After Transforming into a Fox Girl, She Becomes the Heroine's Servant at the Beginning

I've finished reading it. It's really sweet, and it's also very cruel. My little fox, the ending is a bit unexpected, it ended in this way, but I personally feel that there are more knives than sugar. My heart hurts after reading it. Come on, the author. I hope you can write more books.

I liked the early and middle stages of this book very much, and there was nothing to fault about it. But later on, the closer I get to the ending, the more uncomfortable I feel. Normally, people like me would feel lost after reading a book. This time, after reading a book with a not so good ending, I felt even more lost. The ending of this book is too fast. It tried to reach another good ending by jumping off a cliff. There is no buffer, and the final ending is also hasty. Although such a quick ending is a good ending, my heart is still stuck in the feelings of the previous chapters. I feel that the ending of this book is the ending of Knife. My inner feelings are still deeply stuck in those chapters of Knife, but overall I still like it. As for the topic of ending, I hope I can continue writing because I really like this novel. If the author sees it, I still hope to reply, and I still like to communicate more. Tell me, why do two people who love each other so much end up hurting each other so much?

What can I say, what I wrote earlier is really good. I always wanted to read it, but after writing it, it was okay that Yu escaped once and Shen just tortured me like this. I could barely read it. I escaped in the end, but later I was found and Hou Yu escaped and died that night. , I entered some kind of different space to watch the revolving door. After watching it, I returned to the previous timeline and started over with Shen. It was a little fast, and then suddenly, yes suddenly, I directly summarized in dozens or hundreds of words that I would get married five years later. No, I want to ask, what was the process? The process is "five years later"? ! I think it would be better to write dozens of chapters after this and describe the process, so if you want to eat something sweet, just see Yu running away, and if you want to eat a knife, just watch it before you escape and get caught back (because the sweetness in the back can be ignored, just get married in five years, no, that's it, old iron), so I gave the unwritten process in the back a "Emperor's Star".

It is a very attractive book, sadistic and sweet at the same time. The author has captured it just right. The reason why I only gave it four stars is the same as Su Nan's. I am afraid that the author will be proud. In short, it is great. 👍 Wrong typing, sorry, Su Yu. (Guilty) (Add a star as compensation)

The so-called beauty is just a handful of loess in the end. Dust returns to dust and dust returns to earth. Beautiful girls in heaven and earth are just like flowers. They are either trampled by the footsteps on the roadside, or they wither and grow old when time comes, turning into ugly fertilizer to nourish the earth.

It's good to watch, but after reading Chapter 70, I felt a little uncomfortable watching it, especially the plot after entering the cage. It had an indescribable feeling, but it was very good to watch. I hope it will be updated soon.

The heroine is very cute, and the plot is also very good. It can easily arouse the audience's interest in reading. It is a good book and deserves wide recommendation. The author please write more articles about lolita and yandere big sisters. I will always support you.

I have read more than 70 chapters now, and I feel pretty good. Now I will write a book review (I may add more after reading it) Although this book is relatively short, the author has a good grasp of the rhythm, and it is slightly sweet in the early stage (note that it is slightly) and there is a knife in the middle (the author of this knife is very good, even though the author is a new author, he can write this kind of plot to capture the readers' hearts, I think it is very good. I believe the author has put a lot of hard work into this knife, that is, the author has grasped something called the "knife point") In the later stage, the little fox and Shen should be written together But I saw that Chapter 70 describes Shen Zai's "crushing humanity" torture to the little fox. I personally think this is not conducive to writing the two together in the later period (the transition in the middle is difficult), but you can learn from Si Shui. She will scribble the next step after losing her memory to round out the content of the whole book. In short, it is recommended to write about the little fox leaving Shen to live on her own (after all, she may also have an image of a little princess similar to Tu Shanxue). In short, this book is very well written and captures the readers' joy and excitement. It's not easy for a new author to achieve this step. Come on author [blowing kiss]

In fact, the little fox had already died on that rainy night, and those memories were just fantasies when she was about to die. But I still hope that the author can change the story line again, that is, find the fox and resolve the conflict before spreading love.

It is still necessary to name the world view or reveal the general outline of the world at the beginning. Otherwise, it will be confusing and you will suddenly start to enter the daily line without a general understanding. After all, the novel is not a short video. If it is to be long-term, it is best not to make people feel too uncomfortable.

Two people who were so in love parted ways because of a small misunderstanding. Maybe it was God who saw the ending of the two of her. It was too tragic and gave her a chance to change the ending. She seized this hard-won opportunity and changed the extremely tragic ending. "Su Yu" and "Shen Zhao" may you be happy forever and never be separated.

I finished reading it in one night, and overall it was okay, but the ending felt too sudden, and there was no plot about chasing my wife in the crematorium, or was it very short? After all, the heroine was tortured as a pet for more than ten chapters. And although the ending is said to be bad, there is no foreshadowing, so after reading it again, it feels more reasonable. If the heroine runs out on her own, she will only be a slave in the context of this world view, or she will die from exhaustion. Looking forward to the author's new work.

Well, how should I put it? Their feelings are sincere. Real! Deep love is too selfish and too extreme. When she has nothing to do, she can show her heart to the heroine, but the heroine betrays her definition of love in her heart, and her hair will explode if she is in jail. However, Lao Shen is very tolerant, and the heroine will be forgiven as long as she doesn't do anything extreme. But there will be a small punishment (flirting). As long as they can accept this, Lao Su and Lao Shen will live happily! (Yes, that's it) To sum up, love (illness) goes both ways. No matter who we are, we can't get together. (In the final analysis, Lao Shen still doesn't regard Lao Su as a human being from the bottom of his heart, but he really loves him. Tsk, what an awkward person)

I finished reading it in two days. The plot is a little different from other regular abuse novels. The hasty ending is really unexpected, but as the author expected, if the plot continues to be written, it will get worse and worse. Popular mutual redemption is the normal ending. This ending directly imposes death and starts a new reincarnation. I personally think that I can write two more chapters in the end to detail the plot after the death of the protagonist. Although the tragedy will make this novel more natural and the score will probably be higher, I still like the sweet plot at the end. I think the final ending is also well written and quite in line with popular tastes. However, there are a lot of plots in the book that are not in line with IQ, which makes it look very dry and anxious. Finally, I look forward to the author's next new book (typing in the early morning may be a bit messy)

Super pretty! From the moment Su Yu was auctioned, she was nervous, worried, and uncomfortable all the way. Finally, when she saw the words "I do" at the wedding, everyone breathed a sigh of relief. Shen Zhao's yandere, Ning Yao's protection, Xiao Cheng's persistence - every character has flesh and blood. Although I was severely injured in the middle (especially the part where Su Yu was in the heavy rain), the ending was HE and it was worth it!

How can I put it, the chase is over, but can you not be so knifed in the end? It feels like you played with the knife and sealed the wound with glue. It seems to be a good ending. Alas, although I like to watch Lily's pure sadomasochism, I hope this ending can be changed. Although the author may not be able to see me, but because I like this story better, I was very itchy in the last 40 chapters because I had to go to school at five o'clock tomorrow morning, so I finished reading it. That's the ending. Alas, editor, cheers @1Ayi I hope you can read it [crying] [crying] [crying]

Please be, it's so painful to watch, so suffocating [covers face]

I still like the first 70 chapters, but I was really heartbroken at the end and cried while reading it. Can the author clear up the misunderstanding quickly? ! ! I'm really going to die. It makes me so uncomfortable [crying][crying][crying][crying]. I originally wanted to give it four stars, but I really enjoyed the first 70 chapters.

I think the ending is a bit cliché, and it might be all Su Yu's imagination in the end (but the ending in the book may also be based on her own imagination or brainstorming, it's all personal reasons anyway), but this book is pretty good.

Overall, it's actually quite good, but the ending is too hasty. The type of novel is actually okay. The author can refer to other similar novels for inspiration (orange) [Blow kiss]

The non-standard ending is also quite good. I think that by going back in time, Su Yu can be changed to another timeline and get the memory of this tragic timeline. The magic of quantum entanglement creates a happy reunion in another timeline, instead of the same Su Yu in Shen Zhao's revolving door. After being enlightened and going back to the past, I can forget all the hurt. I feel that this is the separation of the character's personality, but readers always stand up and talk without pain. If I were to write it, I may not be able to write better than the author. Come on, author, I hope you can write better in the next book [Like]!

It's very good. It's very sweet in the early stage and a bit rough in the middle. It keeps running away until the end. But the ending is a little too fast. There is still a lot of foreshadowing and suspense at the end that is not perfect. Well, although it is a bit unfinished, the content is very good.

Very beautiful, highly recommended [like]

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch Very well done, looking forward to the next book

I finished reading it in the middle of the night, and the ending was a bit sudden... I thought about any ending, but I didn't expect it to be like this, but it is still a good ending. I used to hate Lily a little, but after reading it, I had other ideas. After reading it, I also imagined other endings for them.

I don't have much to say except that it's very beautiful.

It's very interesting. Good luck to the author. Be happy every day! [Laughing][laughing]

A very nice book 🍑Xiao Huang Shu

Very good looking

The front was fine, but the misunderstanding at the back was really something I didn't understand how to resolve.