From Basic Swordsmanship to Swordsmanship in Xiaoaozhi

First let me talk about my current feelings after reading it. It is definitely a good book, but the current rating is too low. The author breaks the convention of taking the Five Mountains, Shaolin and Wudang as the core perspective when traveling through Swordsman. He no longer sticks to the well-known figures from various factions in the original work. Instead, he focuses on Lin Ping's personal growth. Although he draws on the clichéd method of obtaining the Double Ninth Festival inscriptions in ancient tombs from other books, It has a clichéd martial arts scene with Yang Guo and Dugu Qiufei, but overall it still gives people a feeling of being parallel to the world of Swordsman. It reasonably imagines and supplements the deliberately vague court and other Jianghu backgrounds in the original work. I don't know what other readers will think of this, but it does surprise me. I am looking forward to the development of the next story. I don't want Lin Pingzhi to be involved in the world of Swordsman soon, and I also want to see if he has an updated story. However, as an important character in the original book, based on age and timeline, and the Lin family's evil-proofing swordsmanship as an important story clue in the original work, Lin Pingzhi will sooner or later come into contact with various characters in the original work. I don't know how the author intends to portray them, and whether there will be a different interpretation. Looking forward to…

The writing is good, and the training and fighting are particularly exciting, but his character is too soft, and he always shows mercy to the bandits who want to torture and kill him. Then, there are more and more enemies of first- and second-rate masters, and they are so powerful that they are almost unable to defeat him. If he is exposed, he is Lin Pingzhi, and the escorts of Fuwei Escort Agency will not survive.

The structure is clear and the content is substantial. It starts with the smiling character, but it takes a completely different path. It not only eliminates the need to supplement the background of the protagonist, but is also very different from other fan fictions that are the same. It is in line with my reading preferences and is a good book.

It is a very simple writing style and has a good outlook on life. It has not been affected by some of the current black posts, engaging in extreme "killing and decisiveness", crazy dissing of Linghu and other original characters... It's just too slow to pick up. I looked at the table of contents and saw that it's more of a derivative than a fanfic. It's almost a million words into the fifth volume before we get to the main text!

The writing is indeed good, and the story is chivalrous. I feel that the biggest shortcoming of "Swordsman" is that there is no knight in the world. In other works, no matter other "Zhao Sao" or "Killing", I feel that something is missing. It is well written like this. I hope there will be a different ending.

Among the time-travel martial arts novels, it is more brilliantly written and more enjoyable to read. Without Lin Pingzhi's description of family affection, he is not a stone monkey, he has a father and a mother. If you control the tempo and slow down, I think it will be great.

The growth path is well written. It didn't give me the feeling that it suddenly became strong. There is basically no emotion between men and women. I just saw a picture and suddenly thought of the heroine. This part didn't feel very good. When I was four or five hundred pictures, I suddenly felt that the rhythm was a little wrong, but I didn't know what was wrong. The fighting felt quite satisfactory. After all, this thing is difficult to write. As for the plot, you don't make the protagonist too busy. You have nothing to teach the disciples. You don't have to write poems to drink and chat with a group of talented people. , You don't have to show off, just share your theories with each other, and keep going.

The author's writing style is very good. It has a sense of chivalry and the relationship between people. The background of each character is very reasonable and not delayed. Naturally, the plot progress is too slow, but by now, the protagonist can be said to be able to stand alone. He has the initial ability to protect himself, and his mind is clear, and the goal is certain. All that is left is to find tricks and overcome all difficulties. The next plot, I hope it will still be exciting.

Although there are flaws and some details are problematic, the logic is basically reasonable, there are no cheats, and the plot advances naturally. It is still a qualified traditional martial arts novel, which is more comfortable to read than many novels.

Except for a little bit of ink stains, it looks better than most of Tomato's martial arts fan novels. I look forward to the author's next content.

The writing style is like a traditional martial arts novel. Very comfortable to read. The rhythm is also good, and you don't become a top player all of a sudden. What's a little bit poisonous is that at first he was not very good at martial arts and was hunted by a bunch of people. He insisted on using the same fake name and appearance, and then he was hunted endlessly for more than 200 chapters.

The writing is very good, it is fair and peaceful, and it is really good to watch it become stronger little by little. I hope that I can create a new martial arts school in the future and bring forth the new. The rating of 6.6 Is too low. A rating of 8.3 Would be considered normal if you start with it. Come on, author.

The novel is different from others. It is no longer a simple matter of learning magical skills or killing people and upgrading, but also incorporates many of the author's martial arts thoughts. It's equivalent to practicing while creating gong. It's not like ordinary novels that mechanically sew together a bunch of magical features to create their own martial arts. It also combines elements of internal martial arts without exaggerating internal martial arts or internal martial arts. It's an organic combination. The biggest feature of this article is that the various martial arts are integrated very well and are comfortable to watch. Unlike others, it feels like you simply learn a bunch of martial arts and then superimpose the characteristics to become powerful. It is a stitched martial arts. Even if Linghu Chong is like this in the original text, I still think it's unreasonable to keep suppressing the protagonist's internal strength and defeat the master through swordsmanship. Internal strength should not only double a person's martial arts skills, which is equivalent to greater strength, but also improve a person's physical attributes, at least the speed and strength are certain. If your internal strength is completely lost or the gap is too big, it will be useless no matter how good your swordsmanship skills are! If you can't keep up with the speed, and you don't have the strength to block and offload, how can you win? Just like the four-liang movement of a thousand pounds in Tai Chi, it also requires the strength of a thousand pounds to be used. The author said that it has been ten years, so it is appropriate to extend the protagonist's training timeline and enter the world a few more times. It is most reasonable to practice at different levels for several years each time. It is more reasonable to give the protagonist a little more time to practice, especially internal strength, which requires time to accumulate. Just like a few years after a journey in the world of martial arts, it would be enough to describe the gains of the past few years. It's not like now that Xiaobai became invincible in just two years.

Well written! The rating is a bit low. It's a bit of a traditional martial arts slow-burning growth story. The martial arts is relatively detailed, and it's not like those bad street routines that are exciting. It should be a 9 points in the early stage. If you have the desire to read it, I will comment after reading it.

This book is very good, and the plot and rhythm are good. Although I like Swordsman fanfic, I feel like you are a little shortchanged by writing a fanfic.

Excellent traditional martial arts! If it weren't for the setting of Swordsman, this work might be even better. Imposing Lin Pingzhi's identity would be a constraint.

I prefer this kind of step-by-step work, come on

Yes, there is one more martial arts book that you can read. So far, this is the second book I have found on this platform. After reading half of the previous one, I started to get hooked. I hope this one will keep up.

It doesn't rely on the original work. The plot and martial arts are both creative. It should score above 8 points.

Very innovative and unconventional. The angle is very special.

The author has profound writing skills, the plot is smooth and the main line is clear. It is a rare masterpiece of fan fiction. I hope to finish it.

It's really well written, unsystematic, not exaggerated, and has rich plots.

The logic of the novel is clear, and many of the martial arts principles mentioned in it are of great reference value and are in line with the direction of real thinking. Many of the contents, including the combination of modern and ancient times, are of high reference value. I personally like it very much.

In the beginning, it was Lin Pingzhi's coming-of-age story. Although it had little to do with the original work, it was still very exciting. The plot of the original work will not unfold until more than 300 chapters later. The male protagonist is clear-headed and decisive in killing. It is very refreshing to read. His relationship with Yue Lingshan is also pure and dedicated, which makes people heart-throb. The portrayal of Dongfang Bubai is even more unexpected and eye-catching. Five stars, I hope the author keeps his views correct.

The description of the scene is clean and neat, not complicated, I like it very much, it's just fun.

Compared to other Xiaoao fans, this is top notch

The logic is reasonable. I like not to rely on the system or chance encounters, but to work hard to become a master.

A world of flesh and blood, great!

It's not bad, it's not an invincible style. Especially the main character's own martial arts creation is also well written.

If it doesn't collapse in the later stage, this is the magic book in Internet fan fiction! ! ! Highly recommended