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The protagonist of this book is the villain, and it is a multi-character group portrait. In my eyes, the supporting characters are not just green leaves that set off the protagonist, but they are also the protagonists in their own world. Some of the main characters in the book will have exclusive verses designed based on their lives, abilities or stories. The content is long, the story is large, and the rhythm is tight. It is an excellent product for clearing away heat, relieving heat, reducing swelling and relieving pain, and passing the time. I will read the comment section when I have time, and if I think it is appropriate, I will comment on the book and remind you to update it.

I rarely give five stars, but as a newcomer, it's okay. I should encourage newcomers. The following is my personal opinion. 1. The rhythm is not well controlled 2. The author may not have written an outline, and there are many places where the logic does not make sense. 3. General characterization Then the writing style needs to be improved. The subject matter is my favorite type. I hope the author can work hard and pay attention first.

As far as the setting and heroine's character are concerned, I really like it. I think the better parts are: 1. The heroine does not put the main task on the competition. In many novel competitions, the competition is played from beginning to end. The heroine's team strength is too much. The competition does not mean much to her. She has her own goals, does not take the usual path, and breaks away from the cookie-cutter plot. It is good. 2. The character and style after the darkening are really good. Unlike other novels, under the cold and ruthless setting, there is a mother's heart. 3. The protagonist here is too high-level, and the ability of the heroine's team is too far away from that of the same level. Compared with those novels where after a long fight, the winner is decided with trump cards, the protagonist's character has not been lost. Not so good: It borrows too many plots and settings from animations. It's okay to borrow, but too much writing affects the perception, changes character names, blurs plot settings, super beast weapons are blurred into armors, weapons and machine spirits, which are relatively common things in novels. There is no difference between homonyms and namesakes. You can immediately tell which characters are borrowed from, making these characters that appear in your novel unique.

Very good, the heroine kills decisively, not the Holy Mother, I look forward to the male protagonist returning to the body, I want to see the heroine fight against the master [smirk] [smirk]

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It seems okay now. I don't know if the author can keep writing. I hope it won't stop updating. There are many characters, and the protagonist kills decisively. This book does not reduce intelligence, and everyone has their own characteristics. The author also wrote more than a dozen poems for these characters, which is much better than those mindless systematic novels. I don't understand why no one reads it. Author, please don't stop updating, please

I personally feel pretty good, it looks pretty good, I hope it won't stop updating [laughing]

The book is good and the heroine is decisive in killing, but no one read it

It was quite enjoyable to read, but it gave me a sense of amazement that the author wanted to write, and designed various copies, etc., But after reading it, it felt ordinary, not rich in emotion, and there was no special surprise.

I just like to kill for self-interest, support, support, support

The writing is good, I support the author and I hope the author can stick to it. The content is okay, but if there are too many descriptions by others, it could be shorter, and some unnecessary content could be skipped in two or three strokes.

A very good book, I hope the author can stick with it

Not bad, not bad. The heroine kills decisively and is not a virgin. The author is very good-looking and hopes to keep updating [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

This book is very well written. I have read too many other books of the same genre where the main character is just too pretentious or the Virgin is hard to watch. This book completely avoids the poisonous points and pursues them. The writing here is very good, and it is considered a good book in Koburi.

Very interesting, from the heroine's perspective! A wonderful novel with Goldfinger as the male protagonist

It's good-looking, and the heroine who kills so decisively is a joy to watch, and she's not brainless either.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The author is very nice! Come on

A very good villain novel

Hurry up, dark cool article

Looks good, support it

Come on, work hard to look good

It's okay. In the era when hydrology is everywhere, there are not many books with some content like this. But the data is really poor. I'm afraid that one day the author will run away in anger [laughing and crying]

It looks so good, why is the rating so low?

You can watch it, suitable for killing time

Very good group portrait article, I just remembered and forgot to comment. [Eat Melon] [Eat Melon] Why is no one watching?

All I can say is that it is very good, and the author is very considerate. He puts pictures and notes very carefully, making it easy to read.

Author, are you from dnf [laughing]

It's pretty cool, why is it rated so low?

Very nice, support it