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I signed a contract today, secretly give myself a five-star, hehe

The writing is good, it's detailed where it should be, and overall it's more joyful, with a lot of foreshadowing, and the characters are delicately drawn. I don't really like the Yamao part though, it's a bit OOC, but overall it's worth watching (it's also astringent where it should be, I'm on horseback eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating eating.

Good, I just found out about Maomao Bento. The salt I lost from crying through tears came to you and I made up for it with sugar.

Generally speaking, it is a good work. The author's writing style is very stable and the plot is very smooth. Most people who don't read the plot should be able to understand it. The main problem is the emotional line. This book has written more than 100 chapters. The relationship between the male and female protagonists always feels the same as in the first chapter. On the contrary, before the emotional development of other female characters develops naturally, I saw someone pointed out that there is something wrong with the writing. The article only repeatedly emphasizes that the male and female protagonists have special feelings, but it is difficult for me to see progress in the relationship between the male and female protagonists. It is now Chapter 182. The emotional line has obviously improved a lot. It seems that this Shura Field basically has multiple female protagonists. I can see that the author is also willing to interact with readers. I hope the author can write this kind of emotional line well. I am sure many people will not buy it. I have also started to see it since Chapter 40. The quality of the author's articles has changed from the roadside to the excellent. I am still very pleased. I am very obsessed with the new one. When I read 182, I had already forgotten what was in front of it.

I was originally going to give it 3 stars, but Lao Maoha gave me one star, and the delicate writing style gave me another one.

The writing is still good. Although the sweet ending is good, I still want to see the knife. After all, it feels like the author has buried a lot of foreshadowing. Of course, the final ending must be good! ! !

Author, please update soon, otherwise I will sleep with your cat in my arms [laughing evilly]

The author is so short. I hope there aren't too many knives. I feel like there are a lot of foreshadowings.

There are very few topics and they are relatively new, but the author is Maomaotui, five stars.

It's really good-looking. There are so few single-female female protagonists in Cats. It's 99% rare [laughs]

Not bad, not bad, the characters are well highlighted and restored, which is more in line with my taste [face covering]

Please write Saifir for the rest of your life! Wow Darcy can do anything!

Like, well written

Good book, Haomao, good-looking [like][like]

Increase the presence of enemies

Overall, it doesn't seem to have any major flaws. The relationship between the male protagonist and Saifeier is very well written. Overall, it's a masterpiece for me personally. I read the introduction and then read the comments written by the author. Is there a big sword in the back? Just wait, I can accept the plot with both swords and sweetness, as long as the ending is not a bad one.

Very nice to look at. The plot is smooth and the emotional line could be improved. I'm really looking forward to the author's progress.

It's beautiful, the emotions are described in detail, I look forward to the follow-up

Get up quickly and code! ! ! [Angry][angry][angry][angry]

I was forced by the leader of the little boys and girls group to post a comment [crying]

Looks good, looks good, but my Adam's apple appears too many times

Come on, author, if you have cats, you must keep writing.

Maomao, Aya's cat. Could the author please stop using Aya and Maomao to stab me? What I want to see is not this mouth!

A masterpiece, an absolute masterpiece! ! !

Beautiful, well written

The writing is very delicate The interaction between the male protagonist and Polycia is very interesting, but it's a pity that Maomao single recommended it, but it's not bad, but I still feel it's a pity

Good-looking, good-looking, not enough

Come on, I believe in your quality [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Could you please give me more? The author is great

Full of fainting, full of fainting, must be full of fainting