The Night Will Last Forever, I Will Walk with the Light in the World

Overall, this book is good. Except for the part in the middle where he keeps talking about Tuan Tuan and becomes more and more enthusiastic, this book is not bad. It has swords and humor, but it also has a lot of foreshadowing. Maybe it is another bright moon of Tomato City Gaowu? Advantages and Disadvantages: Advantages: ①Everyone is perfectly portrayed, whether it is the protagonist, his brother or a passerby (of course, it may be written just for the protagonist to form a team), but it is undeniable that the author does describe each character very well, whether it is the old man at the school gate or the captain of the team at the beginning. ②The rhythm is well grasped. At present, the rhythm is quite comfortable. Let's take a look at the author's arrangements later. Disadvantages: ①I know you want to regard Tuantuan's death as paving the way for the future, but it's very tiring to mention it repeatedly in the middle. ②There is a problem with combat power❓You dare not fight a level 9 villain against a level 7 villain? Even if she has a psychological shadow and there are team members next to her, you don't dare to fight one level seven plus a few level five? Isn't the Vietnam War getting too cruel? You should still play the same trick with me. If you don't enter any realm, you're just a child fighting? I have personally summarized the pros and cons. At present, there are more than 70 chapters, and it seems to be quite good except for the two points mentioned above. The author probably has an outline and is not afraid of eunuchs and bad endings. It is just a new book, so it may be a bit uncomfortable to read. And the last point is that it's a rookie. Why don't you put the label that should be attached? For example, whether there is a female protagonist or not,

It's pretty good, but it's a bit like killing a god.

This book has great potential. I feel that such a subject matter is still very interesting. At present, the villain is not necessarily a villain. It is likely that the protagonist and his brother from another time and space came to save him. In order to change the established tragedy in the future, I hope the author will continue writing (currently updated to 156)

I have some ideas to guess, Black Flame should be the male protagonist's brother (different timeline), and then Dawn and the Shrine should be the male protagonist's believers. The two went through many cycles, but still failed, and then the male protagonist's brother returned to the beginning of the story... If there is any mistake, it will be deleted.

I quite like it. Now it seems that it is a decent one. It is a pity that it is not a villain. I like to eat knives. They all have brains. There is no stupidity or ambiguity. The description of women is really good! It makes me feel comfortable even though I usually want to run when I see a woman when reading an article. Still no CP, this article is so fragrant. Summary: There is brains, no ambiguity, the description of women is okay, and there is a little knife (I love to eat, I eat eat eat eat)

The setting of oracles and spiritual oracles is a bit like the ruins of gods and forbidden ruins. But the book is very nice.

The writing is good, much better than other writings that are verbose and pretentious.

Beautiful, highly recommended

Very beautiful! (I can't write a review of a book, but it's very good to read) Beautiful! ! !

This book is really well written and is a breath of fresh air in Tomato. It's no longer the system, the girlfriend broke up and started, haha. Come on, author.

Five stars, if there is no heroine, I will look forward to friendship on the battlefield [laughs]

It's really beautiful.

Can't speak, but looks good

Haokanghaokang[shy][shy]bianzanshen

The style is similar to that of Zhan Shen, and the author's writing style is quite good.

Why do you want me to see this book when it only has a hundred or so pictures [crazy]

Not to mention, not brainless, knife, passionate, immersive and comfortable

It's pretty, pretty good. After looking at these dozens of photos, it seems like they don't have a female protagonist.

It looks good, and I look forward to the follow-up development. Great support from the author [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]

I really like the protagonist's character

Hao chopped off the tire, Hao chopped it off

So pretty, so pretty

Very good looking very good looking

Really pretty

Super super pretty

I have read so many books, this one is really good

It's still ok, a good book

It's very interesting. I hope this book becomes a big hitヽ(≧Д≦)ノ

It's a bit like killing a god! Very nice! !