After Dismantling Long Aotian's Harem, She Was Targeted by the Eldest Princess

The writing can be considered an A grade among tomatoes, fine chaff. The early stage of the plot has a tight rhythm, mainly following the main line of the system. Lin Xi has never had any enlightenment in the past life, and has never even seen Lazi. If he doesn't really push forward, he doesn't know how many chapters he will write [full]. The emotional line is slow and delicate. The two people reach the same goal by different paths, so even if they have zero communication, they will always intersect. The feeling of being in tune with each other is very touching. I personally like this kind of emotional advancement. Possible demining: ① The original male protagonist Long Aotian is not allowed to be killed directly because he is destined to weaken his luck. But the problem is that he has upgraded his luck by sucking people's essence and blood, and has harmed many innocent women. Later, he was exposed, so the man was in a panic (if you ask why Heaven would protect a bloodthirsty demon, of course it is the Heaven of male videos) ② The writing is extremely cruel, with conflicting text and continuous low-level mistakes. This is understandable, so just ignore it. Oh, and here's another purely personal complaint: This Deputy CP Second Senior Sister is extremely awkward, has low self-esteem, and even runs away after sleeping with someone. People like this would be locked up and killed in our village [laughs] Although I loved this kind of literature when I was in high school, and I even have this kind of virtue myself (sure enough, what people look at themselves when they look back now is pretty much the same [laughs]) The villain's IQ is considered online, and I guess the author thought it was not fun to have full field of view, so he disabled the system's monitoring of Long Aotian, haha. Therefore, the struggle between the two sides can be regarded as back-and-forth. Seen this way, it also has the meaning of a Machiavellian text (if low-level mistakes are not used to achieve the progress of the protagonist's dismounting, I will rate this book higher)

It looks good, the plots are intertwined, I feel like the author has written other books [laughing] I look forward to the next plot development, and I also look forward to the early resolution of the misunderstanding between the senior sister and the saint, as well as the emotional development of Dr. Xiaolin and Princess Chu.

This book is good to read. The author's writing style is very good. The plot and characters are very good. Although there are quite few chapters, each chapter is very important. The rhythm is very tight. The career line is the main line and the emotional line is supplemented. It is quite clear. Maybe the closest relationship is the pair of the second senior sister and the saint. In fact, the author is very suitable for writing this kind of writing. It is quite interesting. Main character CP has the kind of long-flowing feeling. The most intimate thing in the whole story is kissing a mole (okay). This book should be better read as a full-length novel. The plot is like this. The male protagonist Long Aotian is very careless in his name and his death is also very careless. Compared with other male protagonists of this type, his IQ is okay, although not much. The years to come will be a good time in the world.

The author's writing style is very good, the plot is compact, and each crisis plot is also well written. However, I feel that the end of each chapter is too summary, and the transition can be more natural. After all, it is a whole novel, and the nodes do not need to be too clear. Each character is three-dimensional and distinct, the emotions progress naturally, and the intention is very correct. There are really few novels like this in Tomato. Although the content does not focus on the emotional line, their bond is destined from the moment they meet. I really like it, it's like a breath of fresh air. Readers who like to watch dual heroines should not miss it hahaha.

Dear author, when will Lin Xi lose his vest? Looking forward to it

I declare that this is a Tomato novel with two female protagonists. The writing style is top notch. The writing style is really good. It shows that the author is very educated. The plot has a main line, and the transition is natural [like] a very classic novel writing method. Tomato is lucky to have this kind of author and this kind of writing. Moreover, the characters of the heroines did not collapse from the beginning to the end, and they were online throughout the whole process. This is very good and not easy, because there are too many novels written about two heroines who will "collapse for their lovers." If you read this novel, and those who commented with me, don't hesitate to read it. However, their relationship is slow and steady, so if you are looking for a fast pace, it may not be suitable for you to watch.

I am actually not fascinated by the cook at all. I am just playing a game with the cook. I pretend to be fascinated by the chef. In fact, this is all part of my plan. Everything is going according to plan. Don't tell me. I actually have my own plan. Of course I know that the cook is fishing for me, but I also have my own plan when I take the bait. Don't disturb me. I have my own sense of proportion. Teacher, can you play a game where you pretend to be the first one, but then suddenly post all the subsequent ones together to scare us [shy][shy][shy]

Very pretty. The development of the plot and story is quite good, Xiao Longzi is really... A typical old war god with a crooked mouth and a bad coward. But in terms of relationship development, I prefer the senior sister and the saint, they are more compatible. Lin Xi and the princess have been developing around the plot. Compared with pure love, they also have comradeship, which is more natural. Love is not the most important thing between them, but they are each other's indispensable comrades.

Nice! Double strength! The heroine is amazing! When I see the description of the heroine's appearance, I always think that the "unpaid Mr. Crab" on DY is really beautiful! I can't wait to review it before I finish reading it. What a great book! I should be able to score more than eight points. I don't know why it's only seven points. The plot settings are very good! Recommended [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss] It's just that the main CP has very little interaction.

The writing style is very good, it is considered top level. The score should be 9.5 Or above. It seems that there are really many buried treasures in the articles with 7-8 points. For me personally, the only shortcoming is that the emotional scenes between the two heroines are a bit less, and the secondary CP is a bit too much. For people like me who only read the main CP, many chapters have been skipped. It would be more satisfying if these chapters were all about the main CP [crying]

It's a cool article, I'm happy anyway

It's pretty. Come on.

The writing is very good and the plot is good

I feel it was well written, [shy][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

If it's not enough, it will be done in one day

Keep up the good work, author!

I can't stand it anymore! The article is finished and the writing is good, but no one has read it yet [laughs awkwardly] Children are actually the most useful system in history and we can be saved [laughs]

It's very interesting to watch, it's thrilling and thrilling, the bad guy subdues the law, the two heroines, the princess and the doctor, are sweet together, the deputy CP, the saint and the second senior sister are also very cute😄

The author's writing is good, and the plots are interlocking and not obtrusive. The plot is the main thing and the emotions are supplementary. However, the relationship between the two heroines before was also smooth and smooth. I highly recommend it.

The plot and characters are good, but the emotional scenes feel weird.

The author writes very carefully!

Okay, both the main and deputy CPs are so sweet.

Very nice short story

It feels like listening to someone telling a story.

[Laughing evilly] Senior sister is so annoying, I can only understand it but cannot express it [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Since I replayed the 94 version of the Three Kingdoms, I now see that the people in it are making all kinds of gestures [covering their faces], and I always subconsciously think that they have to raise their hands and say "please".

I like the heroine's character, and their identities also poke me.

Delicious😋Teacher, come on, it's super healthy [sending heartfelt wishes]

There are some minor flaws, but they don't outweigh the flaws and it's worth a look.

The plot is compact and the word count is short, but there are too few posts. It made me so anxious that I wanted to arrange a wedding bed for her immediately. The author needs more posts in the next novel!