clear and clear. The subject of pseudo-orthopedics is difficult to write, and it needs to describe the struggle of emotions and the change of moral concepts, so I think this novel has no merits and no faults, and it is pretty good.

It's very beautiful, quite mesmerizing.

It looks good. Good luck to the author. I just hope the updates won't be discontinued [Sending my heart]

Damn, oh, oh, oh, damn, why did I just discover such a beautiful book now?

Overall, the story progresses quickly, and the variety show in the middle has more descriptions and less emotional lines. However, the relationship between Cancan and Zhizhi is very sincere and makes people yearn for it.

It's a nice little sweet story, but Ling Xu was so sudden, I felt sorry for Jiang Min.

Give me five stars

It's okay, but there aren't many emotional lines. Basically, I'm just doing my career.